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A pokemon journey right from the top-Hoenn style!!

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I moaned and Barfed up my entire lunch dinner and breakfast that I had the past week.

"I am never rideing on that boat again"I said and went to the pokemon center to heal my pokemon...
 
"Well, you'll have to ride it again to get to Slateport city." Mr.Briney said with a chuckle.


As I got up from the sand, I groaned, and went to the pokemon center. After I got washed and dressed, I spotted a cave where a large crowd was. A man was saying, "Please, everyone stay calm!! The lights for Granite cave will come up again as soon as help arives!!".


"There will never be any help coming!!" A man yelled, and many people chimed along with him.


'This looks intresting,'I thought, and while the man was trying to calm everybody down, I sneaked into the cave. I was creeping along when I realized thatI didn't have a pokemon that knew flash. I wasn't scared of the dark itself, but what might be lurking in the dark. But as I walked along, I spotted a torch, and walked over to it, when suddenly, I heard a startling laugh...
 
I saw Matt sliping into the cave so I floowed him.

"Crystal use you tail flame to light up the place"I said and Crystal's Tail glowed Brighter then ever.Then I heard creepy laugh that chilled my bones.

"matt what was that"I said and looked around the dark place...

OOC: Crystal did not use flash simpliy its tail Flame...
 
Suddenly, as I approached the torch, I saw it was a head. I stepped back in shock, and suddenly, the head walked out of the torch, on a body, that was on a Houndoom, which fired a flamethrower at me. I quickly got out Combusken, who flapped the flamethrower back. Suddenly, the creature on the houndoom pulled out a whip, and cracked it. Me and Combusken sweatdropped, and ran away as fast as we could. As we did, we heard the laugh again...
 
"AHH WAIT UP"I yelled and ran out the Cave with Crystal.

"That was not fun"I moaned and went to the pokemon center to heal my pokemon...
 
'Hey wait a minnute. It's on a pokemon, right? So I can fight back!!' I thought, and yelled out, "Combusken, sky uppercut on that houndoom!! The creature will fall, trust me!!". Combusken gave me a dirty look, then jumped backwards and slammed into the houndoom with a sky uppercut, causeing it to faint. I looked at the creature for a minnute, when suddenly, it chucked its head at me, which I narrowly dodged, but singed my face. I found a tunnel leading outside, and shaking, me and Combusken got outside again, but when we did, we noticed a gray-haired man looking out to the sea...
 
"A problem?"
"If you look inside, you'll see that all the equipment's been damaged."
"Oh."
I look back at my pokemon, then back at her. I also walk inside and see
bits of glass and plastic on the floor.
"What can we do to help?"
 
"Hey, who are you!?" I asked the strange man.


"My name is nothing of your concern right now. But take this." The man said, and tossed me a TM. I put it in my pocket, and was about to ask where he got it, when suddenly, he dissapeared.

"Okayyy..." I said, and spotting the pokemon center, me and combusken ran towards it...
 
Can I please join
Name: Jacob Thomson
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Starter: Mudkip
2nd Pokemon: Zigzagoon
Description: I have Blue eyes and Yellow hair and wears normal cloting
Personality: Nice,Smart,Cool and Average

Everyone`s Username and RPG Name
Bob V/Matt
Capalex_65/Alex
blitzballchamp/Blitz
FireFlameRyu/Samantha
Pogiforce-14/Seth
Daegon_Kimeron/Daegon
Qwerzhou/Jacob
 
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OOC: Erm, uh, sure, just don't have any scenes that involve donuts. My mom's putting me on a diet.XD


IC: As combusken got healed up and I got washed, I thought about the next gym battle, and then after I got washed, I got dressed again. "So, combusken, ready??" I said to my evolved starter, smileing. Combusken nodded, and as I recalled him, I ran towards where I overheard there was the gym...
 
"Pika?!"
Pikachu didn't look like he wanted to help.
"ok, pikachu, you don't have to help."
"well, there are going to be some people coming to repair the damage,
but you can clean up the floors and the bits and pieces lying around."
nurse joy says.
"Ok. I'll do that!"
 
1 week after everyone had got there starter pokemon in this RPG.........
I woke up and got out of bed,got dressed and brushed my teeth (It was
the day I was getting my starter pokemon from Prof Birch),then I went
down stairs and saw my mum holding a bagpack,she said it will help you
on your pokemon journey.

