A poem about Chess

PokeCosmo

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    You should watch the syllables in each line. They're very important in having a good rhythm to your poem.

    This should be taken into consideration.

    The wording was pretty natural. Now Chess is not my favorite game, but I admire anyone who can regularly play it. Again, syllables are quite important, and that makes it all the more catchy and interesting. Not bad, good job.
     
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