Yami86
Speedy Speed Boy!!!
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- Age 38
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- Seen Oct 5, 2006
Disclaimer: Pokemon is belongs to it's respective owners, Nintendo, Gamefreak and 4 Kids entertainment. Yu-Gi-Oh and the Trading Card Game belong to Konami and Upper Deck Entertainment. This fanfiction was written for recreational purposes. No copyright is intended.
"talk" - Normal speech
think - Thoughts
//blah blah// and \\blah blah\\ - telepathy
[random stuff] - pokemon speech
<yap yap yap> good conscience
>woof woof woof< evil conscience
Setting: The setting for this story is different to your standard Kanto, Johto and Hoenn Leagues. This League is called the Cosmo League, and there some differences to the normal three (just to make it a little realistic). Aspiring trainers can begin their journey at two points of their life: beginning at high school (before 7th grade starts, 11-12 years old) and upon graduation (finishing 12th grade, 17-18 years old). Those who start at 11-12 don't attend high school, however there is a condition that is put upon them. As well as a pokedex, trainers of this age are given an E-book. Every day, school notes and homework are downloaded into the E-Book. It's up to them to read these notes and do the homework, because every month the students have to attend a pokemon centre and do tests. If they don't get the required 50% pass level, they are forbidden to leave the pokemon centre until their grades improve, or their license and pokedex may be cancelled. It's a hard life, but half of the Pokemon League trainers start at this age
For those beginning at 17-18, since they've finished high school, they do not have to study via an E-Book. They can choose when they go to university (according to their grades), but bear in mind, their high school grades expire in 5 years, so they must finish their journey within that time. If they don't, they have to sit high school final exams again if they plan on doing tertiary education. The other 50% of League trainers begin at this age. Every 6 months, all trainers who want to begin their journey recieve one starter pok?mon, five free pokeballs and two free potions, regardless of age. In this world, $1=100P (Pok?dollars).
The characters in this story are fictional, however Louis Estrada (me), my family and Lilith Arashi are actually real. The characters Louis and Lilith are pretty much reflections of us two in real life, so if you have a problem with the way these two are portrayed, I'm sorry, but that's the way we are. I now rate this fic R just to be on the safe side
Now, let the story commence.
Chapter 1 "Space Boy" -From the Initial D, Version 2 Soundtrack
Friday the 13th. This day had often be hailed as the unluckiest in the year, but not for one hardy soul, who was in his backyard, practicing his katas. His name, was Louis Estrada, 17 years old. He had finished High School a few weeks ago, and now he was going to begin his pokemon journey! Louis looked at himself. He stood at 180 centimetres, and weighed 90kg. He had short black hair that usually spiked bakwards, dark brown eyes and lightly tanned brown skin. While Louis was no body builder, he had a mild muscular tone to his body as a result of his training. Despite of this, Louis was your average smart-but-also addicted-to-martial-arts-and-pokemon kind of person. He really wanted to be a trainer, but he also wanted to make sure he got into university when he finished. In the early hours of the morning, Louis was executing some snap punches while at the same time fanatasing...
(Day-Dream sequence)
Ladies and Gentlemen! Presenting your new Pokemon League Champion! Let's give a hand to Louis Estrada!
Louis was being applauded by hundreds of thousands of people...he had just defeated the Elite 4...he had become champion...people were shouting and applaurding...boys wanted to get his autograph...girls wanted dates...a particularly pretty girl went up to him, and moved her face close to his...
(End sequence)
"I LOVE BEING CHAMPION!!!!" yelled out Louis to no-one in particular.
"Shut up, idiot!!!" a sleepy neighbour yelled out.
Red-faced, Louis decided to call it quits for one day. Putting away his equipment into the garden shed his dad had built, he trudged his way back to his house. As soon as he got in, the aroma of bacon, eggs and rice assailed Louis' nose. His mom and dad had woken up early, just to see him off on this very special day. Since his dad was setting up the table and his mom was cooking the last portions of breakfast, Louis decided to sit down and relax. After another five minutes, the three member Estrada clan had all sat down. However, he had two younger sisters, but they were overseas as exchange students. I wish they were here to see me off...I miss them Louis thought sadly They began helping themselves to breakfast, while Louis' mom spoke,
"Louis, you're growing up so much. It seemed only yesterday that you first began school. And now...you're...going away...to follow your dreams..." said Mrs Estrada, whose voice was racked with tears. His dad wasn't that much different.
