Brothers In War.

[DaVinci]

Brothers In War.​

Ben and Leon are both brothers. One is a natural trainer who is kind freindly and clever and the other a genious who knows many stragetys but owns no pokemon. Together they wish to end the war between the Elite Four and Team Rocket but first they must visit there cousins old home town... Pallet Town. Warning may have some Journeying but otherwise as orgianal as I can be. PM me if you wanna guest star.

From Left To Right

Name: Ben
Age: 17
Gender:Male
Pokemon: Squirtle, Pidgey, Beedrill and Nidoran ( female)
Text Colour: Black

Name:Leon
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Pokemon: None
Text Colour: Red

Name: Phil
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Koffing, Abra and Ghastly
Text Colour: Brown

Name:Bob
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Koffing, Ekans and Diglet
Text Colour: Brown

Name:Red
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Pokemon: ??????
Text Colour: Blue.

Comic 1: Brothers With A Dream.

Chapter 1#

Page 1#

Credit To: Spriters Resource, KyleDove.

 

[[NovaPirate]]

Obviously work on grammar, and watch what you're saying, not even rockets break into their own bases. Also, you said that one guy has no poke'mon, yet both trainers use poke'balls to return the poke'mon.

 

[DaVinci]

Well Leon borrows a pokemon so he carries the pokeball with him. Grammar I will work on and what do you mean by rocket breaking into there own base? They were just two guys standing by soon to be introduced as Phil & Bob.

 

[[NovaPirate]]

One d00de says "Now, you guys were going to break into your base." so?

 

[DaVinci]

oops lol my bad thats not quite right I will fix it when possible...