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Attempt #2 @ OU

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    Gallade @ Muscle Band
    Adamant Nature
    252 Atk/252 Spd/4 HP
    Steadfast
    Swords Dance
    Close Combat
    Shadow Sneak
    Stone Edge

    Blissey@Leftovers
    Calm
    40 HP / 252 DEF / 216 SP.DEF
    Natural Cure
    Seismic Toss
    Thunder Wave
    Softboiled
    Aromatherapy

    Mismagius@Leftovers
    Timid
    116 HP / 140 Sp.A / 252 Spe
    Levitate
    Substitute
    Shadow Ball
    Calm mind
    Hidden power Fighting

    Steelix@Leftovers
    Relaxed
    Rock head
    252 HP/ 120 att / 136 sp.def
    Gyro Ball
    Stealth Rock
    Earthquake
    Roar

    Starmie@Leftovers
    Timid
    Natural Cure
    160 HP / 132 SP.ATT / 216 SPEED
    Surf
    Thunderbolt /Ice Beam
    Recover
    Rapid Spin

    Salamence@leftovers / Life orb
    224 HP / 12 ATT / 192 DEF / 80 SPEED
    Jolly Nature
    Dragon Dance
    Roost
    Dragon Claw
    Earthquake

    KK, I switched out TrapPasser Umbreon for BulkyMence to support Steelix,
    Updated Gallades set. Shadow Sneak ownz :)_
     
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    Gallade@ChoiceBand
    Adamant Nature
    64 HP / 252 Atk / 192 Spe
    Steadfast
    Psycho Cut
    Close Combat
    Ice Punch
    Night Slash

    Or your walled by floaty psychics and ghosts.

    Blissey@Leftovers
    Calm
    40 HP / 252 DEF / 216 SP.DEF
    Natural Cure
    Seismic Toss
    Thunder Wave / Toxic
    Softboiled
    Aromatherapy

    This team cant absorb status.

    Mismagius@Leftovers
    Timid
    116 HP / 140 Sp.A / 252 Spe
    Levitate
    Substitute
    Shadow Ball
    Calm mind
    Hidden power Fighting / Thunderbolt

    Sub CM = beast.

    Steelix@Leftovers
    Relaxed
    Rock head
    252 HP/ 120 att / 136 sp.def
    Gyro Ball / Toxic
    Stealth Rock

    Earthquake
    Roar

    yep ^^

    Umbreon@Leftovers
    Bold
    Synchronize
    252 HP/152 Sp.Def/100 Def
    Mean Look
    Baton Pass
    Toxic
    Wish


    no.

    Starmie@Leftovers
    Timid
    Natural Cure
    160 HP / 132 SP.ATT / 216 SPEED
    Surf
    Thunderbolt /Ice Beam
    Recover
    Rapid Spin

    Comments in bold


    Well, your Heracross/breloom, basically ANY fighter weak, i would suggest bulky mence in umbreons place


    Salamence@leftovers / Life orb
    224 HP / 12 ATT / 192 DEF / 80 SPEED
    Jolly Nature
    - Dragon Dance
    - Roost
    - Dragon Claw
    - Earthquake

    Your also exceeding tyranitar weak

    Machamp >> Gallade IMO.
     
    CB Gallade. Ew.

    Go with
    Gallade @ Lum Berry
    Adamant Nature
    252 Atk/252 Spd/4 HP
    Steadfast
    - Swords Dance
    - Close Combat
    - Shadow Sneak
    - Stone Edge

    Now you've got yourself a good lead! Close Combat OHKO's Bronzong after a Swords Dance, and Shadow Sneak makes Gengar go cry in a corner. After an SD, Stone Edge OHKO's Gyara even when we take Intimidate in account.
     
    Personally, I'm not so much of a steelix fan in OU. Bronzong does the job much better. Even though steelix has a far better defense stat, being hit super effective by earthquake while bronzong is immune to all ground moves kind of eliminates his defensive capability to powerful pokemon like salamence or Donphan. Also his Sp.Def is horrible, so he will get destroyed by any water or fire attack from a strong special sweeper. So I'm gunna change this to Bronzong.

    Bronzong @ Leftovers
    Sassy
    Levitate (important here, so it gives it immunity to ground moves)
    0 speed IV (if this is for shoddy, if wifi, give it as low of a speed IV as possible)
    252 HP, 128 Atk, 128 Def or Sp.Def (sp.def gives him better protection from fire, as he is already well protected from nearly all physical moves.)
    Gyro Ball
    Stealth Rock
    Earthquake/Confuse Ray/Reflect
    Hypnosis

    Now you'll be able to wall lots of things efficiently which isn't strong with fire. Don't get me wrong, Steelix does a decent job in UU, but he just isn't OU material.
     
    Steelic is very much underrated. he is still a good tank with the right support, for example, Gyarados.
     
    Gallade@ChoiceBand
    Naïve Nature Jolly
    252 Atk/252 Spd/4 HP
    Steadfast
    Psycho Cut
    Close Combat
    Ice Punch
    Stone Edge Night Slash

    Yep

    Blissey@Leftovers
    Careful Calm
    252 Def/80 SpA/176 SpD
    Natural Cure
    Seismic Toss
    Thunder Wave
    Softboiled
    Thunderbolt/Ice Beam/Flamethrower

    Mismagius@ Life Orb
    Calm Timid
    252 Sp.Atk/252 Spd/4 HP D_A's set
    Levitate
    HP Fighting/Tbolt
    Shadow Ball
    Substitute
    Calm Mind

    Uh-huh



    Steelix@Leftovers
    Adamant
    Rock Head
    252 HP/152 Sp.Def/100 Def/4 Atk
    Rock Slide
    Protect
    Earthquake
    Double-Edge


    Better choices.


