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ok guys and girls i am really sorry i was kinda out of my mind when i posted that so i am really sorry falseswipe and flax so i wont post anything like it again.
 
OOC: Can you use grammar please?

Kurt stood behind Eddie, "What should we do!" He exclaimed. He took out the pokeball that had been laying in his bag for so long. (I hope you dont mind If I use this),"Growlithe!" He said as a white light filled the arena and the pokeball cracked open. A small little dog-like pokemon stood there. "Growlithe, use ember!" The Pokemon spit flames around the Mutiguys, who had just noticed Growlithe. "Eddie, go help the professor while I hold off the Mutiguys!" Kurt said, trying to be a leader for once. "Growlithe use take down to get them away from the professor!" Kurt exclaimed once more. Growlithe nodded, and took of full speed into the group of Mutiguys.
 
Raffine was somewhat annoyed by the muti guys but she didn't care what she had to do as long as they were gone. "Ugh you Muti guys are nasty! Attacking a professor like that, how unrefined!" She yelled at them, she took a look at the professor then saw Kurt taking the lead, "Hey dont think you're taking the lead, we all need this practice." She said as she released her Lapras. "Lapras use Ice beam!" She commanded as the Lapras sent out a beam of ice at the muti guys. "Oh ho ho, thats right you muti guys dont mess with us." She said laughing at them.
 
Eddie looks at Kurt, hoping he knew what he was doing. "Right!" Eddie starts running around the Mutiguys, coming towards the scientist's aid. One of the Mutiguys gets hit by the beam of ice from Lapras, freezing solid on the spot. "Jah!!" It cried just before freezing completely. There's only four Mutiguys left. One of the Mutiguys have a red vein poping out from it's head. Facing towards Kurt's growlithe, the Mutiguy takes out a slingshot and aims at Growlithe. It launches a small peddle, which was actually an explosive bomb. BOOM!! An explosion strikes Growlithe. Another of the Mutiguys vanishes and reappears above Raffine's head, grabbing her hair. Hearts start spilling out from the playful Mutiguy's head as it laughs immaturely. The two remaining Mutiguys run at Raffine's Lapras like savages, raising their sticks into the air. "Chaw chaw chaw!!" The two chanted as they were heading towards Lapras.
 
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" Boy these things can spread fast " Tony said.
Furret jumped out in front ready for battle " thats the spirit boy now use thunderbolt ".
Suddenly an electric wave appeared round Furret and then the power was unleashed charging into the Mutiguys just missing the Growlithe assisting the professor " wow that was close to close for liking ".
He notice some of the Mutiguy where messing around on Raffine's Lapras " ah for gods sake wont you guys stay down " Tony shouted while releasing his Gligar " alright Gligar use steel wing right into those Mutiguy yes those things over there yes weird looking ones yes those things on the Lapras yes those just do it already.
But before Gligar could a Growlithe hit them first " now thats just not fair " Tony said.
 
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Growlithe falls backwards, obviously hurt by the explosive pebble. "Growlithe, use Take down to knock it into the the two others going for Lapras!" Kurt yelled. Growlithe charged again with whatever energy it had left to knock one of the Mutiguys straight into the two charging for Lapras. Kurt then ran over to Raffine and helped her throw the last of the Mutiguys into the big group. Kurt then looked back over at Raffine, "Use your lapras to finish them of." he said, looking at the recovering Mutiguys.
 
"With Pleasure." She said slyly, "Lapras use Surf!" Commanded Raffine. Lapras then sent a huge wave of water towards the muti guys washing them away. "Well they're gone, heh Not worth the trouble." She said as she laughed. "Lapras return, you did a very good job." She said as she walked up to Kurt. "Your Growlithe did good, I can help train it if you like, and possibly groom it." She said as she walked off to the professor. "Look you! Just what were you thinking? You think these Muti guys are harmless? You should've known better than to get near them!" Raffine scolded.
 
