Chain: Story of a Hero(revive)

[charizard_maa]

Story Polt: It about a oy name Richard and his Zangoose nickname Zip. Richard and Zip are on a pokemon journey in the Hoenn region. But some evil is coming its going to be up to Richard and Zip, his Zangoose, to stop this force. Its up to YOU on how will he beat this force.

This is a chain RP and it works a bit differently. You don't control a character but instade you control the story and add more to the story with each post.

This how it starts, I start the story with a post then the next person can to add to the story by countinuing on with the post above. It must have something to do with what it happening. I am not really need to countinued the RP becuase I turly don't control the RP. It is the people who participate in the RP who control it. So if I not here to post something then another person can add to it then the person after him can add to. People can jump in and add to story when ever thorgth out the RP as long it goes with what is happening at the time. There is one main character but other character can come and stay with the main character (like ash and his friends). I give you an example (actual post):

"Well we can't just leave Mike hanging. He asked for our help and if you remember rigth he help us too." Said Jodi

Seam shook his head and said "She does have a point. We must help but if our expurt on kill-undeads is not at full power. WHat are we to do."

Chezni was thinking but then Cody jump and said "I think there may be a way. I remember reading about an oil. You need to soak the undead in it then hit them with fire and the fire is now made powerful enoght to kill any undeads and for good. But i not sure."

"Sounds good. WHat is need to make this oil?" asked Chezni.

"Well you do need things but the things needed my not be here and i afraid it may not be found in the Door of Doors." said Cody

Sean seeing what need to be done said "Well, we have away rigth. Well we just get the stuff and then we try and see what we get. You do your way to kill the undead and what ever undeads are still alive. We just us the oil."

"It looks like we have a plan" said Jodi proudly

Chezni looked at the rest of the group. "So, we'll check the Door of Doors first?" Sean simply nodded in response. It had been awhile since the group was at the marketplace. Much was bound to have changed.

The group started heading to the east. "So..." Chezni said. "Where is the Door from here?"

Sean replied. "There's one in Blackthorn City. It's just a little ways from Mount Silver. We can also use it to get to the Chanano Region."

With that show lets start the RP!!

IC: Richard and Zip (His Zangoose) were in the Petalburg Woods. Both were asleep under a tree. Richard just gotten done defeating Norman the gym leader in Petalburg. Now he was on the way to battle Roxanne. Richard was dress in blue jean pants, a black shirt with a pokeball symbol on the chest and a red vest. He had a small back pack over his shoulder. He had a red bandana tied arourd his arm. He had spiky blue hair. His Zangoose, Zip, had a red bandana, just like Richard, around his arm too.

Then a loud yell was hread. This yell awoke Zip and he look around. He then awoke Richard and Richard said, "Yes, What is it Zip?"

ZIp responed with "Zan zan." Which Richard then hread the yell again.

Richard then said, "Is that what ou tell me whats wrong. It sound like a girl." Then Richard imange that the girl will give him a kiss as a reward from saving her. Richard got up and ran towards the sound of the yell with Zip behind him.

OCC: NOw come add more too it.

 

[Alana]

OOC: I remember this. I should have posted more but I guess I just quit. I hope Jodi was a good character.

Okita stepped back with wide eyes. "Don't make me ask you again little girl. Hand over your Pokemon and any valuable items you have with you."

"No way!" Okita replied. She stared defiantly at the man who was threatening her with her bright gold eyes. Her hair was shoulder length and dark blue. She had on a green tank top with a lightning streak, like that on the top of a fastball, on the front and flaring blue jeans. On her head was a green headband with a fastball on it and she had green sweat bands also with fastballs on both wrists. She had on a simple belt with six Pokeball on it and a yellow backpack on her shoulders.

"Well then I guess I'll have to take them by force won't I?" Said the man with a nasty smile. He had red hair and eyes to match. His shirt was dark brown and his faded jeans had holes in both knees. He pulled out a Pokeball and tossed it into the air. "Go Destro!" A Tyranitar appeared adn roared angrily. It had many scars all over it's body and it's eyes were full of rage.

