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B/c reviving my art topics with new art is a flop...-_-

Housyasei-san

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    They're great!
    the gardy's shading and lighting is beyound compare! I lover her expression and how well she was drawn! she's just a bit too thin for my liking, might want to thicken her body a little ^_^
    Gadry looks completely recoverd from the thin problem, only right eye (right to veiwer) is a bit odd, her Iris is very thin compaired to her other eye which is very thick. Her hair looks very thin, you might want to thicken that XD like put a little strip of hair over the earm everyone has that.
    This next one is VERY good, I like how you made her 'skirt' see through and her head bigger than her body, which is exactly the perfect way to use perspective. I find her eye too small for her head, you might want to enlarge it by a little bit
    I have no comments on the last one, it has nothing wrong with it whatsoever, it is perfect 10/10
    the May one again lacks hair in the back XD just add little tufts or hair and she'll be fine ^_^ her face is amazing! just I beleive she's missing a chin XD
    Gardeva in the last one is drawn the best out of all of them, only problem is I have no idea what's going on, who's the boy in the box? Why is he in the box? Anyway it's drawn VERY well, I think your pics overall say "Gardevea master" XD great job on them ^_^
     
    Lizzie said:
    the May one again lacks hair in the back XD just add little tufts or hair and she'll be fine ^_^ her face is amazing! just I beleive she's missing a chin XD
    Gardeva in the last one is drawn the best out of all of them, only problem is I have no idea what's going on, who's the boy in the box? Why is he in the box? Anyway it's drawn VERY well, I think your pics overall say "Gardevea master" XD great job on them ^_^
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    Thank you for your comment ^^

    If you look at a front view of May in the anime, she just has 2 strips of hair on the side...
    And why that guy is in that box? That's an icecube and the only way to melt that is if Garde gave back his PJ top...

    I still open for C&C....anyone? :nervous:
     
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