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A pokemon journey right from the top-Hoenn style!!

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I walked out of rustboro city, to train my pokemon, when suddenly, I spotted a person wearing a blue outfit run past me.I stepped back, and following him quetly, I found myself in a cave......
 
I walked out of the gym and saw a person wearing blue run past me.I fallowed him.and Ended up in a cave known as the rustbro Tunnle.I floowed him and saw Matt.

"hey what are you doing here?"I asked and Looked at the person in blue...
 
I spotted Samantha(Isn't that your characters name here??XD), and said, "Quiet!!". I then turned my attention to the man wearing a blue outfit. He had a bird that looked like a seagull in his arms, and said to an old man, "If you don't give me an my other friends a ride to dewford, your wingull will have more than his wings clipped!!". The old man said, "please, no!! don't hurt him!!". I stood up, and said, "Just hold on a darn second!!". The man turned around, and said, "Oh? there's a brat here!! Time to die!!", and released a krabby. I sent out torchic, and prepared to fight...
 
OOC:ya my name is Samantha on here but you can call me Sam...

"I saw the Crabby and The SeaGull I took some pokemon Food out of my Pack and lured the Wingull over and Gave it to the old man.

"Thank you for doing this"The old man said and walked away...
 
"Torchic, slash!!" I ylled, and torchic slashed krabby, who alomst fainted. "Argh, krabby!!" the man said. "Now, torchic, finish this weakling off!!flamethrower at max!!" I yelled, and torchic suddenly unleashed a humoungous blue flame that barbaqued the krabby. "Wow, torchic, if you had done that level of flamethrower, we'd be on our way now!!" I remarked, and recalling torchic, I ran back to rustboro, with the man yelling, "You brat!! Team aqua's gonna waste ya!!!".
 
"Well so are you going back for that badge"I asked and put Sophie down to let her rest after all that exclitment she was was tired as she can be.
 
"Of course I am." I yelled to Sam, and walked back into the arena. The lights went on, and the girl looked at me again, this time fromt the other side.


"So, you came here for a rematch?" She asked me.

"Of course I am!!" I yelled at her, and released torchic. "A one-on one battle. Only one pokemon allowed. Deal?" I told her.


"Of course." She said, and released onix.

"Torchic, flamethrower at maximum!!" I yelled, and torchic fired another blue flame at onix. However, when the smoke cleared, it was revealed onix could still take more hits before fainting. "No.... It can't be..." I said, stepping back in shock.


"It's time to finish this off!! Onix, slam!!" The girl yelled, and onix smashed torchic with its tail.

"WHAT THE-TORCHIC!!" I yelled, but just as onix was grinding its tail into the dirt, I remarked, "Geez, he's on a losing streak lately. I guess I should've used grovyle.". At the mention of the word "Grovyle.", a huge shining light appeared where torchic was.


"No....it can't be...." The girl said, in amazement. Suddenly, a glowing figure smashed onix into the roof. The figure landed softly, and when the glow faded, I could see a pokemon that looked similer to torchic. I got out my pokedex, and identified it as Combusken, the evolution of torchic. I looked at Combusken in amazement, and scanned it for what new attacks it learned. I saw the attack "Sky uppercut.", and knew by the name it was a fighting type move, and from the pokedex, that combusken was a Fire/fighting type.


Grinning, I yelled, "Time to really finish this off!! Combusken, sky uppercut!!".Combusken jumped up to onix, who was landing, and smashed his rock hard chin with his fist. Suddenly, the chin cracked. Onix collapsed to the ground, and fainted.


"No....you win...." The girl said, but after recalling onix, she walked up to me, and said, "Here's the badge.", and gave me a boulder shaped badge.

I smiled, and said, "Time to heal up my pokemon!!", and walked out of the gym, and towards the pokemon center...
 
"I thought about all my pokemon and how none of them Evoled as the night felled I took sophie out side for a little training.I saw a trainer traing his Slicoon and how it kept on glowing.I challenge Him to a battle with Sophie.

