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a random comic i randomly decided to make 1 day

Let me say this, it might offend but... here goes:
THIS SUX!!!

But I think you should improve with advices from masters on this like Signomi, vaati, Adam and MT! Also, the problem might be you use on RMXP other format than JPEG, PNG or PCX!

Paint is better!
 
I already know tht, tht's why I put not to point tht out at the start!

YAY my 20th post! :D
 
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Random person, i have one bad comment to make. Please use CAPITAL LETTERS. Apart from that I thought for a first timer it was actually pretty good. My rating-7/10
(P.S I did not come up with the idea for the chicken)
 
i know earlier on i said tht hehe, and if it was any1 elses it wud only get 1/10 but thx anyway!
 
thx thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
 
oh yeah umm...hey dude! this is a piece of crap
no realy am gona spam this crap as much as i fell like and i hope it gets
locked:cool: :cool: :cool:
 
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Ruby-adams said:
oh yeah umm...hey dude! this is a piece of crap
no realy am gona spam this crap as much as i fell like and i hope it gets
locked:cool: :cool: :cool:
Aren't you retarded?

seriously dude, you're the one that fails,I've never seen you give constractive crit, EVER...and what's more is that you didn't even make your own entry to the sprite comp, so you can't laugh at him for not doing well...at least he done it himeslf.
 
vaati said:
Aren't you retarded?

seriously dude, you're the one that fails,I've never seen you give constractive crit, EVER...and what's more is that you didn't even make your own entry to the sprite comp, so you can't laugh at him for not doing well...at least he done it himeslf.
what the heck does this have to do with u anyway
[mind ur own business
 
Unlike you I'm trying to help the poor guy, and for the love of god please use proper spelling and grammer, just because you're most likely a chav doesen't mean you have to spell how you speak.
 
vaati said:
Unlike you I'm trying to help the poor guy, and for the love of god please use proper spelling and grammer, just because you're most likely a chav doesen't mean you have to spell how you speak.
so i take it that ur from england,chav,dude i'v seen better comics than this before
 
i'be actually made a second 1 !!! YAY
 
random person 95 said:
i'be actually made a second 1 !!! YAY
*gasp*u'v actualy made a second 1 !!! no
 
you sound like my comic is going to end the world....
 
random person 95 said:
you sound like my comic is going to end the world....

Well lets see, these are really good. The only prob is the way the buidings are the use of the overworld sprites. But the plot looks awesome.
 
the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey
 
random person 95 said:
the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey

I know. thats why its really good. You should keep up. We all start like this, then we get better and better and better.
 
i'm gonna make something interesting happen in the next 1, probably
 
random person 95 said:
the plot so far is just chicky blowing up evildude and a monkey
ur comic is getting better but whats with the F*****G ape
 
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