My Sprite Comic Gallery

DarkGreg

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    Here are all my sprite comics:
    Season 1 The Beginning
    Comic 1 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite1.bmp
    Comic 2 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite2.bmp
    Comic 3 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite3.bmp
    Comic 4 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite4.bmp
    Comic 5 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite5.bmp
    Comic 6 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite6.bmp
    Comic 7 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite7.bmp
    Comic 8 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite8.bmp
    Comic 9 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite9.bmp
    Comic 10 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite10.bmp
    Comic 11 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite11.bmp
    Comic 12 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite12.bmp
    Season 2 Pewter City
    Comic 13 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2013.bmp
    Comic 14 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2014.bmp
    Comic 15 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2015.bmp
    Comic 16 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2016.bmp
    Comic 17 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2017.bmp
    Comic 18 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2018.bmp



    All comments are welcome.If anyone wants to offer sprites I will use them and I'll put them on my avatar.

    Credits:
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    Sunflorazumarill
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    You might want to draw lines to the person who says it... or give a character there own text colour.
     
    Seems okay for a start, but... um... Punctuation? Hello? The grammar seems a little off. Plus, I'd reccommend using panels instead of the whole town, especially when you only use one speech bubble. You could probably put a lot more story in if you broke it up into smaller bits.

    If you understood a word of that, congrats!
     
    Hmm... Pretty Good For Beginner... But There Is Some Problems. What Is The Plot? And Text Is Too Big. Make It Smaller. And In Comic 10 There Is Some Black Stuff Around The Speech Bubbles. You Also Used Default Paint Colors To Make Effects. Make Your Own Colors.

    4/10
     
    Umm...Croc, please actually try listenign to the advice of others. You are using the whole town for a comic, try making them to panel. Also get better font and speech bubbles. Make mroe screens other than one.

    6/10

    [PokeCommunity.com] My Sprite Comic Gallery
     
    I've been wondering about how to get panels, can someone tell me how to make them.
     
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    well it's alright i guess but you really shoud do pannels it shows a bit of lazyness if you don't. Oh and just so ou know the fie you save in (BMP) takes quite a long time to load so maybe save in PNG
     
    I got a character you can put in the comic!

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    Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this:

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    You should have a comic where she does that.

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    And here's her overworld and backsprites.

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    Here's a set of Sunflorazumarill overworlds amydamuffinlady did.

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    Here's an alternate Sunkarill (Sunflorazumarill's prevolution) sprite.
     
    Croc055 said:
    I can do what I like ZephryPlusle
    Click to expand...

    People do actually give you criticism to help you look back on the flaws stated and help you improve on them. So I'd suggest you take ZephyrPlusle's critic on your work to consideration and use it to help you in anyway possible.
     
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