"Sophie use your Bite"I yelled and sophie ran a bit Slicoon.Slicoon flinched and fell on the ground fianted.Shohie glowed and Grew bigger and truned into an UMBREON!!!!!
 
OOC: Please, no...evos are only allowed in gym battles, okay?? But also, it can't just evolve instantly as soon as you get into a gym battle. It has to be on the brink of loseing. K?XD

IC: I had Combusken and my pokemon healed, and spotted samantha training her evee. I walked over to her, and said, "Hey, Let's go to the pokemon center for the night. I'm tired.", and walked back to the pokemon center, and fell asleep on one of the couchs...
 
"ok"I said and took a room and went to sleep.Sophie looked at the moon and went to sleep.next morning I woke up and sophie was gone vanished.I looked everywhere and found sophie asleep under a tree out side.I picked her up and put her down in side and I walked outside....
 
As I woke up, I saw Combusken looking at me with a smug grin. "What?"I asked him as I got up and went to the showers. After I got dried and dressed again, I went back to Combusken, but then realized what he wanted me to do. "Oh alright, you're equal to grovyle now. Happy?" I said to him, thinking that's what he wanted me to do.
 
I was actually surprised at how well the situation had become.
But, it was just how I wanted it and didn't think anymore about this.
"Let's go Pikachu!"
Charmander, Pikachu and I walked down the hill into the next city.
 
I recalled Combusken, along with my other pokemon, and walked out of rustboro, back to route 104(That's the route before rustboro that leads to Mr.briney's cottage,right??XD). I checked out a map on a cottage, and groaned when I saw that Dewford town was on an island. "How am I suppoused to get to an island without any surfing pokemon??" I said, and then sat down and cryed.


But then, I looked up, and saw the same old man who I helped yesterday looking at me. "What do ya want?" I snapped at him.


"Well, I can give you a ride to Dewford town. Usually it costs 100 yen,(That's the currency I'm useing for the pokedollars.XD), but for saving me and my wingull, I'll give your friend a ride for free." The old man said.


I replied, "Thanks. I was afraid I'd have to pay.".

"Well, you have to. She's the one who saved beaky." The old man remarked, and I anime-felled.

"What!?" I said in shock.


"Well, you do. So pay up now, laddy, or you'll have to swim there." The old man said with a chuckle. I looked out to the sea, and remembering the time when I almost drowned swimming, I pulled out 100 yen, and gaev it to the old man. "Thanks, and by the way, my name is Mr.Briney." The old man said, and went into his shack.


While I waited for him, I walked back to rustboro, and said to Samantha, "Come on!! That old man we helped yesterday's gonna give us a ride to Dewford town!!".
 
I arrive and head directly to the Pokemon Center. But arriving there,
I find men in black capes talking to Nurse Joy. Thought they were just passing
trainers like me so I don't really take note of them.
I walk in and hand my pokemon to Nurse Joy.
"Sorry, but we can't heal your pokemon right now."
"Why?"
"We've got a smal problem..."
 
"Come on!! Before he has to bring another trauber over!!" I said to Samantha, annoyed that she kept me waiting.
 
OOC: Erm.....I'll think about it, alright??..but please, if you're gonna invite someone to join your RP in another RP thread, also post something adequate. And I thought you left!!!
 
"Ok I'm coming"I said and Wlked on to the wingul shaped boat.

"Um mr.Briney how fast does this thing go?"I asked hoping not to fast or I would hurl.

"Um sometimes about 100 miles per hour."He said and My face truned green.
 
I ran to the boat, and got on."Well, are we goning to go to Dewford town, or not?" I asked.

"Yes we are."The old man said, and yelled, "Hang on tight!!" He started up the boat.

It started up so fast, I was caught off balance. I hung on to the back, and my feet were constantly skimming the water. When Mr. Briney said "Alright, we're at dewford town!!". I let go, and dropped in the water. I suddenly remembered I couldn't swim, and painiked. I screamed, and grabbed on to a support beam to the dock, and then jumped to the shore a few feet away. I landed in it face-first, and my eentire body was covered in sand. I sighed in releif, then fainted.
 
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