bobbys unknown ice life

bobby13icelife

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    this comic is only 2 be looked out do not print out and sell for money
    this is a pokemon version gone wierd your starting pokemon is goldeen
    or pikachu the pokedex are now called TRADE and lets you trade to leaf green
    fire red and my other game danger dark gem your starter is at level 15 (goldeen) level 13 (pikachu) the rare pokemon are regi ice regi rock and regi steel right more 2 come
     
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    Just a lot of talking, bad grammar and no action.
     
    Jarman said:
    Just a lot of talking, bad grammar and no action.
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    plus bad sprite quility, it's blurry and Goldeen has an HM movwe as a starting pokemon?...doesent really work
     
    well who ever liked it thanx and who dosnt give me some tips please

    heres part 2
     
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    bobby13icelife said:
    well who ever liked it thanx and who dosnt give me some tips please

    heres part 2
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    You could start by using proper grammar and spelling. Also, use text bubbles, not text boxes under the comics. And don't save each frame seperately, put them all together and save them like that.
     
    ok thanx good tip if you want send me your sprites and i will put them on
     
    I might aswell call it quit if no one help me coz i dont understand all about making comics
     
    can I be in here's my sprite I'll help you in PM. Here is me:
    [PokeCommunity.com] bobbys unknown ice life
     
    If this is your first sprite comic, it could use some work but it's not an eye-killer. Work on your grammar and spelling (sorry if I seem like a hypocrite here, but I make too many typos and then i'm too lazy to correct them) a lot. If you've made comics before, four thumbs way down.
    1/10
     
    ok

    ok i will put him on i might use him for a gym leader im not sure
     
    Sorry For Double Posting But Heres a Updated Version of Part 1
     
    next time edit your post, Here's some info about me. His name is Adam, and his Mew never goes in it's ball, just some info about my character
     
    im board no one is talkin i mightclose it coz now im in the hackin biz
     
    Hi im bk

    ive kinda give up on this one ut heres the new 1
    [PokeCommunity.com] bobbys unknown ice life
    the other 9 will be put on if you like it ive gt 10 there might be a b letter on it missing coz ive got a half broken b key
     
    oh no i love this thread because i made my first ever comic please dont delete
     
    i no but every 1 allowed 1 mistake here ??

    please dont close it
     
    You left this thread too long so it's too old of a thread to be revived, therefore it must be closed. However, you can still make another thread for your Sprite Comic, providing that from time to time you keep it active. Avoid leaving your thread inactive for a long period of time then reviving it. Because the rules state that threads that are over a month old must not be revived, as they would end up being closed.
     
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