Brocks Legacy Of Revenge!

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Mr_Plow7

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    Chapter 1 : Ash Must Pay!

    It was one day when i noticed that Dawn was eating grape and said to me "give me a napkain" it was the nicest thing a girl ever said to me.My name? Ha i laugh at it,Since i was a boy people called me "Brock" with a silent "b" but when they did call me that name i would sent out geodude to sack them, I would tell geodude to boulder smash their balls when they have the best chance and when i would fight a water type i would just say self destruct and kill the pokemon.Well lets go back to reality, I knew that it was love in first sight.I was spying on Dawn but always seeing Ash with her, I figured they were just friend's so when Ash was gone i stepped up to Dawn and said " I love you Dawn, will you be my first hand woman for the rest of my life"? Dawn replied " I cant i only love Ash and only Ash ".
    thats when I decided to eliminete Ash.

    To be Continued.
     
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    Chapter 2: Rattata Poison

    It was morning. Ash and Dawn were a sleep so i prepared some cereal and left the bowl on the table.Ash and Dawn soon woke up and so i took out Rattata poison and sprayed it at one of the cereal.

    Then I quickly took back in the Rattata poison into my pocket before Ash and Dawn got here. Ash was finished early while Dawn took her time brushing her hair. I could'nt take the pain of killing a best friend for a lousy girl which I had loved recently.

    I was nervous of killing Ash but when Ash and Dawn arrived
    Ash said " Cereal again, Why cant we ever have pancakes you lousy cook"!When i heard what Ash had said I was so angry that I was glad Ash was gonna die. But I was nervous of who was gonna take the Rattata poison.
     
    1. this is the best one you have wrote so far
    2. there isn't very many grammical errors just misplaced words really
    3. and it actually make sense
    so keep up the good work
     
    thx read fat tony secret life it doesnt make sence but its funny and also thx again
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    Chapter 3 : Unsuspected Death

    Brock was excited that Ash was going to be rid of his life but at the same time Brock trembled in fear of what Dawn would react like.Would she cry,never date,or even suicide? Brock could'nt wait much longer so he said " Dig in you guys"! As Ash and Dawn Dug up the poke flakes(cereal) Brock trembled yet again with excitement and worries.As Dawn and Ash shoved a spoon full of poke flakes, Dawn fell back on her head.Ash did'nt much care as he thought Dawn was only fainted but Brock knew the truth so Brock came to her and lifted her as Brock's eye's cried and sobbed. Brock could'nt breath well, so Ash thought this was serious but what was more shocking was that Dawn had die.Brock hated Ash more then ever, As Brock wanted to punch Ash in the face and send him to eternal Poke-hell.

    P.S. hoped you liked it.

    To Be Continued.
     
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