Broken Hearts

[Kishijoten]

Yellows are smiles
and Tears are blue
you always seem to
hang out with her.

I thought it would end
quicker than soon but
I guess my prediction
didn't come true.

There were rumors about you
two, hanging out from midnight to
dawn, guess you two wouldn't end so soon.

All my plans I try so hard just overflows
right into the quicksand.

I cry in sorrow but you couldn't see
the hidden tears inside me.

Soon one day you bought her a
forgotten gift in a early late day.


In December you guys broke up with
a electrifying messege that broke your
hearts.

by~ NinetalesSakura


Well do you think it was good?

 

[♥~*Abby*~♥]

Well... I'm not so good at rating poetry. It's pretty good! ^_^

 

[N-XIGE]

Well; I wont criticise...

But honestly; based on the beginning...7.5/10 (concept is good)

 

[Dny]

I am not too good in poetry But that was pretty good

 

[Jeremy]

Well sweetie, I like it. ^^; It's pretty good and quite sad, sweetie.

 

[N-XIGE]

You know; poets are really good at rapping...especially when they are mad.