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Bugcatcher: Sam

Goatman56

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    • Seen Oct 21, 2019
    Hey guys its just me Goatman I just wanted to make a comic with a bugcatcher as the main character. This doesn't mean i'm done with my other comic I just felt like doing this. Well heres the 1st one.
     
    Ok I'm sorry if I seem harsh in this review.

    1. That seriously was NOT funny. I can't help you with that since it depends on personal taste.
    2. You can't read the text most of the time because it blends with the background.
    3. To fix number 2 use a textbox! They're not that hard to make people!
    4. Bad effects, it looks like he's squirting blood from where the sun don't shine.

    Ok? I think I made my point
     
    Bad, Bad bad...

    I Didn't get it, nor did I like it. Better luck next time. Make the words in bubbles, and make it have better humor. Saying "Crap" isn't funny, nor are nickles...
     
    couldn't read a thing... don't really think its FUNNY and I agree with armadilloHD especialy for what he said in #4 it really does look like the poor guy is sqiurting blood where the sun don't shine.....that must be really painfull o.O
     
    Meh one of the worst sprite comics ive seen. Its not funny at all. And I could hardly read any of it :/
     
    Goatman56 said:
    meh I didn't put effort into it I was bored
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    That means ya should do DOUBLE effort~ =D

    Make a better comic, and show us it~ Who knows we might love it?
     
    I knew it was bad it was just somethign I did because I was a little angry you can close this or something I might have something better tomorrow something I actually put effort into but right now I got to make a comic for my other comic :P
     
    Goatman56 said:
    I knew it was bad it was just somethign I did because I was a little angry you can close this or something I might have something better tomorrow something I actually put effort into but right now I got to make a comic for my other comic :P
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    Okay, so be sure to dont make a continuation for this~ xD
    And, as ya requested [ya did? xD], I'll just close this~

    liek omfg CLOSE! =D
     
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