A pic I drew...

[Midori Chi]

Well, I've been drawing since I was 7, and have been drawing comics since I was about 12.
Please tell me what you think! ^_^

 

[Chikara]

CHIIIIIIIIIIII!! Those eyes are SO pretty! Nice work! ^^

 

[RYOUKI]

WOW! it's great!, you really lined up the the hair! pretty good,
but as they say "When there's good, there's bad"
The Only bad thing is the mouth..I dunno about what people think,
I think that the mouth's to small, but about everything is fine,

 

[Midori Chi]

Thankies! ^_^
The style of eyes I used...that was my first time drawing those.
I usually do something more simple, I guess.

And about the mouth...Yeah, I agree.
I usually give my characters small mouths, so it's not so much that...I think the position of the mouth was a bit off. 0.0

 

[Allstories]

It looks like every drawing by a 14-year-old girl ever. Utterly derivative. Anime is typically exaggerated, but it's still based around real artistic principles. If I were you, I would sharpen my skills in regards to drawing realistically and use it to improve my abilities at drawing anime.

 

[Midori Chi]

Hmm...Okay. 0.0
I've never really drawn realisically before. ^^;
But I think I have a book on it, so I'll go take a look.

 

[Bekki]

I like it. Well better then anything that I could of done.

 

[Pkmn-Master]

you make my drawings seem like a piece of crap! (and, no, acendo, not my pixel-arts)

 

[Midori Chi]

Thanks, Bekki and pkmn-master. ^__^
And I'm sure your drawings aren't that bad. ;_;

 

[Pkmn-Master]

heh wait till u see 'em... Must've took a while to do that hair, 'eh?

 

[AyuKurayami]

Heehee...=D

Hmm... I must admit, that is quite a good drawing. the face seems very even and smooth (as in it looks as if it fits). Although, if my view, it seems as she is looking at me from a back view. The only problem I see in my opinion are the shoulders. They seem uneven in a way.

I suggest examining the body of an average person and evening the shoulders view. I'm not too well at that myself, I'm only sharing my opinion.

Overall, this picture has an interesting feeling, mysterious to say?

 

[Midori Chi]

heh wait till u see 'em... Must've took a while to do that hair, 'eh?

I've gotten used to drawing hair for so long, so it takes me about 5 minutes, I guess.

Hmm... I must admit, that is quite a good drawing. the face seems very even and smooth (as in it looks as if it fits). Although, if my view, it seems as she is looking at me from a back view. The only problem I see in my opinion are the shoulders. They seem uneven in a way.

I suggest examining the body of an average person and evening the shoulders view. I'm not too well at that myself, I'm only sharing my opinion.

Overall, this picture has an interesting feeling, mysterious to say?

Yup, it's a back view. ^_^ Not my forte. XD
Shoulders aren't my forte either.
When I draw girl shoulders, they end up looking a little too boy-ish...0.0

Thanks. ^___^

 

[Margot]

Not bad Chi ^^

However, near the top of her head your lines are pretty choppy but I like how they're nice, straight and smooth the more you get into her hair. So just try to keep the lines straight through all her hair and it'll look very nice :3

Also, I agree with Allstories. Even though you've never really tried realism, you should because it can give you better practice and you could develop your own unique look once you find your style ^^ Plus, it does help with your overall drawing ability in general!

Overall, nice job =D

 

[pokemonranger_john]

It looks quite good but if you colored it in it would have looked better.

 

[PokemonRox]

it looks awesome!! i wish i could draw like that!!

~PokemonRox :t249:

 

[Midori Chi]

Not bad Chi ^^

However, near the top of her head your lines are pretty choppy but I like how they're nice, straight and smooth the more you get into her hair. So just try to keep the lines straight through all her hair and it'll look very nice :3

Also, I agree with Allstories. Even though you've never really tried realism, you should because it can give you better practice and you could develop your own unique look once you find your style ^^ Plus, it does help with your overall drawing ability in general!

Overall, nice job =D

Yeah, I see what you mean about the choppyness.

And I'll look up some realistic stuff sooner or later. XD

It looks quite good but if you colored it in it would have looked better.

Thanks. I color with colored pencils, so it probably wouldn't look all that well, though. ^_^;

it looks awesome!! i wish i could draw like that!!

~PokemonRox

Thanks! ^___^