All four of the Mutiguys stack on top of each other. All of them start arguing randomly. What they're saying is not understandable, but they seem to be communicating through their own laungage which sounds like gibberish. "Ow! Get off of me!" "Your sitting on my head!" "No you are..!!" "Wait.. Who's sitting on who's head?" "Ow, my face." "... Who's feet is this?! Oh.. It's mine." The Mutiguys continue to blabber and argue, struggling to recover. Just then, the wave of water washes all of them away. They all scream with idiocy.

Eddie helps the scientist up, who stares at Raffine. One of his glasses' lens is broken. The scientist then looks like he's clueless. "Oooh, what? Nonsense! I heard that these creatures were quite malicious but in truth they are as dangerous as a small child playing with fire or explosives." Eddie makes a dumbfound face, along with the entire group. "That.. sounds really dangerous actually." The scientist replies back to Eddie in a calm way. "Yes, indeed it does. But I know a special trick on how to deal with those lil pests. Simply give them candy. They just LOVE it. The sweeter the kind, the better - and they'll fall asleep as soon as they take a taste. Trust me, I've done it before." Eddie makes a confused face. "... Then how come you didn't do that just a while ago?" The scientist answers, with a look of realization. "Oh.. Your right! Why didn't I do that? Oh silly me.. I forget such important things. It must this darn ol age." Eddie just.. stays quiet, along with the group. The scientist stands up straight. He was surprisingly quite short (though still taller then everyone). "Now! ... Who are you people? Ah, not like it matters anyway. I suppose I should thank you for rescuing me. I mean, for all I know, I could have been seriously injured during that attack. A broken arm would have impact my career." Eddie makes a normal face. "Well, er.. I guess we'll be going now. You should be more careful next time." The scientist replies back. "Oh don't worry! As part of my career, I have to be careful." Eddie then walks off, heading towards Shineside City. "Let's get going." Eddie turns around and faces toward the group. "Come to think of it.. Where does Aspen live?" The scientist overhears Eddie. "Aspen? ... What business do you have with Aspen?" Eddie looks at the scientist. "Well.. We came from Whitbon to meet Aspen. We've been told that this Aspen guy might have a solution that'll help someone in our town get better." Scientist gives off a cheery aura. "Well, your in luck! I can take you to Aspen's lab!" Eddie makes a pleased face. "You can?" The scientist nods. "Sure! It's the least I can do to pay back you kids for helping me out back there!" The scientist walks and heads in Shineside City. "Follow me!" Eddie and the group follows the scientist, setting foot in Shineside City.

Shineside City (Motto: Town of luminous life)
Eddie and the group looks around as they continue to follow the scientist. Shineside City is completely different from the quiet town of Whitbon. There were alot of people seen walking out on the streets. There were alot of tall buildings around. There was little open space as in constrast with Whitbon's wide open fields. Eddie is currently in awe. "Wuah.. So this is Shineside City? Amazing! It's so different from Whitbon!" The group passes by the largest building in Shineside - the building has a sign which has Flax Corp written on it. Eddie looks at the Flax corp building. "Flax Corp? What's that.. ?"
 
Theres so many buildings Tony thought " hmmmm i wonder if theres any good restaurants around ha ha huh whats that Eddie "
" What you dont know what Flax Corp is ha ha " Tony laughed.
" But then again i dont know much about it myself since i wasn't born in this region but ive heard that Flax Corp is a company that invents and manufactures new pokemon technology and im assuming this is there main building of production ha ha theres alot to be learned from this place but i dont know much more beyond what ive told you ha perhaps professor Aspen will know more ".
 
Echo had cooled down and saw everything that happened with his odd 360 degree eyes. Suddenly he stepped foot in Shineside city still clutching his steel rod in one of his hands very tightly , afraid that any more Multiguys came to crash the party he kept on his 360 degree eyes so he could target them and destroy them. He realized this place had something famillar about it , however he just couldn't grasp what was so familar about it. He quickly asked Tony " So how about that battle ? ". Then he realized a giant tower with a sign called " Flax Corp" then he slowly said "This place makes technology all over the eight regions how strange it seems like I remeber it from somewhere but where? ".
 
