arrgghh I cant win at all :( please help

[purplegreendave]

I cant seem to win at all, well I've won once but that was a friend on his first battle ever and he pwnd me later.
I am sending out ttar no to see if it makes a difference but I dunno if it will.

Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 68 Atk / 188 SAtk
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Crunch
- Focus Punch
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt

Dragonite (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 240 Atk / 216 Spd / 52 SAtk
Lonely Nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Thunderbolt

Celebi @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 164 HP / 148 Def / 140 Spd / 56 SAtk
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Heal Bell
- Leech Seed
- Psychic
- Recover

Snorlax (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Thick Fat
EVs: 160 HP / 176 Atk / 104 Def / 68 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Double-Edge
- Earthquake
- Rest
- Sleep Talk

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 156 HP / 140 Atk / 156 Def / 56 SAtk
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Rest

Charizard (M) @ (No Item)
Trait: Blaze
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 1 Def / 252 Spd / 1 SDef
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Aerial Ace
- Earthquake
- Flamethrower
- Swords Dance


A complete revamp if necessary is ok

 

[ChrisG14]

Well, I'm not that good of a Team Rater, but I can make a suggestion. A bulky water would pretty much mess up your team. You have NO special sweepers. I'd use Bellyzarid and a Salac, but that's just me. Something like a Milotic would liven this team up.

Milotic @ Leftovers
Marvel Scale

-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Recover
-Mirror Coat

STAB Surf, Ice Beam for grasses and others, Mirror Coat keeps those Ludicolos at bay, and Recovor for a nice heal.

 

[Rubberbandman]

I cant seem to win at all, well I've won once but that was a friend on his first battle ever and he pwnd me later.
I am sending out ttar no to see if it makes a difference but I dunno if it will.

Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 68 Atk / 188 SAtk
Quiet Nature
- Crunch
- Focus Punch
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt

T-Tar is not a good starter, try Swampert for starting

Dragonite (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 240 Atk / 216 Spd / 52 SAtk
Adamant
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Thunder

Adamant for the Extra Boost, Thunder for some extra juice

Celebi @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 164 HP / 148 Def / 140 Spd / 56 SAtk
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Heal Bell
- Leech Seed
- Psychic
- Recover

Snorlax (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Thick Fat
EVs: 160 HP / 176 Atk / 104 Def / 68 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Double-Edge
- Earthquake
- Rest
- Sleep Talk

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 156 HP / 140 Atk / 156 Def / 56 SAtk
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Sleep Talk/ Surf
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Rest

Charizard (M) @ Salac Berry
Trait: Blaze
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 1 Def / 252 Spd / 1 SDef
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Belly Drum
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Substitute


A complete revamp if necessary is ok

Major Heracross weak, and T-tar weak too,and a spikes weak as well, needs something to take those kind of shots cause this team lacks a physical wall, I suggest skarmory:

Skarmory@Leftovers
Impish Nature
Substitute
Rest
Spikes
Whirlwind

 

[purplegreendave]

for those suggestions who do i replace?

 

[Alter Ego]

for those suggestions who do i replace?

I'd say Zard; it's the overall weakest poke on your team, it has the worst typing and it doesn't play well with sandstorm at all. Between Snorlax, Dragonite, and Tyranitar you've got your physical needs well covered anyway, so it's not really doing anything irreplacable either. Pulling of a successful sweep with Bellyzard is easier said than done.