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A NB team please rate and fix =D

Pokedragonfire

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    Alakazam (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Synchronize
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
    Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Fire Punch
    - Ice Punch
    - Psychic
    - Thunderpunch

    Yay punches :) I like to give him a speedy nature because he die's so easily. Maybe I should trade Leftovers for Lum?

    Marowak (F) @ Thick Club
    Trait: Lightning Rod
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Bonemerang
    - Hidden Power [Bug]
    - Rock Slide
    - Swords Dance

    Sub killer and Physical Sweeper. I don't see much use for Swords Dance since Marowak is so easily killed by any Special attack. Kinda why I gave her speed. I switch to her when Gyarados is out if opponent switches to electric.

    Blaziken (F) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Blaze
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Naive Nature (+Spd, -SDef)
    - Flamethrower
    - Hidden Power [Ghost]
    - Reversal
    - Substitute

    I didn't want Jolly because
    2. Don't want to weaken Flamethrower.
    1. I'd die anyway because I'd have like 2 hp left.

    Sceptile (M) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Overgrow
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Dragon Claw
    - Leaf Blade
    - Quick Attack
    - Thunderpunch

    Another Sub killer, but he's a special sweeper. I'm thinking about switching Quick Attack for something because I've already got a Sub killer, but he seems to die less than Marowak. Suggestion for better item?

    Gyarados (F) @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Intimidate
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Hidden Power [Flying]
    - Taunt

    :) HP Flying Pwns. STAB + Dragon Dance + Really High Attack = OHKO's. Too bad about the 4x weakness.

    Breloom (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Effect Spore
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Focus Punch
    - Hidden Power [Ghost]
    - Spore
    - Substitute

    Spore Sub Puncher. Unfortunatly, sleep clause is on a lot and he's not as good as he really would be. Leftovers because I sit there with a sleeping opponent just screaming out Leftovers heal me! Maybe I could go with Jolly not Adamant, but I don't think it would help a lot.

    Please rate/fix etc. If you think my team would work really well with a non-ubar pokemon, please say so and replace one of the pokemon up here.

    Oh yeah, my team is killed by Weezing, any suggestions about that? Alakazam dies to early often and I can't kill the darn thing.
     
    Fixes are in bold.

    Pokedragonfire said:
    Alakazam (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Synchronize
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
    Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Fire Punch
    - Ice Punch Calm Mind over Ice Punch.
    - Psychic
    - Thunderpunch

    Yay punches :) I like to give him a speedy nature because he die's so easily. Maybe I should trade Leftovers for Lum?

    Marowak (F) @ Thick Club
    Trait: Lightning Rod
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Bonemerang
    - Hidden Power [Bug] Earthquake over this, but that's just me.
    - Rock Slide
    - Swords Dance

    Sub killer and Physical Sweeper. I don't see much use for Swords Dance since Marowak is so easily killed by any Special attack. Kinda why I gave her speed. I switch to her when Gyarados is out if opponent switches to electric.

    Blaziken (F) @ Salac Berry Liechi Berry
    Trait: Blaze
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Naive Nature (+Spd, -SDef) Lonely nature
    - Flamethrower Overheat
    - Hidden Power [Ghost] Earthquake
    - Reversal[ font=tahoma]Only with Endure. so Rock Slide over this.
    Click to expand...
    Pokedragonfire said:
    - Substitute I like Swords Dance over this.

    I didn't want Jolly because
    2. Don't want to weaken Flamethrower.
    1. I'd die anyway because I'd have like 2 hp left.

    Sceptile (M) @ Salac Berry Petaya Berry
    Trait: Overgrow
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Dragon Claw Crunch
    - Leaf Blade
    - Quick Attack HP [Fire]
    - Thunderpunch

    Another Sub killer, but he's a special sweeper. I'm thinking about switching Quick Attack for something because I've already got a Sub killer, but he seems to die less than Marowak. Suggestion for better item?

    Gyarados (F) @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Intimidate
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Hidden Power [Flying]
    - Taunt
    This ones good.

    :) HP Flying Pwns. STAB + Dragon Dance + Really High Attack = OHKO's. Too bad about the 4x weakness.

