"Baby Girl"

[<<-_Lord-Krishna_->>]

Ok heres yet anotha quick rap, enjoy. XD

Baby girl why'd you leave me? All I wanted was ya happiness
Was it a mistake to love you?
I thought our relationship had grew
Thought it was strong and mature
Why'd you leave me?
Was it cuz of my ways? I just dont get it we was gonna marry..
And know I feel deafeated and weary...
Forgive me for whatever I did I never meant to make ya mad
I was tryin to get ya glad
Please take me back we been through much togetha to turn back
I know I somtimes lied, It is truth that I sometimes lack
I will never hurt ya again if thats what I did
I alway gave ya da mornin bread
I worked so hard to keep ya dressed
Remember that 2,000 dolla dress?
If it was cuz I cheated Ill never do it again
I know I might be hopless like a druoght in da rain
But beleive I would change to again be your boyfriend...

 

[Kyosuke]

Once again a pretty good rap, it could use a small chorus to add more to it, but its still good alone without one.

The lyrics are nice, but at the end its like you tried to force too many 'punchlines', but thats just me.

I enjoyed it ^^