Birth of Legends (Rated PG-17)(OOC/SU thread)

Um... Dude, this is kind of a mess. The grammar and pacing is just... Wow... And not in a good way. Please clean it up... A lot... And the Personality is pretty short. So... I can't accept this. Clean it up, make the personality longer, and resubmit it, and I'll take another look. Until then, you're stuck with your first character.
 
I'll fix it later. Sorry, and for some reason my character seems like he would move tribes after he gets together with the glaceon, or he just ends with him and her together, or (More Exciting option) He dies after going to battle with the sea tribe and gets killed because he got sidetracted by her, or.... The most likely option is he convince her to live with him and he grows up and continues with the Supernatural storyline, I do hope that I can use the Tavira Horse First Back Sequence(Tavira Horse Second Back is the one without confusion, the Tavira Horse Second/First is the one where he does the confusion and psybeam on the spot and then the tackle dogde and the ending bit) and others in battle.
 
I have no idea what you were talking about at the end, but if you get into a fight, go ahead and try it.
 
More Sea tribe members!? Yessir! I got a little busy there for a little bit, but hopefully it won't affect my posting speed so much anymore. I'll get to back to posting now :D
 
Lol, you guys.

Well, it's just that in my post I called for Rala. I was wondering if she was in the tent or not and what I should do. I can heal the hurt soldiers with Wish :D

Are you still accepting members for any tribe? If so, could I make a second character? Or would that be unfair for the other people who haven't joined?
 
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Well, you can play Rala for this. But there are no injured soldiers yet. There hasn't been a fight yet.
 
:\ So what's up with the Snivy thing? Is he really a spy 'cause I don't think so. Is he gonna be alright? Exactly what tribe is he in right now?
 
He is currently in the Mountain Tribe. Though he's a prisoner. Yellow is currently on her way to free him, with Getis's approval. He is not a spy, merely a pawn in the games that the Supernatural Tribe is playing with the two tribes. XD
 
Ok, since you haven't been following that well, I'll explain. Talmire, the Snivy, is from the Forest Tribe. He was captured by the Supernatural Tribe, and they claimed he was a spy. They turned him over to the Mountain Tribe to make them become friendly. The Supernatural Tribe wants the Forest Tribe and the Mountain Tribe at war, so they set this whole scheme up. But I will not tell you why they want a war.
 
Guys... We can't have too many characters. But I will let you make a few NPCs, like Riley. XD Just don't get carried away with it, and keep the focus mainly on your own characters.
 
Hey Nideous, can I borrow control of Gasper for my next post? Or would you rather I imply that my character met him?
 
Sure, you can use him. The only NPCs I forbid everyone to use are Rene, Bornis, The Elder Primes, Fin, Monart, Mirin, and Razor! Everyone else is fair game, just keep their personalities and history in mind when you use them. XD
 
Oops! I accidentally used Itchin the carvanha in my post! sorry! If You don't want me to I'll edit it. Again, I didn't know, I'm real sorry.
 
Um, was Itchin one of the names that I said no one could use? Nah, you don't have to edit. Feel free to use anyone except the ones I named. XD
 
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