"My boy...you've made us so proud...a 95% average in your exams! You can pursue your archaeological career you've always wanted, once you finish...I'm going to miss having you around," said Mr Estrada, who rubbed his eye. Louis casully chewed on a piece of bacon in response. ****, thought Louis, They're really taking this hard. I wish they didn't, I'm having second thoughts now.... Louis shrugged off his parent's comments, saying,
"Thanks mom, dad, for your faith in me. I'll make you even prouder when I become the Cosmo League champion." This was too much for Louis' over-emotional parents, and they exploded into a sea of tears. Louis was about to get teary eyed himself, but managed to save face when he announed to his parents that he needed to get ready. After another 10 seconds of hardcore crying, his mother said,
"Of course, you must look your best *sniff*. Go get changed, your father and I will finish packing your bag." Louis smiled at his parent's concern and replied,
"Sure mom. I'll be ready in about half an hour."
After taking a 10 minute shower and drying off, Louis put on his clothes. He pulled on some black cargo pants and a black singlet. Louis also put on a white polo t-shirt but he didn't button it up. After this he put on his black leather shoes, a black dog collar around his neck, and a silver chain around his left leg of his pants. Louis then hurried back into the bathroom, and applied gel to his shiny black hair, making it spike backwards. Louis then examined himself in the mirror.
I hope I look ok. This is my favourite set of clothes, and my appearance can easily influence a person's judgement. Well, at least I don't look like a freak. Maybe...she'll give me some extra notice, now that we're trainers...
Louis shook his head. Now was not the time to be fantasising about the one girl he always hung out with! Louis walked into the Estrada household's garage' he needed some time alone.
Meanwhile, the Mr and Mrs Estrada had just finished packing Louis' stuff when they saw him walk into the garage. They exchanged knowing looks.
"He probably wants some time alone," said Mr Estrada
"But he's our son! Let's show that we're always supporting him!" replied Mrs Estrada in an over-zealous tone. Mr Estrada, fearing his wife's wrath should he not comply with her demand, nodded meekly and followed Mrs Estrada to the garage. Outside the roller door, they heard portions of Louis' voice,
"In life...such short time..."
"Going to miss...a lot..."
"Will I ever see...again?"
Overcome with emotion, the matriarch and partriarch of the Estrada family opened the garage door and ran inside to comfort their son. They found their son talking and hugging (if it was humanly possible) his 1995 Mazda RX-7 Type R. The two face-faulted, anime style. When they got back up, evil looks were on their faces.
Traitor!!! Mrs Estrada screamed mentally
After all we've done for you!!! Mr Estrada thought, seeing red
Louis turned around and looked at his parents, who were looking pretty pissed off. For someone as 'smart' as himself, he didn't notice this. Rather, he gave them a sad smile and said,
"I...hoped you wouldn't find me like this. Since Angeline and Katrina aren't here, I was reduced to telling my car how I felt. Sad, isn't it? Telling an inanimate object how lonely I'll be without my family."
Mr and Mrs Estrada's rage vanished in a moment. They rushed over their son, and gave him bone-breaking hugs. Louis was in so much pain, he didn't really pay attention to the ravings of his over-emotional parents.
"*Sob*...how could we have doubted you..."
"Kiddo...you're such a softie, at heart..."
After two minutes of torture, Mr Estrada went back into the house. He returned to the garage, holding Louis' backpack. He said to Louis,
"I imagine your going to take your RX-7 for one last ride?" Louis nodded.
"Yeah, I want to take it to the Lab. Could you pick it up there?"
"Sure, Louis," said Mr Estrada. Mrs Estrada interrupted,
"Ok, you have everything you need here. I know you love that set of clothes you wear, so I packed in several sets in your bag. Make sure you change your underwear everyday!..." Louis blushed, while Mr Estrada snickered, "...your mobile phone is fully charged, and make sure you don't blow the 30,000P we're giving you in one go." Louis' jaw hit the floor.
"That much money! ****!!!!"
I'm rich! Rich rich rich!!!
Mr Estrada nodded and said, "Do you know how expensive that car of yours is? What we're giving you is pocket change," He looked at his watch, "It's 8:30 now. You better get going, son." Louis nodded.
"Yeah, I should."
Louis put his bag in the passenger seat of his RX-7, while his parents opened the gate. When they returned, Louis gave them one last hug, before whispering,
"I'll be back. As champion. I promise you that." His parents were so moved by this simple statement, they gave him their warmed, non-painful hug without words. Louis got into his car, started it up, and reversed out of the driveway and onto the road. He looked at his parents one last time, a tear sliding out of his eyes. He gave them a final wave, recieving one in return, before he sped off.