Okita gulped but pulled out her own Pokeball. "Go Eevee!" A small brown and white dog Pokemon appeared and stared unflinchingly at Tyranitar. Suddenly Anora heard footsteps running towards them. She hoped it wasn't another thug. She didn't stand a chance against this guy as it was.

 

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OCC: Jodi was a good character. She even in the seque of the origenal one.

Richard and Zip finally made it to the spot wherer they hread the yelling. His mind was on saving a beutiful girl but when he saw the Tyranitar. It was like a switch was turn on he was up for a battle.

The red head thug then said, "Use Rock SLide." Zip saw that the attack was aim to a small eevee. So Zip ran as fast as it could and save the eevee from the heavy hitting attack.

Richard then notice the girl and the eevee and he said, "Good job Zip!!"

The red headed thug was angery and said, "You think you can just jump in on my work."

Richard then said, "If your job involes harsing buetiful young girls then your job must suck. Zip attack." Richard thougth of a attack that can hurt the Tyranitar. He comanded, "Use Brick Break!"

Zip then chop attack the Tyranitar and it was doing serious damage. THen the red head thug said "Use hyper beam!"

Okita saw that the Zangoose was in trouble so she yelled out to her eevee, "Use protect!!" Eevee ran up and took the hyper beam attack. But instade of taking damage, protect protected both him and Zip.

Okita then said to Richard, "If we going to beat this guy. We going have to figth him together."

Richard nodded in agreement and said, "Zip use break break again."

 

[Alana]

OOC: Good.

"Eevee use Swift!" Shouted Okita. Eevee opened it's mouth and shot gold stars at Tyranitar. Zip raised it's claw and smashed into Tyranitar at the same time.

"Good job Zip! Now use Slash!" Called Richard. Zip slashed with it's large claws at Tyranitar.

"No you don't!" Shouted the red haired man. "Destro Hyper Beam!" Tyranitar opened it's mouth and fired a huge beam of yellow light at Zip and Eevee.

"Zip dodge!" Cried Richard.

"Eevee use Protect again!" Shouted Okita. Zip spun and the attack missed by inches singing some of Zip's fur. Eevee used Protect again and took the attack head on but didn't recieve any damage. "Great Eevee now use Take Down!"

"Zip use Crush Claw!" Comanded Richard.

 

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Crush claw slap on the Tyranitar but it bary damage the pokemon.

The thug then laugth and said, "Use flamethrower"

Richard then said, "Use Sword Dance!" The flame span around Zip and it bary hurt him.

Okita then told Eevee, "Use take down." The attack bary hurt the Tyranitar.

The guy laugth again. Okita then said, "That laugth is very annoying."

Richard said in agreement and said, "Well these regular attacks are not doing the job. We need to attack together. How about Zip goes in with a Brick Break. Then your eevee goes for the spot where Zip attack hit and that will do major damage. By the way, my name is Richard. You know the plan Zip now carry it out."

The thug then said "Use Sandtomb." The Tyranitar shot sand at Zip but he dodge the attacks.

Okita then said to Eevee. "When that zangoose attacks. You hit the same spot he hits." Eevee nodded. Then Okita said to Richard, "My name is Okita."

Richard smile and said under his breath, "Cute name for a girl. A cute one too."

Zip countinued to dodge the sandtomb attack. Zip then aim his claw to the stomach. Eevee then finish the battle with shot at the Tyranitar at high speed Take Down. This attack made the pokemon fall over.

The red head thug then yelled out "What!?!? You beat him."

 

[Alana]

"Yay great job Eevee!" Cried Okita. Eevee ran to her and jumped into her arms.

The red haired man growled furiously and recalled his Pokemon. "You may have beat me this time, but I swear someday I'll get even." He then turned and ran off.

"Good battling Okita." Said Richard smiling and walking forward with Zangoose behind him.

"Thanks. You and Zip were great too. You can call me Oki by the way. That's what all my friends call me." She held out her hand and Richard shook it.

"So where are you headed Oki?"

"Well I'm not sure. I was just training Eevee and that thug showed up. I guess I'll head to the nearest gym." She replied.

"I know where the nearest gym is. It's not to far from here. Would you like me to shwo you to the gym?" Asked Richard. Bhind him Zip gave a slight cough that sounded like a snicker.