Kurt started straggling behind the group. He had never seen a city as amazing as this. Things were very different than anywhere he had been before. He realized he was about to lose the group so he ran up to back of the pile, and continued gazing around the scenic city. "I wonder what kinds of pokemon live here" said Kurt. He looked at the building marked Flax corp as well. He didn't really care about it, but he heard someone say that they make technology. The scientist was looking straight ahead, because he already knew the city so well. "So is Aspen like really famous around here or what?" Kurt asked the scientists as they continued walking
 
The Scientist ponders out loud. "Famous.. ?! Hmm.. I am not so sure actually. Never thought about that. You could ask the people around here." Eddie continues to look at the Flax Corp building. "New technology..?" The scientist looks at Eddie, looking quite shocked. "I'm quite surprised that you don't know about Flax Corporation! They're the sole reason why Pocket Monsters became so grand and popular in this small region!" Eddie looks at Scientist, feeling a little more perceptive. "I see."

The scientist then stops suddenly. "Ah! And here we are! The Pocket Monster laboratory!" Eddie and the group looks around the scientist, seeing a rather small old looking laboratory building. Compared to the other buildings that everyone passed by - the laboratory seemed a little.. bland and out of place. The scientist exclaims excitedly. "Now, let's head inside!"

Aspen's laboratory.
Inside, the building seemed alot more impressive and stylish. There were alot of bookshelves stacked with so many encyclopedias that it would be impossible for one person in their lifetime to read each one (most are just for show actually..). There were also two steel tables with typical chemistry equipment placed on top of them. On the far end, there appeared to be glass cases, which contained either red and white capsule balls (some opened while some were sealed closed), plants or live creatures (Ooc Note: These captive organisms happen to be the Starter Pokemon from the games).

Eddie and the group looks around. "So.. This is Aspen's lab?" Said Eddie, as he looks at the scientist. "... So. Where's Aspen?" The scientist gives Eddie an excited answer. "Well, you see--" Suddenly the group and the scientist then gets alerted and notices two people up ahead, complaining about something.

"Aaah.. What's taking the Professor so long? I can't wait any longer.. !" Cried a girl wearing a purple beret, dressed in mostly pink. (This is Raine, the female protagonist.) "... To think he had the nerve of telling us to get here early, only to end up wasting time waiting for the old geezer! What a pain.." Said by an annoyed young boy with spikey light brown hair, wearing a short sleeved dark green jacket over a white shirt, wearing indigo jeans. (This is Emil, the rival and antagonist!). Raine's faces puffs up from frustration and anger. "If I have to wait any longer, I'm gunna--" !! Emil notices Eddie and the group. "Hold it, Raine." Emil then approaches them and looks at the scientist. "It's about time you showed up, you ol geezer! What took ya?! And who are these guys? They better not be here for the same reason we have." Eddie looks at Emil. "What reason would that be?" Emil leers at Eddie and talks rudely. "Well.. To get our first Pokemon, doofus! Sheesh, why else would you come here?" Raine then walks over and approaches the group. She ignores everyone and just yells at the scientist. "Professor Aspen!! Can we finally get our Pokemon?! Me and Emil have been waiting for hours now!!" Eddie suddenly makes a surprised reaction. "Huh? Wait! Your Aspen?!" The scientist nods. "Yes. Indeed I am Doctor Matthew Lenning Aspen. Or.. simply just Professor Aspen, since people have been calling me that for so many years." Aspen then turns his attention toward Emil and Raine. "Alright, alright! Settle down, settle down now! I've just been assaulted not too long ago.. My back is killing me. But.. Not like that matters to anyone anyway, I suppose. Heck, I don't even care myself. It's all part of being a scientist anyway." Emil interupts Aspen. "Whatever.. Just let's hurry this up already! I've been patient for long enough!" Aspen coughs. "Yes, yes.. Settle down. I know your anxious about starting your journey. But first, let me deal with these guys first, okay? You.. You can go and check out some of the Pocket Monsters I have over there! Go, go on! Shoo!" Aspen pushes the two towards those glass cases mentioned earlier.

