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Poke-con

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♥Naomi♥

My gameboy tastes like pickles
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    my first of(i hope)series of sprite comics!
    and ill admit,the first comic is like pokechow,i couldnt resist,i love pokechow comics! ^.^
    01-Stars
    02-Beds?
    03-Mew?

    Naomi:her mom made her grow her hair out,and dye it pink...but she thought she grabed the black hair dye XD she is freinds with Brendan,who lives next door.gets on to her mom for buying stars/starpieces,then smelling them repetadly.she likes keys for some reson..and shiney trash....XD

    Naomi's mom:her mom gets high off of stars/starpieces that randomly drop into town,but she buys them from mossdeep for sum odd reson XD she isnt really important

    Brendan:bendan relly changed his attitude with pokemon,he just eats at pokecenters and sleeps there too,cuz he thinks his mom made him go on that adventure just to get him out of the house XD he let go most of his strong pokemon sept his kawaii flygon!

    want to affiliate comics? just put this in your comic page/sig.
    [PokeCommunity.com] Poke-con



    affiliaties:[PokeCommunity.com] Poke-con
     
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    I don't get it. 0-0
    There could be better sprite editing. Can't really say much until there are more.
     
    Th main character's hair looks very mono-tone. When I see more I'll be able to say more.
     
    i dont know wut to give it, the edited overworlds dont look perfect and wuts the story
    2/10
     
    lol,ok,usually,my sprite comic dont really have any true meaning,ill make a new one today,ok,i guess i should update a story line...

    and i know the hair looks a little mono tone,but i swear i didnt use paints colors!

    Naomi:her mom made her grow her hair out,and dye it pink...but she thought she grabed the black hair dye XD she is freinds with Brendan,who lives next door.gets on to her mom for buying stars/starpieces,then smelling them repetadly.she likes keys for some reson..and shiney trash....XD

    Naomi's mom:her mom gets high off of stars/starpieces that randomly drop into town,but she buys them from mossdeep for sum odd reson XD she isnt really important

    Brendan:bendan relly changed his attitude with pokemon,he just eats at pokecenters and sleeps there too,cuz he thinks his mom made him go on that adventure just to get him out of the house XD he let go most of his strong pokemon sept his kawaii flygon!
     
    You know, you could do a comic like Goatman's likitoung comic. It was Random, but instead you could combine a journey with randomness...
     
    Hero's mother gets high on star pieces?! That wasn't a rip off from Pokechow was it?

    The comic seems random nand bland, no offence.
     
    cool comic i like it but to plain make it more exciting
     
    Komo said:
    new episode!
    03-Mew?
    please give me some crits so i can improve!
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    Seems a little messy. But OK nonetheless.
    Want to affiliate comics?
     
    thanks for the comments!yeah,as the comic goes on,the story line will improve and youll be able to understand it better.

    sure blizzara,ill affiliate comics ^_^

    edit:in comic 03,nurse joy is on coffe break XD
     
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    Okay, I have your banner up, if mine's not up within 7 days I'll be taking it down.
     
    Not bad. Short little comics and slightly amusing. The comedy could be improved, but we'll see how these continue to build off each other. o.O
     
    Would you care to use a more readable font?
    It's way too small and the font itself is just hard on the eyes, too.
     
    Smarties-kun said:
    Would you care to use a more readable font?
    It's way too small and the font itself is just hard on the eyes, too.
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    do you have any suggestions what font to use?
    it was getting hard on my eyes to make too(custom font)
     
    Houndoom1 said:
    Nice comic! Are these just random vcomics or will a plot unfold later in the story?
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    a plot should come out soon,its just,kinda hard to see right now lol XD
     
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