A waste of the not so good mind

[FaerieEsqueThing]

Episode 1: King Of the Elevated Land Mass
Episode 2: McPAIN

Episode 1 is a remix of an old comic I read a long time ago.

This is a new comic series I'm doing.

 

[Jeremy]

w00t! A King of the Hill spoof. Funny, sweetie.

 

[Draik]

Well, the styles dont match. Maybe you could use the regular Trainer Sprites :\

 

[armadilloHD]

The sprites are blurry, resizing with not paint programs is messy. I suggest writing a script as well, don't just make it up as you go along. Ask other people if your jokes are funny while creating a script. The king of the hill characters don't move at all. Find some good video game bgs for sprite comics. Really this wasn't funny. You don't get an A for effort. Since I could have made this in about 5 seconds. Rated: 2.3

 

[FaerieEsqueThing]

The sprites are blurry, resizing with not paint programs is messy. I suggest writing a script as well, don't just make it up as you go along. Ask other people if your jokes are funny while creating a script. The king of the hill characters don't move at all. Find some good video game bgs for sprite comics. Really this wasn't funny. You don't get an A for effort. Since I could have made this in about 5 seconds. Rated: 2.3

Alright, I don't CARE if YOU think it was funny, so be quiet.

Also, You focus on the details not the idea. Quit being a humor nazi. You're not an almighty god of what's funny or not.

 

[armadilloHD]

Alright, I don't CARE if YOU think it was funny, so be quiet.

Also, You focus on the details not the idea. Quit being a humor nazi. You're not an almighty god of what's funny or not.

That last sentance contradicts your first dude, I think you do care. Listen, if you don't take critism, then stop posting comics! We aren't going to stop calling them crap until you get better!

Plus, I don't have to, mr. minimod

 

[FaerieEsqueThing]

That last sentance contradicts your first dude, I think you do care. Listen, if you don't take critism, then stop posting comics! We aren't going to stop calling them crap until you get better!

Plus, I don't have to, mr. minimod

First of all, it's MISS. Second of all, I'm getting a mod on your butt.

 

[Sapphire Skitty]

HILARIOUS COMIC!!!! Love it!

BTW, don't start a fight here, when someone picks on you, ignore them.

 

[FaerieEsqueThing]

New comic! Episode 2! Check top post.

 

[Lokhlan]

Alright folks, here's the deal:

XxTour, please, please, try and work on accepting ANY form of critism (good, bad, hateful) a little better.

armadilloHD, giving out critism is great, but make sure it's reasonable. The line "You don't get an A for effort." was definitely not needed. Save the more mature/hardcore critism for the more mature/hardcore forums. This is Pokemoncommunity, not Ages 16 and up forums. Most people can't take crap like that here.

If there is any further BS from either of you in this thread, it'll be locked.

Have fun you silly willies! XD

 

[Draik]

Yay! It's pretty good! Just like Jeremy's. All you need to do is make some word bubbles and it'll be great ^_^

 

[FaerieEsqueThing]

Yay! It's pretty good! Just like Jeremy's. All you need to do is make some word bubbles and it'll be great ^_^

The speech bubbles didn't really work. :/ It looked better without.