Mirei's lookin' good. I'd only suggest you to change the colors to
These, cuz Soara did it that way. Wonder why she changed.
You know how you made Mirei's boots and socks wrap around her leg looking like it wrapped upward. Because of the currrent perspective, you should do it curving downward. It confuses the viewer sometimes.
It's basically okay cept her skirt's a tad bit short but then again those Pokegirls can be ****s sometimes.
I cant rate Kamon right now cuz when I first looked at him, the pen I was sucking on broke in half. (your pic made me bite the pen in half)