Both Emil and Raine are seen viewing the glass displays containing Pokemon. Raine is seen leaning on the glass displays containing a small blue turtle creature. "Wuaah.. This one's cute!" Emil is seen viewing a case containing a salamander-like creature with a flame burning on the tip of it's tail.

Aspen then meets with Eddie and the group. "I apologise for that. I had forgotten that a couple of new trainers were going to arrive here for their starter Pocket Monster. Silly me.. I'm so forgetful. I suppose I could just let them take one of those experimental foreign Pocket Monsters of mine but.. *cough* Never mind. Anyways! Yes! I am Professor Aspen! You wanted to see me, correct? So.. Er.. What was the reason why you wanted to meet me?" Eddie then explains. "Well.. We were told that you might have a solution for Alec's condition and that you could help us help him out." Aspen stayed quiet for a moment. "... Who's Alec?" Eddie scratches his head. "Well.. He's a someone who locked himself in his room. He won't come outside." Aspen then realizes and remembers. "Ah! Aaah! Oh, that Alec! I see. I had a discussion with his mother yesterday." Aspen pushes his glasses up his nose. "I personally didn't see what was wrong with the whole idea. Solitude is quite normal for a boy his age. But seeing as how worried and ill his mother looked, I felt it was necessary to help as much as I could. And personally this way, I can get a good analysis on one of my experimental Pocket Monsters which I have just caught recently." Aspen takes out something from his coat pockets. "Behold.." Aspen hands Eddie a red and white capsule ball. Eddie examines the ball. "This is..?" Aspen explains, sounding somewhat nerdy. "Inside this Pocket Ball, lies a magnificent creature! I believe it would be best to give this to Alec for him to embark on his own personal journey." Eddie then looks at Aspen. "Your.. going to make him become a Pokemon trainer?" Aspen shakes his head. "I never really said that but I suppose that's what I'm trying to aim at. Here. Take it. Give it to Alec." Emil then marches in. "Hey, hey! What do you have there Professor? ... Why are you giving away a Pokemon to him? I should have it! I bet I can take better care of it then those guys!" Aspen looks at Emil. "Oh, don't worry. You'll get a something more suitable for yourself, Emil. Just be a little patient. Because, you know the old saying; A little bit of patience can get you through anything! ... Personally I don't believe that myself but.. Just wait anyway." Emil grunts. He leers at Eddie and the group, and walks away - scoffing as he goes. Aspen then turns his attention to Eddie and the group. "Anyway.. Never mind him. Here, just take it." Eddie takes the capsule ball from Aspen's hands. Eddie then questions Aspen strangely.. "... Will this actually help Alec get better?" Aspen exclaims. "Of course! I'll gurantee you that it will help him! And perhaps in the long run, he will end up helping you!" Eddie stares at the capsule ball.
 
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Tony starred at Emil with a grim look on his face " what an arrogant....grrrrr someone should teach him lesson ".
After that Tony went up to Eddie and said " so why don't we take a look at whats inside this pokeball ".
He noticed that Eddie was just starring at the pokeball and so he decided to forget what he said and went up to Echo " alright im ready for that battle if you are I'll be waiting out side ok " Tony went outside like he said.
Now outside of the laboratory Tony had time to think well that was weird ha that Emil guy has got one ego on him ha it would be funny to see someone to just crush it though ha ha boy ive gotta learn to stop laughing ha ha hey wait a minute wasn't Eddie thinking of getting a Pokemon to? ha i wonder if he will oh wait I'll find out if i go back inside ha ha he goes back inside.....
 
OOC : Well if you drop your spot then we will have a reason to let Serene into the RP
 
(ooc: Alright Raven. Serene will be in your place I guess. Also, Not only am I speeding up even faster now - I'm making the prologue shorter. If some people feel like they've been left behind, don't worry so much. As long as your there for the FIRST chapter, then it should be fine. Heck, you shouldn't even care much about the prologue anyway, besides knowing the upcoming tradegic part..)


