[Pokémon] Brenden's Adventure In PokeLand (CYOA)

[Ho-oh 112]

Before you ask CYOA means choose your own adventure.

Intro: Everyone prepare for this comedy I'm going to make The Pokemon World (From the first pokemon mystery dungeon games) is going to be infiltrated by a human from the Hoenn Region Brenden....

Chapter 1: Swampert and Brenden

Brenden: SAILING THE OCEAN ON MY SWAMPERT, ACTING LIKE A MINDLESS IDIOT!!!

Swampert: Swa-Swampert (Gee this guy's a nut job...)

Brenden: Man, when are we going to do somthing fun!?!?

Swampert: SWAMPERT!!!! (I'm not a guy for the last time I'm A GIRL!!!!)

Brenden: Hey, let's go to Mosdeep City! I'm so bored maybe Steven can find something for me to do!

Chapter 2: Steven and The Weird Request

Location: Mosdeep City, Steven's House
Time: Eh, doesn't really matter...

Brenden: STEVEN, I WANT TO DO SOMETHING I'M SO BORED!!!

Steven: Alright, get me some yabber doodles!

Swampert: *Thinking* Gee, if anyone even someone as mindless as Brenden can see he's making the yabber doodles up... *Thinking*

Brenden: Alright Swampert! Let's get some yabber doodles!!

Swampert: *Thinking* Yeah, I should run away from this mindless ninkenpoop... *Thinking*

Steven: *Thinking* Wow, he must have fallen from Mt. Chimney when he was a baby... *Thinking*

Brenden: Alright swampert let's go!!

Swampert: Swa-Swampert!! (No you fool I'm running away!)

Chapter 3 : Swampert runs away

*sound of swampert running*

Brenden: Oh great, that's the 11th one this week...

Steven: Wow, you are a crappy Trainer!

Brenden: *sniffle* Take that back you big meany!

Steven: Why!?! I meant it!

*Brenden leaves building ready to comit suicide*

Brenden: Alright here I go into the water with these 10 lb. Weights...

*Brenden jumps into water with the weights and sinks and a glowing light appears and warps him into PokeLand...*
Chapter 4: ????

Please post your ideas for chapter 4.

1. Meets a Mudkip
2. Meets a Torchic
3. Meets a Treeko
4. Other (please post details)

 

[starlightmint72]

Here's something:

4. Other
Brenden sees an Arceus, but it only turns out to be an Absol. Then, the Absol runs away and he finds himself stuck with a Torchic who's so scared about something that it's ready to pee itself.

 

[bobandbill]

Sorry, but only well-written script fics are allowed as per the FF&W rules - that means that some description/narration is also needed. I'll also suggest taking your time with writing - it seems to be typed up in the reply box (if so, use a word processor like Word, Wordpad, Openoffice (free) or google docs (also free), etc... to save your work and edit) as stuff like, say:

Location: Mosdeep City, Steven's House
Time: Eh, doesn't really matter...

feels rather tacked on as an after thought - try to expand on description so we know what the house looks like, and if the time doesn't really matter...there's no need to tell us that as it's a distracting addition to the story.

I'll also note that CYOS more stray into RPs (role plays) rather than stories which serve the same idea of people adding their characters and joining in the writing, so I suggest trying this again there. Check out the RP rules thread and guides as well for additional info (not moving this there as it may be breaking some rules of that section too).