"Sure I'd appriciate that." Said Oki gratefully. "We need to head to the Pokemon Center first. I want Eevee to be in top shape for our battle."

"Ok then let's go." Said Richard smiling. He pointed and they headed towards the nearest town.

OOC: I'm not sure what region this is in so I'll let you name what town they're going to.

 

[charizard_maa]

OOC: We in the Hoenn region and we going to Rustboro City.

Richard and Oki were walking in the Petalburg Woods, side by side with Zip and Eevee following behind them. Richard then asked, ?So how many badges do you have??

Oki then said, ?Well, I only have 3. I started out in Verdanturf Town. From there I won the Dyanmo Badge in Mauville. Then I won the Heat and Balance badge.

Richard laugth and said, ?Well, those are the same badges I have too. I started in Lavaridge Town. Then I came down from there. I also just won my Balance badge.

Oki shouted, ?Oh that is so cool. Because I just won my Balance badge too!? Then she grab Eevee and put her in her hands and said, ?Where are you going now??

Richard thought for a moment and said, ?Me and Zip were thinking about stopping in Rustboro to beat the leader there. Then go down to Dewford for a battle over there.?

?Well that sounds like a plan. Mind if me and Eevee join you?? Said Oki.

Richard thought and said, ?Well me and Zip like to be alone but some company would be fine.?

The foursome finally made it out of the woods and they can see some of the buildings in the city of Rustboro.

 

[Alana]

"Cool Rustboro!" Cried Oki gleefully. "i can't wait to get to the gym."

"Neither can I." Replied Richard grinning.

"Vee eevee."

"Zangoos zan."

"I guess our Pokemon are just as excited as we are huh." Laughed Oki.

"Yeah. Come on let's hurry to the Pokemon Center then find the gym." Said Richard. They hurried to the Pokemon Center and gave their Pokemon to Nurse Joy to be healed. After that they asked where the gym was. Nurse Joy gave them instructions and they headed on their way.

"So who should go first in our gym battle?" Asked Richard.

"Why don't we have a double battle?" Suggested Oki.

"Hmm. Yeah sure why not." Replied Richard. Oki smiled and patted Eevee who was riding on her shoulder. They reached the gym in only five or so minutes and entered.

"I think the gym leader ere is called Roxane and she trains rock Pokemon. I think our best bet would be to use water adn grass Pokemon."

Richard nodded absently already thinking about his upcoming victory. "Hello." Someone behind them said. The turned and saw a woman standing there. "I'm Roxane the gym leader here. Have you come for a battle?"

"Yep." Siad Oki and Richard together.

"And could it be a double battle?" Asked Oki.

"Sure. This way." Roxane led them to the battle arena and a judge entered.

"This will be a two on two battle no time limit. Begin!"

"Go Nosepass and Geodude!" Caleld Roxane.

"I choose Misdreavus!" Shouted Oki tossing a Pokeball into the air. Her Misdreavus appeared adn faced their opponent.

"Go Zip!" Called Richard. Zip ran forward and stood next to Misdreavus.

 

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Roxanne then said, "Lets start this battle a little rocky. Geodude use rollout. Nosepass use Harden." Geodude curl up in to a ball and started to spin like a wheel at Misdreavus." Nosepass just got harder.

Oki then said "Use night shade" the Misdreavus shot a beam fron its eyes at the geodude. it seem to not of phase it.

"It must be spining so fast that most attacks can not hit it." Said Richard. "We need to stop it."

THe Geodude was about to hit Misdreavus but then Richard said, "Use Break Break Zip" The Zangoose jump up in front of the geodude and smack it in the middle. THe geodude flew and hit the wall. Zip also was hurt by roll out.

Oki asked "Are you ok?" Zip nodded.

Richard said, "Let me take on the geodude while you take the Nosepass."

Oki smile and like the idea because it seem that if Nosepass defense go any higher. Zip's break break would not do the job."

"Zip use another break break" said RIchard.

"Use protect nosepass. Use earthquake geodude." Said Roxanne.

the earthqauke attack just hurted Zip. Misdreavus was floating so she dodge the attack and nosepass was protected. But this still didn't stop Zip from attack and then geodude was hit.