"Be safe, my child," said Mr and Mrs Estrada in unison...
"talk" - Normal speech
think - Thoughts
//blah blah// and \\blah blah\\ - telepathy
[random stuff] - pokemon speech
<yap yap yap> good conscience
>woof woof woof< evil conscience
Setting: The setting for this story is different to your standard Kanto, Johto and Hoenn Leagues. This League is called the Cosmo League, and there some differences to the normal three (just to make it a little realistic). Aspiring trainers can begin their journey at two points of their life: beginning at high school (before 7th grade starts, 11-12 years old) and upon graduation (finishing 12th grade, 17-18 years old). Those who start at 11-12 don't attend high school, however there is a condition that is put upon them. As well as a pokedex, trainers of this age are given an E-book. Every day, school notes and homework are downloaded into the E-Book. It's up to them to read these notes and do the homework, because every month the students have to attend a pokemon centre and do tests. If they don't get the required 50% pass level, they are forbidden to leave the pokemon centre until their grades improve, or their license and pokedex may be cancelled. It's a hard life, but half of the Pokemon League trainers start at this age
For those beginning at 17-18, since they've finished high school, they do not have to study via an E-Book. They can choose when they go to university (according to their grades), but bear in mind, their high school grades expire in 5 years, so they must finish their journey within that time. If they don't, they have to sit high school final exams again if they plan on doing tertiary education. The other 50% of League trainers begin at this age. Every 6 months, all trainers who want to begin their journey recieve one starter pok?mon, five free pokeballs and two free potions, regardless of age. In this world, $1=100P (Pok?dollars).
The characters in this story are fictional, however Louis Estrada (me), my family and Lilith Arashi are actually real. The characters Louis and Lilith are pretty much reflections of us two in real life, so if you have a problem with the way these two are portrayed, I'm sorry, but that's the way we are. I now rate this fic R just to be on the safe side
Now, let the story commence.
Chapter 1 "Space Boy" -From the Initial D, Version 2 Soundtrack
Friday the 13th. This day had often be hailed as the unluckiest in the year, but not for one hardy soul, who was in his backyard, practicing his katas. His name, was Louis Estrada, 17 years old. He had finished High School a few weeks ago, and now he was going to begin his pokemon journey! Louis looked at himself. He stood at 180 centimetres, and weighed 90kg. He had short black hair that usually spiked bakwards, dark brown eyes and lightly tanned brown skin. While Louis was no body builder, he had a mild muscular tone to his body as a result of his training. Despite of this, Louis was your average smart-but-also addicted-to-martial-arts-and-pokemon kind of person. He really wanted to be a trainer, but he also wanted to make sure he got into university when he finished. In the early hours of the morning, Louis was executing some snap punches while at the same time fanatasing...
(Day-Dream sequence)
Ladies and Gentlemen! Presenting your new Pokemon League Champion! Let's give a hand to Louis Estrada!
Louis was being applauded by hundreds of thousands of people...he had just defeated the Elite 4...he had become champion...people were shouting and applaurding...boys wanted to get his autograph...girls wanted dates...a particularly pretty girl went up to him, and moved her face close to his...
(End sequence)
"I LOVE BEING CHAMPION!!!!" yelled out Louis to no-one in particular.
"Shut up, idiot!!!" a sleepy neighbour yelled out.
Red-faced, Louis decided to call it quits for one day. Putting away his equipment into the garden shed his dad had built, he trudged his way back to his house. As soon as he got in, the aroma of bacon, eggs and rice assailed Louis' nose. His mom and dad had woken up early, just to see him off on this very special day. Since his dad was setting up the table and his mom was cooking the last portions of breakfast, Louis decided to sit down and relax. After another five minutes, the three member Estrada clan had all sat down. However, he had two younger sisters, but they were overseas as exchange students. I wish they were here to see me off...I miss them Louis thought sadly They began helping themselves to breakfast, while Louis' mom spoke,
"Louis, you're growing up so much. It seemed only yesterday that you first began school. And now...you're...going away...to follow your dreams..." said Mrs Estrada, whose voice was racked with tears. His dad wasn't that much different.
