British Poem....Cos it seems original enough

[fango pango]

From cups of tea
To cricket bats
From Sherlock Holmes
To football prats
From bad weather
To dirty seas
Britain ain't the place for me​

I know its short...but I think it's a good poem
And it's completely wrote by me XD

 

[TJgamer]

This is a short, but also silly piece you've written.
It doesn't really make sense, but I don't think it's supposed to.
I like how the last line goes. It's what really gave this poem the silly theme.
Great job!

 

[fango pango]

Thanks
It is supposed to be silly,as most poems i see bout britain are saying how great we are
so i did something the opposite
glad you like :)

 

[Zeffy]

This insults me. The fifth and sixth lines makes me really want to hate this poem. >.<
Anyways, good job I guess.

 

[fango pango]

Zeffy
I'm not serious you know
it's merely a joke
a spoof of all the normal british poems
XD

 

[refep]

I love this poem!
Though you could have gone without insulting cricket....

 

[Astinus]

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