    Umbreon@Leftovers
    Bold
    Synchronize
    252 HP/152 Sp.Def/100 Def
    Mean Look
    Baton Pass
    Toxic
    Wish


    Outdated

    Starmie@Leftovers
    Timid
    Natural Cure
    252 Sp.Atk/252 Spd/4 HP D_A's set
    Surf
    Ice Beam/Recover
    Rapid Spin
    Thunderbolt/Recover

    Comments in bold. Umbreon and Steelix are severely outclassed.
     
    Hold on, Steelix may not be the right choice, but Umbreon certainly isn't being used to his potential. He can't afford them here, but those two are still pretty viable pokes. Especially Umbreon, since Steelix is outclassed somewhat. That's because Umbreon isn't a wall, like everyone is trying to use him as. He isn't even a sponge. He's a uility poke, meant to help his mates.

    That said, Umbreon isn't helping anyone. Why's everyone so slow?
     
    Hold on, Steelix may not be the right choice, but Umbreon certainly isn't being used to his potential. He can't afford them here, but those two are still pretty viable pokes. Especially Umbreon, since Steelix is outclassed somewhat. That's because Umbreon isn't a wall, like everyone is trying to use him as. He isn't even a sponge. He's a uility poke, meant to help his mates.

    That said, Umbreon isn't helping anyone. Why's everyone so slow?

    Umbreon is outclassed as a utility Pokemon.

    Anyway, Wacan Bite Gyarados can actually hurt this team, and considering that it's becoming slightly popular, it can fin itself hurting this team.
     
    What other poke can both trap AND Wish? And pass them both?

    Gallade can switch in & hurt Gya.
     
    I'll say that Steelix going massively offensive like that is worthless, and that there are probably some better choices out there for his team; That by far means that Steelix does not have a place in OU time to time. Then again, that could be jsut my opinion ofr anything that goes BOOM!

    Steelix @ Leftovers
    EVs: 252 HP/ 252 Def / 6 Atk
    Nature: Impish/Relaxed
    -Stealth Rock
    -Roar/Toxic
    -Earthquake/Gyro Ball
    -Explosion/Gyro Ball

    My favorite way to use him is to switch him in on physical sweepers rampage that is not bulky or at least hurt a bit and Explode in their face. I would only have him around for a team that really fears physical sweeping though. Have EQ around so a taunt doesn't make you have to explode, if you can predict a special sweeper coming in, Roar or BOOM! My problem with him is his lack of speed. And sadly Gengar switching in on almost anything he does screws with him so much (Toxic immune, EQ immune, Explosion immune, eww.)

    In short, I'm just agreeing with Sims.

    EDIT: Smeargle can do what Umbreon does!..
     
    Still, as uber as Steelix & Umbreon is, I gotta say, they don't fit on this team. Steelix benifits by being paired up with something else that's bulky, and Umbreon doesn't helpthis team at all.

    EDIT:Ah, but Smeargle isn't as "bulky". And he's ugly.
     
    I might as well not rate the team since half the time Sub/CM Mismagius will sweep. Seriously that thing is incredible. Use the set Dark_Azelf gave you because it is so fun to mess with ^.^

    Anyways, if you're going to use Steelix, It's going to need support from Salamence or Gyarados or it isn't walling anything. Both cover all four of its weaknesses though so they're quite helpful. at the very least it needs Gliscor, but you'll need something to wall Kabutops, Gyarados, and those fellas.

    BTW run:

    Steelix @ Leftovers
    Trait: does it matter lol
    EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SDef
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Stealth Rock
    - Earthquake
    - Roar
    - Ice Fang

    Ice Fang because it happens to be the best Outrage resist in the game =D Steelix is pretty flexible with its moveset so do what you want with it.
     
    Question: Mismagius' substitutes can't really take a hit, so should hypnosis have a place on this team?
     
    Question: Mismagius' substitutes can't really take a hit, so should hypnosis have a place on this team?

    The idea, is to Calm Mind behind the substitutes to make them unbreakable with sp.attacks =/.

    The Misdreavus/Mismagius line cannot learn Hypnosis iirc, not since G/S/C....
     
    I might as well not rate the team since half the time Sub/CM Mismagius will sweep. Seriously that thing is incredible. Use the set Dark_Azelf gave you because it is so fun to mess with ^.^

    Anyways, if you're going to use Steelix, It's going to need support from Salamence or Gyarados or it isn't walling anything. Both cover all four of its weaknesses though so they're quite helpful. at the very least it needs Gliscor, but you'll need something to wall Kabutops, Gyarados, and those fellas.

    BTW run:

    Steelix @ Leftovers
    Trait: does it matter lol
    EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SDef
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Stealth Rock
    - Earthquake
    - Roar
    - Ice Fang

    Ice Fang because it happens to be the best Outrage resist in the game =D Steelix is pretty flexible with its moveset so do what you want with it.

    Oh my Gosh! Didn't I JUST say this! No, not trying to be nitpicky, but I said these exact same things in another thread! I even said that he needs Gya support! It's just so...ironic.
     
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