"My boy...you've made us so proud...a 95% average in your exams! You can pursue your archaeological career you've always wanted, once you finish...I'm going to miss having you around," said Mr Estrada, who rubbed his eye. Louis casully chewed on a piece of bacon in response. ****, thought Louis, They're really taking this hard. I wish they didn't, I'm having second thoughts now.... Louis shrugged off his parent's comments, saying,
"Thanks mom, dad, for your faith in me. I'll make you even prouder when I become the Cosmo League champion." This was too much for Louis' over-emotional parents, and they exploded into a sea of tears. Louis was about to get teary eyed himself, but managed to save face when he announed to his parents that he needed to get ready. After another 10 seconds of hardcore crying, his mother said,
"Of course, you must look your best *sniff*. Go get changed, your father and I will finish packing your bag." Louis smiled at his parent's concern and replied,
"Sure mom. I'll be ready in about half an hour."
After taking a 10 minute shower and drying off, Louis put on his clothes. He pulled on some black cargo pants and a black singlet. Louis also put on a white polo t-shirt but he didn't button it up. After this he put on his black leather shoes, a black dog collar around his neck, and a silver chain around his left leg of his pants. Louis then hurried back into the bathroom, and applied gel to his shiny black hair, making it spike backwards. Louis then examined himself in the mirror.
I hope I look ok. This is my favourite set of clothes, and my appearance can easily influence a person's judgement. Well, at least I don't look like a freak. Maybe...she'll give me some extra notice, now that we're trainers...
Louis shook his head. Now was not the time to be fantasising about the one girl he always hung out with! Louis walked into the Estrada household's garage' he needed some time alone.
Meanwhile, the Mr and Mrs Estrada had just finished packing Louis' stuff when they saw him walk into the garage. They exchanged knowing looks.
"He probably wants some time alone," said Mr Estrada
"But he's our son! Let's show that we're always supporting him!" replied Mrs Estrada in an over-zealous tone. Mr Estrada, fearing his wife's wrath should he not comply with her demand, nodded meekly and followed Mrs Estrada to the garage. Outside the roller door, they heard portions of Louis' voice,
"In life...such short time..."
"Going to miss...a lot..."
"Will I ever see...again?"
Overcome with emotion, the matriarch and partriarch of the Estrada family opened the garage door and ran inside to comfort their son. They found their son talking and hugging (if it was humanly possible) his 1995 Mazda RX-7 Type R. The two face-faulted, anime style. When they got back up, evil looks were on their faces.
Traitor!!! Mrs Estrada screamed mentally
After all we've done for you!!! Mr Estrada thought, seeing red
Louis turned around and looked at his parents, who were looking pretty pissed off. For someone as 'smart' as himself, he didn't notice this. Rather, he gave them a sad smile and said,
"I...hoped you wouldn't find me like this. Since Angeline and Katrina aren't here, I was reduced to telling my car how I felt. Sad, isn't it? Telling an inanimate object how lonely I'll be without my family."
Mr and Mrs Estrada's rage vanished in a moment. They rushed over their son, and gave him bone-breaking hugs. Louis was in so much pain, he didn't really pay attention to the ravings of his over-emotional parents.
"*Sob*...how could we have doubted you..."
"Kiddo...you're such a softie, at heart..."
After two minutes of torture, Mr Estrada went back into the house. He returned to the garage, holding Louis' backpack. He said to Louis,
"I imagine your going to take your RX-7 for one last ride?" Louis nodded.
"Yeah, I want to take it to the Lab. Could you pick it up there?"
"Sure, Louis," said Mr Estrada. Mrs Estrada interrupted,
"Ok, you have everything you need here. I know you love that set of clothes you wear, so I packed in several sets in your bag. Make sure you change your underwear everyday!..." Louis blushed, while Mr Estrada snickered, "...your mobile phone is fully charged, and make sure you don't blow the 30,000P we're giving you in one go." Louis' jaw hit the floor.
"That much money! ****!!!!"
I'm rich! Rich rich rich!!!
Mr Estrada nodded and said, "Do you know how expensive that car of yours is? What we're giving you is pocket change," He looked at his watch, "It's 8:30 now. You better get going, son." Louis nodded.
"Yeah, I should."
Louis put his bag in the passenger seat of his RX-7, while his parents opened the gate. When they returned, Louis gave them one last hug, before whispering,
"I'll be back. As champion. I promise you that." His parents were so moved by this simple statement, they gave him their warmed, non-painful hug without words. Louis got into his car, started it up, and reversed out of the driveway and onto the road. He looked at his parents one last time, a tear sliding out of his eyes. He gave them a final wave, recieving one in return, before he sped off.
"Be safe, my child," said Mr and Mrs Estrada in unison...
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