[Other Original] Ace of Spades

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    Hi! I'm RedPanda, and you might know me by my sprites, but I felt like writing a book :). So, this is the completely unedited, except for spell checked, version of my novel Ace of Spades.

    Each chapter will be posted as I finish it, and under a new spoiler head. So, without further ado, here is Ace of Spades!

    Chapter 1
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    This is a WIP, and I will be posting chapters as I finish them, remember, I WANT YOUR FEEDBACK!!
     
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    First off, it's a better idea to post new chapters in a new post, that way people know the thread has been updated. Second, you can't really post a chapter that isn't finished, it's against the guidelines.

    Another thing, unlike regular writing, fanfiction is mean for the internet, meaning that people are reading your work on a screen. It can be hard at times to keep your place in a giant block of text. You need to space out your work, each paragraph having a full space in between it.

    Like.

    This.

    This way it is easier to read and you will be able to hold a readers attention. It'll also make the fic more attractive and less intimidating.
     
    Posting unfinished chapters isn't allowed, so I deleted your unfinished chapter from your post. Once you have it completed, feel free to post it. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to VM/PM me about it. I'd love to answer any questions you may have.
     
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