"Misdreavus use shadow ball" Misdreavus shadow ball went strigth for nosepass and did some damage.

Geodude is about to faint. Zip is at half health from taking a rollout attack and earthquake. Nosepass is at full health and Misdreavus is also at full health.

 

[Alana]

"Misdreavus use Hypnosis!" Called Oki. Misdreavus's eyes glowed and it locked gazes with Nosepass. Nosepass tried to look away but couldn't. It swayed but stayed on it's feet.

"Zip use Brick Break again!" Zip smashed into Geodude sending te small rock Pokemon flying. But Geodude isn't giving up yet.

"Nosepass Thunder Bolt! Geodude Rock Throw!" Nosepass charged energy and zapped Misdeavus. The small ghost hit the ground then hovered into the air again. Geodude smashed into the ground sending a jet of rocks at Zip.

"Zip dodge!" Comanded Richard. The Zangoose dived out of the way and avoided the attack. "Good bow use Crush Claw!" Zip once again smashed into Geodude with tremendous force. Geodude was down but not out.

"Misdreavus use Shadow Ball!" Shouted Oki. Misdreavus created a Shadow ball and hurled it at Nosepass. Nosepass isn't fast enough and gets hit. "Now use Night Shade!"

"Nosepass Thunder Bolt again! Geodude use another Earthquake!" Cried Roxane.

 

[charizard_maa]

OOC: In the next couple of days. I maynot post as much as I usally do. The school year is about to end for me which means no early visit to PC and RPing. I have a few days left but when school does ends I be posting late nigths then.


IC:Zip was ready this time and he jump into the air to dodge the attack. Nosepass was as lucky because he got hit by earthquake. Roxanne said, "Opps. I forgot that you didn't use protect.

Richard smile and said, "Now finish it off!! Use Brick Break!!" Zip was still in the air then he began to fall but he began his attack. WHen he landed he fire his attack rigth on top of geodude's heads. THe rock pokemon then fell and was out cold. \

The Ref said, "Geodude is unable to battle! Battle countinued!"

Oki then said, "Good job!" To Richard and Zip.

RIchard then said, "The battle is not over let. We still got that nosepass the deal with."

 

[Alana]

"Right." Replied Oki. "Misdreavus Shadow Ball!" The small ghost fired it's most powerful Shadow Ball at Nosepass.

"Zip Brick Break!" Zip dashed at Nosepass with all it's strength.

"Nosepass Protect!" Called Roxane. Nosepass used Protect adn guarded against the attacks. "Good now Thunder!"

"Misdreavus dodge!" Misdreavus swirved out of the way and missed most of the attack.

"Zip you dodge too!" Zip leapt out of the way then steadied himself. "good now use Brick Break again!"

"Misdreavus put everything you've got into another Shadow Ball!" Zip sped at Nosepass while Misdreavus fired a huge Shadow Ball at her target.

"Nosepass Protect!" Nosepass tried but the attack failed.

"Used it too many times. I guess this battles over." Said Oki grinning. The two attacks hit Nosepass causing it to faint.

"Nosepass is unable to battle. Misdreavus and Zangoose are the winners." Said the ref.

"Yay! Great job Misdreavus!" Oki grabbed the small ghost out of the air as it flew towards her amnd hugged it happily.

"You did a great job too Zip." Said Richard patting his Zangoose.

"Well done." Said Roxane recalling Nosepass. "You battled well. Both of you. You both deserve a good rest." She walked over to Oki adn Richard and shook their hands. "You battled very well together. I am honored to present you both with a Stone Badge." She placed handed both of them a Stone Badge then left to heal her Pokemon.

"Alright we won a Stone Badge!" Shouted Oki happily hugging Misdreavus again. "You were great Richard." She said happily turning to him.

Richard blushed. "Thanks you were great too."

"We shoulder head to the Pokemon Center and heal our Pokemon again. I'll show you the Pokemon I've capture so far if you want." Said Oki heading for the door.

"Sure." Replied Richard following her. They arrived at the Pokemon Center and healed their Pokemon.