Eddie then puts away the capsule ball in his backpack. "Well.. Thanks, I guess. Hopefully this will help Alec." Aspen glares at Eddie, coughing. "Hmph! You seem to care awfully alot about that boy. Why is that?" Eddie makes a calm face, laughing. "I guess.. I just.. feel like I need to do something for him. I'd rather *waste* my time helping others rather then living my life by doing nothing. In my view, I believe that's how the world works." Aspen looks clueless but pretends he understand what Eddie said. "I see.. Well, then! Off you go! I got some scientific research to look at! Oh! And to take care of these meddling kids.. Er, I mean splendid enthuastic children! Well.. Run along! It's getting pretty late actually. Better not worry your folks back in What-bon. Go, shoo, shoo!" Eddie and the group then leaves.


Back on Shining Path, heading home..
Night is seen falling over the group. Strangely, Shining Path feels different then it was during the day. It feels very esoteric as a sense of calmness surrounds the group, soothing them mysteriously.
 
Tony was walking down the path with the group but by now he was extremely tired " boy as soon as i get back to town im going straight to bed " he yawns.
He then remembers what went down back in the lab and so rushes up to Eddie " hey that was one speech back there but seriously there has to be some reason why you want to help this kid i mean he didnt ask for your help did he im not trying to force you to tell its......well its like you have nothing better to do with your life which is not true so ermmmmm have ya got an answer for me " Tony says in a calm voice.
 
"Tired already?" Raffine saked Tony. "That was nothing, I bet you couldn't last a second in my mansion." She stated as she started giggling. She heard Tony comment on Eddie's speech. "Yes that was quite the speech Mr.Eddie, you seem to have a good heart wanting to help this guy." She said as she took out her mirror from her small handbag. "Amazing how I can go so far yet maintain perfect skin. Oh how lovely" She stated. " Mr.Tony you act as if helping one is a strange thing." She said as she began to look at him suspiciously. "Oh well, we got what we needed so lets head over quickly, it looks like its getting late and we wouldnt want to be attacked again." She said.
 
" There is nothing wrong with helping someone Raffine its just like i said Alec did not ask Eddie for help did he " Tony's calm voice disappears.
" I mean look at Eddie today he had the chance to start his own pokemon journey but insted he decides to help some kid and im not saying its a bad thing but lets be realistic how many kids would give up the chance of becoming a pokemon trainer for the reason Eddie has but remember i dont think Eddie has made the wrong choice but i think he has made the harder one ok ".
" Oh and by the way your skin ain't that perfect ha ha.....boy i needed that laugh "
 
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Eddie shuts his eyes. "It's true. Alec didn't ask for my help. But.." Eddie stays silent for a moment. "... Someone has to do something. It's not right to just let him suffer like that." Eddie clenches his fists tightly. "Especially since it was my fault that he.." Suddenly the group gets ambushed by a small group of red Mutiguys who jump out from a nearby bush. Surprised, the group steps back cautiously. "D-drat! It's those things again!" Yelled Eddie, who has opened his eyes. The Mutiguys take out sticks and slowly approaches the group. The group takes another step back, getting ready to fight back.

Suddenly, there's a great terrifying roar that shakes the ground, causing the group to fall down. The group panicks along with the Mutiguys. Suddenly, a giant shadowy creature with red eerie circular eyes emerges from behind the Mutiguys. This creature appears to have characteristics of a dinosaur, with ears like that of a rabbit's. It's back is covered in sharp needles. It seems to have a giant horn coming out from it's forehead. The creature roars fiercely once more, causing a terror to poison the group's minds. Eddie cried loudly in dread. "W-what.. What on earth is that..!!??" The Mutiguys fearfully charged at the creature in their small hopes of taking it down. However, the creature was undoubtably too strong for them. The creature knocks all the Mutiguys far away with it's forehead horn, sending them flying and vanishing from the scene. The creature turns it's attention to Eddie and the group, roaring a terrible roar once more. Eddie and the group recovers and get's up. "W-wha..?! I-Is this.. Is this another Mutiguy..?!" The creature makes grunts and choking noises as if it's in deep pain. Eddie glares at the creature. "... Whatever it is.." Eddie paused, as he takes off his backpack and places on the ground.
 
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