Another Battle Tower team, please rate

[GonbeTR]

Please rate my Battle Tower team.

Physical Sweeper
Slaking @ Choice band
Jolly
252 Speed , 253 att, 6 HP
Shadow ball
Aerial ace
Brick break
Return

weakness: fighting
immunity: ghost
resistance: -

Sp.Sweeper/sponge
Gardevoir @ Lum
Modest / trace
252 sp.att, 252 sp.def, 6 speed
Calm mind
Thunder bolt
Psychic
Will-o-wisp

weakness: dark, bug, ghost
immunity: -t
resistance:psychic, fighting

Physical wall/pseudohazer/rapid spinner
Donphan @ Leftovers
Impish/Sturdy
252 Def, 128 Att, 128 HP
Earthquake
Rest / toxic/ ancientpower
Roar
Rapid spin / toxic

weakness: water, grass, ice
immunity: electric
resistance:poison, rock

 

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Please rate my Battle Tower team.

Physical Sweeper
Slaking @ Choice band
Jolly
252 Speed , 253 att, 6 HP You have 1 EV above maximum ^_~
Shadow ball
Aerial ace
Brick break
Return

Fine, but you might want Hyperbeam > Return. And were is EQ?

weakness: fighting
immunity: ghost
resistance: -

Sp.Sweeper/sponge
Gardevoir @ Lum
Modest / trace
252 sp.att, 252 sp.def, 6 speed
Calm mind
Thunder bolt
Psychic
Will-o-wisp

weakness: dark, bug, ghost
immunity: -t
resistance:psychic, fighting

Seems fine, Ice Punch_Firepunch are optional. But seeing that this is for RS and you probably won't have acces to Emerald I'll leave it this way. Destiny bond > WoW if you want

Physical wall/pseudohazer/rapid spinner
Donphan @ Leftovers
Impish/Sturdy
252 Def, 128 Att, 128 HP
Earthquake
Rest / toxic/ ancientpower
Roar
Rapid spin / toxic

weakness: water, grass, ice
immunity: electric
resistance:poison, rock

EQ_Bodyslam|Rockslide|Counter_Roar_Rapid Spin

Do mind that Counterphan is easily predicted. It has a good defense anyway, so won't do much damage. But it sometimes eats things alive. Oh and I wouldn't put EVs in HP. Useless.

 

[GonbeTR]

EQ_Bodyslam|Rockslide|Counter_Roar_Rapid Spin

I haven't an eq tm and I haven't Fire red.

I've ONLY Ruby.

 

[Lion Heart]

Okay Hyper Beam Slaking is a dicky idea.

Better to switch out and NOT let Slaking gets FP'd =/

And OMG putting Counter on a Donphan made it a Counterphan.

I'm gonna pull out my Surfcune now, or maybe my Thunderkou..

Could use my Subsir..

Anyway chuck Roar on Donphan if you do competitive battling against good players for real.

If they are all nubs, then buy Fire Red/Leaf Green and chuck Quake on him.

 

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

I believe the term Counterphan is used. Could be wrong.

 

[GonbeTR]

My donphan is 50 level @ leftovers
Relaxed
255 Ev Def, 155 Ev HP, 100 Ev Att
Earthquake
Rapid spin
Defense curl
Rollout

I can change defense curl with rest and rollout with roar. But now I can't get rock slide or counter or toxic.

Donphan's stats:
hp:173
att:145
def:187
sp.att:66
sp.def:74
speed:59