    Breloom (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Effect Spore
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Focus Punch
    - Hidden Power [Ghost]
    - Spore
    - Substitute

    Spore Sub Puncher. Unfortunatly, sleep clause is on a lot and he's not as good as he really would be. Leftovers because I sit there with a sleeping opponent just screaming out Leftovers heal me! Maybe I could go with Jolly not Adamant, but I don't think it would help a lot.

    Please rate/fix etc. If you think my team would work really well with a non-ubar pokemon, please say so and replace one of the pokemon up here.

    Oh yeah, my team is killed by Weezing, any suggestions about that? Alakazam dies to early often and I can't kill the darn thing.
    Click to expand...
     
    Bonemerang AND Earthquake on Marowak? I can see why you would consider it (accuracy issue), but no. HP Ghost over HP Bug, says hi to those Dusclops and Gengar, and threatens Celery just as much.
     
    Pokedragonfire said:
    Alakazam (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Synchronize
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
    Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Fire Punch
    - Ice Punch
    - Psychic
    - Thunderpunch

    Yay punches :) I like to give him a speedy nature because he die's so easily. Maybe I should trade Leftovers for Lum?

    cm is an option...

    Marowak (F) @ Thick Club
    Trait: Lightning Rod
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Bonemerang
    - Hidden Power [Bug]
    - Rock Slide
    - Swords Dance

    Sub killer and Physical Sweeper. I don't see much use for Swords Dance since Marowak is so easily killed by any Special attack. Kinda why I gave her speed. I switch to her when Gyarados is out if opponent switches to electric.

    go w/ rock head nature and have doubleedge > hidden power...

    Blaziken (F) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Blaze
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Naive Nature (+Spd, -SDef)
    - Flamethrower
    - Hidden Power [Ghost]
    - Reversal
    - Substitute

    I didn't want Jolly because
    2. Don't want to weaken Flamethrower.
    1. I'd die anyway because I'd have like 2 hp left.

    looks good

    Sceptile (M) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Overgrow
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Dragon Claw
    - Leaf Blade
    - Quick Attack
    - Thunderpunch

    Another Sub killer, but he's a special sweeper. I'm thinking about switching Quick Attack for something because I've already got a Sub killer, but he seems to die less than Marowak. Suggestion for better item?

    petaya berry... substitute, leaf blade, quick attack, thunder punch/hp ice... have a rash or mild nature of sceppy and have some evs in attack so it can actually do 3% damage for an easy kill

    Gyarados (F) @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Intimidate
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Hidden Power [Flying]
    - Taunt

    :) HP Flying Pwns. STAB + Dragon Dance + Really High Attack = OHKO's. Too bad about the 4x weakness.

    y do you have lum AND taunt? >.> have leftovers

    Breloom (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Effect Spore
    EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Focus Punch
    - Hidden Power [Ghost]
    - Spore
    - Substitute

    jolly is an option

    Spore Sub Puncher. Unfortunatly, sleep clause is on a lot and he's not as good as he really would be. Leftovers because I sit there with a sleeping opponent just screaming out Leftovers heal me! Maybe I could go with Jolly not Adamant, but I don't think it would help a lot.

    Please rate/fix etc. If you think my team would work really well with a non-ubar pokemon, please say so and replace one of the pokemon up here.

    Oh yeah, my team is killed by Weezing, any suggestions about that? Alakazam dies to early often and I can't kill the darn thing.
    Click to expand...

    then dont make kazam your starter =\
     
    Toothache said:
    Bonemerang AND Earthquake on Marowak? I can see why you would consider it (accuracy issue), but no. HP Ghost over HP Bug, says hi to those Dusclops and Gengar, and threatens Celery just as much.
    Click to expand...

    Just a personal prefrence, and it can work, but I forgot it can get Rock Head (I'm pretty sure it can), so insted of Earthquake, you could use Double Edge. :D
     
    Yep, Lighting Rod is kind of useless in 1 v 1 anyway, it only has it's uses in 2 v 2 battles. Go with Rock Head. Marowak is usually eaten alive by Gengar, so I gave it some Sp Def and HP Ghost for the incoming Ice Punch/Giga Drain. It's a OHKO for Gengar, just watch out for those with Destiny Bond.
     
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