Anonymous poem about shiny Charizard

[zommy08]

Pokemon Poems

My poems about certain Pokémon

1. Free-Verse (about shiny Charizard)
Oh Charizard, what happened to you? Your body is all black!
Here's the pile of unused Pokémon, and soon you're on that stack!
You used to be a shiny gold, now you look like burnt down wood.
You are the fire/flying type, to be that you also should.
I'm beginning to get angry; my spots are turning blue!
Haven't you realised? I'm an Umbreon. And I'm shiny. Just like you.

2. Diamante-Style Poem (about Kyogre and Groudon)
Legendary creature
Controller of typhoons
The sea fights the land
Two ancient rivals
Appears with the sun
Arose from lava

3. Free-Verse (about Moltres, Articuno and Zapdos)
A trio of birds
Wings of fire, ice and electricity
Flying around the land
Searching for a passionate trainer
Sparkling as they fly gracefully
Elemental powers

(the thread title is misleading but I don't know how to edit it)

 

[TJgamer]

1. Personally my favorite. It seems to have a bit of humor to it.

2. Good...but it seems to be incomplete in my opinion.

3. Again good, but unlike the previous poem, this one mentions all that needs to be mentioned.

 

[zommy08]

Thanks for the opinion. I'm trying to think of a poem about Pokémon which either rhymes, tells a story or is funny.
Random fact of the day: No. 1 was made IN BED! XD

 

[TJgamer]

Random fact of the day: No. 1 was made IN BED! XD

Actually, when I think about it, my mind is more active when I'm going to sleep. This is probably due to the fact that when your body is resting, your mind focuses more on your thoughts and not your actions.
Do you think so too?

 

[zommy08]

Interesting. However, it was just after I had an argument with a friend so I'm not sure lol.