Archanine Pack/Rapidash Herd RP

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My tail was poised, ready to lash out in defense. "Come near me OR my pups, I swear I will whip you to shreads." I could smell his hunger, and I knew he wanted us.
((NOT POWER-PLAYING))
 
I looked around, and as I saw Volcano, I realized that she must have been what Alpha was sqwaking about. I flew down, loaded Alpha on my back, and hopped back to the nest. my nest was undisturbed most of the time. that was surprising. Then again if you were to battle a Flygon or a Houndoom, you'd probably pick the houndoom
 
OOC: SkarymoryRider I wasn't talking to you about power playing, I was talking to Legendary pokegirl.

IC: I just got ready to pounce on Volcano and licked my lips hungarly. "This time I'm not letting you live." I whispered to her in a deadly voice.
 
"You attack Volcano, you go through me FIRST." I growled bitterly. My fangs beared and my wings tightly folded.

OOC: I know, when I was describing the hunger smell, I was making sure I wasn't god-moding and decided to let you know. XD Sorry for the inconvinience.
 
OOC: I made up my own charecter Arcanine. I wasnt power playing!

I was happy to have a friend by my side. The pups were safe in the den. "Fine dont let me live, but some how you will pay" I said to Blaze
 
I didn't care, I lept up first, snarling and I landed on the Archanine's back. I kept light on my claws and then jumped behind him.
 
Going down on the ground because of the weight I slowly got up because I was so hungry, I hadn't ate in days. All of a sudden my eyes got blurry, I blinked fast and said, "I have to get something to eat. But I can't ask them, I'm a loner, they won't feed me. I guess I'll have to kill them to get some food." I said not noticing (nor caring) I was saying it out loud. I slowly got back into fighting position and got ready to defend myself in case of another assault. Then I noticed that I wasn't going to survive in the condition I was in, so I laid down on the ground wearily, and said, "Listen Volcano. I let you live back there. The least you could do is feed me, if you do I'll leave you alone for good." I said desperatly, but I hated saying that because I had to swallow all my dignity and pride to say it.
 
I flapped out of my nest to check for enamies, and noticing Blaze. and hearing his plea, my heart softened for a moment. I was immediatly distracted by noise near my nest. More Houndoom... at least they were easily delt with... I flew over, and scared off all but one with a roar. that one lept strait for Alpha. Overcome with unspeakable anger, I leaped forward, clamping my strong jaws around it's throat. I slowly suffocated it, not knowing what I was doing, just focusing on saving the kid. I finaly felt it go limp, and I knew the job was done
 
Noticing the fight with the houndooms, I slowly got up and found enough energy to use extreme speed and run up the tree to help. I'm getting soft, I used to be the most feared pokemon around, and now I'm friendly?' I thought to myself. But I arrived to late, the flygon had finished the houndooms. I said disgusted with myself, "Are you alright? And if you don't mind can I have the kill? I'm starving."

'Now I'm a begger? I have to do something to gain back my feriousness. But not now I'm too hungry to worry about it.' I thought as I asked the flygon.
 
"Don't worry (I shivered at the phrase, after all I am to be feared), Houndoom are my main source of food. Trapinch's have a bad taste. Although I like the taste of flygon." I said trying to regain my fearfulness. I grabbed the houndoom by the neck and jumped off the tree then running away from the den so I could eat the meal in privacy.
 
I took a deep breath, then recalled everything Crystal had ever told me about arcanine. There wasn't much, except that they had about the same stats of that legendary dog of fire.. too bad I couldn't remember the name ((or rather, forgot how to spell it))
 
OOC: okay, thanks

IC: I had let the "like the taste of flygon" go in one ear and out the other, as I didn't really belive it. after all, I had a huge type advantage over him, and no fire type in thier right mind would want to mess with a dragon. I considered going over to see Shadow, but I quickly replased that thought with the fact I no longer cared. as far as I was conserned, if they had gotten captured, it wasn't my problem.
 
After finishing the meal, I found a dirt path and followed it. The sounds of birds cirping filled the air, and every now you would hear the rustle of bushes. As I followed it, it took me to a clearing, with very high grass. I walked cautiously passed the clearing, because with my experience I know that anything from wirple to Entei could be lirking in the tall grass. I got to the spot were I had to cross into the grass because my den was on the other side and I didn't feel like going the long way. I felt reenergized and thought several times about going back to eat the Flygon and the others, but I was tired and wanted sleep.

I was in the middle of the field and I heard a low growl and ruffling in the grass. I stopped dead in my tracks, I was tired but not tired enough I couldn't kill anything in my way. I was just alittle tired, but still none the less, the growling stopped as soon as I stopped. I immediatly reconigzed the growl as a Houndoom. But I was soon corrected when 4 or 5 growling sounds came from the grass. I was surrounded on every side. 'I'm so stupid! Why didn't I know better. Oh, well. Houndoom I can take care of with out a sweat.' I thought as I the growling got lower, meaning the were getting ready to pounce. Then right before they attacked a thought flashed through my mind, 'I wasn't able to take down that Ponyta! What happens if my age is getting to me! She really should have been an easy kill. But I was really hungry so there for unable to unleash all my powers.'


Then the Houndoom attacked from all sides. I jumped of all four of my feet and sent a fire blast at the pack. Unfortunatly, while hitting the houndoom I set the whole field on fire. The houndoom ran and I was trapped in the middle of the flames. 'How am I supposed to get past this!? I could use fire spin to trap all the fire but that would make it worse. I have to do something quick or this whole forest is going down! I got it!' I thought to myself. I finally realized what I needed to do, although it would damage my rep. further. All I could think about was that Ponyta, I had to do something about it but what. I found the answer in one of my strongest attacks. I crouched down as the fire soon surrounded mw with no hope of escape, but there was one way. I use extreme speed and ran through the fire not taking any damage and then I ran around the field until a tornado formed and put out the flames by picking them up and creating a fire spin, then I commanded it to die down, because after it was my attack.

OOC: If you have been reading my guide on role-playing post, this is a perfect example of the length the post should be, and this is the perfect post. You might want to examine, not what the words mean, but what the content is, like puncutation, and grammar. Please notice that I was very descriptive, and added detail to where I felt neccessary, mainly in the appearance of the surroundings and my characters feelings.
 
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Paige: mommy who was that??!!

OOC: no more teachers I just got back from school!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
I heard something out in the meadow. After Blaze had left with food, I was happy. But what was that sound. I got up to investigate. When I reached where the sound was coming from, I saw Blaze fighting Houndoom. I sat down, amused with his power. Soon I realised that not even the most powerful pokemon can do everything. Soon I jumped into the battle. "Need any help?" I asked.
 
OCC: Oh sorry! I guess I missed that part!
 
Feeling the wind at my face I turned around to Volcano as I heard her call. I looked very peaceful as I always do after a battle. And I said gently, "No, I took care of it." Then I took a deep breath of forest air and walked calmly and peacefully back to my den where I laid down and watch Volcano, who was in the distance, I smiled at her and then I closed my eyes for an afternoon nap.
 
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