I had breakfeast and was about to leave until,
my mum handed a pokeball with a zigzagoon inside,she asked me what I
wanted to nickname zigzagoon,I decided to nickname him Zig and opened
the pokeball,and I told Zig he would be with me from now on then I closed
the pokeball.

Then I went running to Prof Birch`s Lab.I soon reached it,
and Prof Birch welcomed me and showed me the diffrent starter pokemon
there where.After a while he asked me what starter pokemon I wanted,
I decided to chosse mudkip and Prof Birch handed me a pokeball with
mudkip inside,and asked me what I was going to nickname mudkip I
said Mud.

He also gave me 5 empty pokeballs and a pokedex,and he told me to
complete my dex then he said to have a loving heart.I said thank you
to Prof Birch and left the lab.I realesed Mud and Zig out of there pokeball
and welcomed them to each other.I grabbed my pokedex from my pocket and the dex said infomation about about Mud and Zig,I then told Mud the same thing I told Zig before.Then I closed the 2 pokeballs and continued on my journey.
 
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I get the dustbin and brush out of their tight corners and start sweeping.
I look to my left and see Pikachu and Larvitar picking up pieces of glass up.
'I'm not that worried about Larvitar, but Pikachu could get his hand cut'
"Pikachu, instead of picking glass, could you....."
I couldn't think.
"could you..."
'what can I ask him to do?!!'
'ah'
"could you...go behind the pokemon center and pick up the apples
that have fallen?"
"pika...."
Pikachu seemed a bit disappointed and upset, but I thought that it was
better than getting his hand cut later.
 
I was walking to Oldale Town but stopped when I saw a poochyena,
I took the pokedex out of my pocket and it said infomation about poochyena,
so I realesed Mud and the pokedex said that mudkip`s attacks were Tackle, Growl,Mudslap and Water Gun.So I orded Mud to use Water Gun and I looked on my pokedex on it showed that poochena had about half HP I quickley orded another Water Gun from Mud before poochyena attacked.I then looked on my pokedex again,on the it showed that poochyena had fainted.

So I threw a pokeball at poochyena.Then the pokedex said that poochyena was caught.I decided to nickname poochyena Jake,Then I realeased all my pokemon from there pokeballs and I gave Jake a potion out of my backpack I also I welcomed Jake to the team.Mud and Zig also welcomed Jake.Then I closed all my pokeballs,and went heading to Oldale Town when I reached it I went to the pokemon center to have lunch at.

Then I went to the lobby(in the pokemon center)to talk about pokemon,I heard people talking about a few trainers calledMatt,Alex,Blitz,Samantha,
Seth and Daegon.I joined in the conversation and asked them when they were here.One said about a week ago so I wondered if I would ever meet one of the trainers called Matt,Alex,Blitz,Samantha,Seth and Daegon,then I left the pokemon center and went heading to Petalburg City.

20 miniutes later......
I was now on route 102,I was still heading for Petalburg City until a trainer called Joel wanted to battle me 2 on 2.So I realeased Mud and Zig,and
also took out my pokedex to see what attacks Zig had it said that zigzagoon`s attacks were Tackle,Growl,Tail Whip and Headbutt.Then
Joel realeased his Torchic and Numel I looked up infomation about the
2 pokemon on my dex then I told Mud to use Water Gun on torchic.
Then I looked on my pokedex on it showed that torchic had fainted.

Then I orded Zig to use Headbutt at numel,I then looked on my pokedex
again on it showed that numel had about 3 quarters of its hp left.
Then it was Joel`s turn,he orded numel to use a fire attack at Zig.
I looked on my pokedex it showed that Zig had half its hp left,so I orded
Mud to use Water Gun,then I looked on my pokedex it showed that numel had about 1 quarter of its hp left so I orded a headbutt from Zig.
I looked on my dex again it showed that numel had fainted and it also said
that numel had fainted.

I had won the battle and Joel said that he would
have to train harder and if he ever me met me again he would win,then
he walked off.I congratualated Zig and Mud and closed both off there pokeballs.I was still heading to Petalburg City and hoped I would reach it soon.
 
