A RMT in need of completion (OU)

[Leonix]

Hello there fellows. Made some modifications since my last RMT so hopefully it's getting closer to where it should be. Oh, btw I'm using this team for wifi battles and no platinum moves plz, I use pearl. Cheers!

Bronzong @ Lum Berry
Ability : Levitate
Nature : Sassy (SDef + / Spd -)
Evs: 252 HP / 86 Atk / 80 Def / 92 SDef
-Explosion
-Stealth Rock
-Gyro Ball
-Earthquake

This guy is my lead this time around instead of gyarados. Any fire types DDdos is straight in there for a free set up. SR as standard and explosion for last resort.

Gyarados @ Life Orb
Ability : Intimidate
Nature : Adamant (Atk + / SAtk -)
Evs : 72 HP / 252 Atk / 184 Spd
-Dragon Dance
-Waterfall
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake

I couldn't bear to change this guy. He works too well for me.

Gengar @ Choice Scarf
Ability : Levitate
Nature : Timid (Spd + / Atk -)
Evs : 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast
-Destiny Bond

Made him a scarfgar and has now got a timid nature instead of hasty. Not much else changed really.

Salamence @ Life Orb
Ability : Intimidate
Nature : Rash (SAtk + / SDef -)
Evs : 120 Atk / 136 Spd / 252 SAtk
-Draco Meteor
-Brick Break
-Fire Blast
-Roost

A reasonable mixmence, but I feel like he needs replacing. Any ideas? Anyone??

Breloom @ Toxic Orb
Ability : Poison Heal
Nature : Jolly (Spd + / SAtk -)
Evs : 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
-Spore
-Seed Bomb
-Substitute
-Focus Punch

Breloom works very well as a subpuncher. I kept seed bomb over stone edge just cuz I felt I needed a grass move and someone else can cover him such as gyarados or gengar

Snorlax @ Leftovers
Ability : Thick Fat
Nature : Careful (Sdef + / SAtk -)
Evs : 204 HP / 52 Atk / 252 Sdef
-Rest
-Sleep Talk
-Body Slam
-Crunch

Snorlax is new and functions as my special wall and status absorber. Works well with these moves I find.

That's my updated team, so go ahead and rate it like crazy! ;D

 

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I'd lead with Bronzong. DD LO Gyarados can't lead worth ass. Donphan seems redundant, since most of your team is either resistance/immune to SR/Spikes.

I'd use something like Heatran/Gengar over Donphan to aid you in revenge killing, Choice Scarf of course.

 

[luke]

Why Hasty on Gengar. Go Timid. Also, Life Orb > Wide Lens. The accuracy boost isn't worth it.

 

[Dark Azelf]

Hi guys. This is my OU team which mainly consists of sweepers but I'm looking for a replacement for the last slot of my team so suggestions are welcome.


Bronzong @ Lum Berry
Ability : Levitate
Nature : Sassy (SDef + / Spd -)
Evs: 252 HP / 86 Atk / 80 Def / 92 SDef
-Hypnosis
-Stealth Rock
-Gyro Ball
-Earthquake / EXPLOSION

Is a better lead, Lum Berry for lead sleep inducers if you want to replace hypnosis like you said use a screen aka Reflect or Light Screen.

Another set on this which is nice is SR/Reflect/Light Screen / Gyro Ball@Light Clay, is annoying.

Gyarados @ Life Orb
Ability : Intimidate
Nature : Adamant (Atk + / SAtk -)
Evs : 72 HP / 252 Atk / 184 Spd
-Dragon Dance
-Waterfall
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake

k.

Gengar @ Choice Scarf
Ability : Levitate
Nature : Hasty (Spd + / Def -)
Evs : 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast
-Destiny Bond / Hidden power Ice / Explosion.

You have a HUGE Gyarados weakness, so use this to revenge kill it.


Salamence @ Life Orb
Ability : Intimidate
Nature : Rash (SAtk + / Sp.Def -)
Evs : 120 Atk / 176 Spd / 212SAtk
-Draco Meteor
-Brick Break
-Flamethrower
-Roost

Bump your spread to 280 to outspeed Lucario. White Herb is noob, Life Orb grants you with the kills you need.

Breloom @ Toxic Orb
Ability : Poison Heal
Nature : Jolly (Spd + / SAtk -)
Evs : 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
-Spore
-Seed Bomb
-Substitute
-Focus Punch

k


Donphan @ Leftovers
Ability : Sturdy
Nature : Impish (Def + / SAtk -)
Evs : 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
-Rapid Spin
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Knock off

Sure.

Comments in bold.


I feel Donphans slot could be used for something more productive.

 

[Skip Shot]

On Breloom, I prefer Stone Edge>> Seed Bomb. Gives you a lot better coverage, and Gengar, Mence, and Ninjask can't come in and set up on you as easily. Also, this team has a problem with physical Ape. Scarftran can also give you some problems, espceially the engshploding ones to kill Gyara with.

 

[MRE]

As odd as it may seem, jolteon gives this team trouble. subbing up on switches or just to sight what moves you will use it can easily atk with hp ice or tbolt and or baton pass to a counter free of damage as it outspeeds your team.....saying bolt beam owns you is rather redundant.


change gengar to scarfgar with hypno or d bond as this way you are to cripple or elimimate something.

discard donphan all together, consider mixpert
as your team is 5/6 immune to t spikes and you would have a back up sr

 

[ImmunityBow]

Your team is all standard, so there's not much to really discuss here. I'm not seeing Wide Lens on Gengar purely for Focus Blast. I'd much rather put Choice Specs/Scarf on there instead. Or replace something with Hypnosis. Items are really important, and so I'd even rather put Petaya on than Wide Lens purely for Focus Blast.

Your 3 ice weaks are not going to be very fun.

 

[Leonix]

Thanks for the tips. They are really apreciated. Have made some modifications, but could still use a little more guidance. Have a look at what I've changed n see what you think.