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"Pika, pika!"
"Pikachu, what's wrong?" I ask
Two men in blue come through the door.
"Hello, we're here to fix the equipment!"
"Oh thankyou for making it on time." says Nurse Joy
'oh, so pikachu was telling me that those two were coming'
"Thankyou for helping, but you can go now. These two people here
will take care of the rest." says Nurse Joy.
I was kinda upset at the fact that I was being replaced ,but admitted
the fact that I was a more subordinate person and went out.
"Tell us again when you need help Nurse Joy!" I cry.
"I will." says Nurse Joy.
"Hey guys, let's get something to eat and come back later."
 
I had now reached Petalburg City.It was dark so I was going to the pokemon center to have dinner at.When I reached it I first healed my pokemon then I went to the dining room,I realeased all my pokemon and started eating food they were also eating food,after a while I had finished dinner and my pokemon also had finished eating.So I closed there pokeballs.

I decided to stay over at the pokemon center for a while so I went in to one of the cabins realeased my pokemon and relaxed with them.About an hour later me and my pokemon had finished relaxing so I closed my pokemons pokebals,so I went in to the lobby room to chat,I heard that the pokeballs at the mart were extra cheap only 70 yen each so I planned to go to the mart in the morning,then I left the lobby and went back in to my cabin.

When I reached my cabin I changed into my pyjames,realeased all my pokemon and went to sleep with them on the bed.The next day I had woken up,got changed,brushed my teeth,closed all my pokemons pokeballs and then went to the dining room to have breakfeast.After I finished breakfeast I left the pokemon center and went heading to the mart.When I reached it I went in and brought 3 pokeballs for 210 yen and then left the mart.

I was now heading for Rustborg City.About half way there I saw a man selling
a bicyle for 1000 yen so I decieded to stop and buy it he said thank you for buying it then left,I was now on my bicyle moving faster than ever,suddenley I saw saw a injured pikachu I quickley took out my pokedex and it said info on
pikachu then I took out a pokeball from and threw it at pikachu,I had caught pikachu so I quickley rode to Rustborg City.

When I arrived went to the pokemon center to heal pikachu.When I got to the pokemon center I gave pikachu`s pokeball to the nurse`s I waited for
an hour and pikachu was fine.Then one of the nurses told me not to battle so hard I told them I found it in the wild.Then she said to realease him back
into the wild.

So I went back were I found pikachu and realeased it,but the pikachu refused to go so I asked if it wanted to go with me it nodded so I
nicknamed the pikachu Pika and told it the same thing I told it the same thing I told my other pokemon, then realeased I all my pokemon and told them to welcome Pika to are gang they smiled and soon I closed there pokeballs,then I headed back to Rustborg City.
 
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"This is quite nice!" I say to myself, eating a cheeseburger.
"Pikachu, do you like your apple?"
"PIKA!"
"I'm glad."
"larvitar, how about you?"
Larvitar's too busy eating to talk.
"I'll take that as a yes."
After we had eaten, I decided to take a look at the pokemon center.
It was still in bad shape, so I went up to Nurse Joy and asked her when
everything should be complete.
"Well, it should be done by tommorow noon at latest." she said
"I guess we can wait until then." I say, "let's set up camp in the outskirts
of town."
 
"ARGh" I yelled as I looked around for the gym...appearntyly I am lost in dewford. I was annoyed until I saw the pokemon center i ran inside and asked everyone where the pokemon center is. noone knew...

"ARGh just great the single palce where my pokenav doesnt work I have to get lost." I yelled and went out to the door and went stright ahead I kept trying to fix my pokemon nav but I did need to I was aready there at the gym. I walked in and it was pitch dark in side.

"HELLO anybody here!!!" I yelled and my echo came back at me. Since there was no one here I decided to explore with Crystal in the front.
 
I spotted the gym, and walking into it, I yelled out, "Is anybody here??". Suddeenly, the lights turned on, and a burly teenager with blue hair said, "Yes their is, little dude!!". "Well, I challange you to a gym battle!!" I said, releaseing combusken. "Well, I choose hariyama!!" The teen said, releaseing a sumo-like pokemon.
 
then the lights suddenly truned on.Following my insticts I headed toward a battle field.I saw Matt's Combustken agaist Hariyama...
 
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