"Alright come out you three." Called Oki tossing her Pokeballs into the air. Eevee, Misdreavus, adn Trapinch appeared. "I think Trapinch is going to evolve soon. I would have used him in our gym battle but I decided to let Misdreavus have a go. So do you have any other Pokemon?" She asked smiling at him.

 

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Richard pulled out a few pokeballs out and said, "Come on out." In a flash of ligth, A tentacruel, an altaria, and a baltoy appear. Richard said, "Tenta" He pointed to the tentacruel, "And Flow" Pointed to the Altaria, "were gives from my parents. THey were train a little so they were ready t evole when I use them in Battle. Spin, I caugth on the way down here. Then Zip is my first pokemon."

"Ohh" said Oki, "Well your pokemon are preety good and nice."

RIchard said, "Well I try. Maybe at the next gym I use them."

Once the pokemon were healed Oki said, "Lets go into town! I heard Rustboro has tons of shops." So she drag RIchards arm and into the busyness of the shops.

RIchard didn't want to be here and Zip could tell. Zi[ try to leave and was planning to come back but RIchard grab his ear and said into it, "I know you are coming back but if I going to suffer so would you." Zip was a bit unsatified.

Oki got out of a changing room and was dress in a pink with red flowered two piece bathing suit. Oki said, "We are going to Dewford which is an island town. THey have a beach too so what do you think of this suit.

Richard was now saying in his head. NOw I glad I came. He then said, "Looks very nice."

Oki then smile and said, "I want to buy it. Thanks for being honest."

She walk to the cashier counter and Richard then said to Zip, "See it was that bad. I also got a good view." Zip just rolled his eyes as if he was embrass.

The group got out of the shop. Then they saw this kid being drag by a bigger guy with a seviper.

Richard and Oki thought they should see what happening. They heard the bigger guy say, "Where is the gem?"

The other guy just shook his head. Richard look to Zip. THey both got to the bigger guy and said, "Leave that kid alone."

THe bigger guy said, "Sorry, this is none of your buisness."

Richard said to Zip, "Now are you glad you came." Zip nodded. Richard then said "Use Crush Claw!!"

 

[Alana]

"Go Trapinch!" Called Oki tossing a Pokeball into the air. Trapinch stared at Seviper as Zip smashed into it.

"Grr. You should mind your own business." Snarled the man. "Seviper Poison Tail!"

"Trapinch Tackle!" Trapinch charges and slams into Seviper.

"Zip use Brick Break!" Zip smashes into Seviper sending it realing backwards.

"Grrr. Seviper get up adn use Poison Tail!"

"No way. Trapinch Take Down!" Trapinch slams into Seviper knocking it out.

"Ahh. I'll get you for this." Snarls the man. He recalls Seviper and runs off.

"Great Trapinch."

"Pinch!" Replied Oki's Pokemon happily. Then all of a sudden it begins to glow and change.

"I think Trapinch is evolving."

"Yeah I think so." When Trapinch stops glowing it is now a Vibrava. "Awesome. Welcome to the team Vibrava."

"Congrats Oki." Said Richard smiling.

"Thanks Richard." Said Oki hugging her new Pokemon. She recalled Vibrava and turned to the boy.

"So what did that guy want?" Asked Richard looking at the boy as well.

 

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THe guy then said, "He wanted nothing. That what he wanted nothing."

Richard then said, "It does look like he wanted nothing. He said something about a jem. Why would a person like him want a jem that he can steal from any jewaery store?"

Oki then return her newly evole Vibrava. SHe then said, "Why, Whats your name?"

The boy then said, "My name is Cole. Cole Chance. I just was visiting this place."

"Well" Said Richard, "What about the jem? YOu at least own us tell us why the guy was after you."

Oki then said, "Richard! Let the guy alone. He may have nothing."

The COle said, "He is right. I should tell you. The Jem he wants is able to control the elements. The jem I have is able to control earth. THis Earth Gem is very powerful. There are five others."

"ANd now these thugs want these jems. FOr what." said Richard.

The Oki said, "Well for power. Imange what can you do if you can control an element like fire or water. That can destroy the world."

The guy was a bit surprise but he said, "I truly don't know. But I must warn my other in Dewford."

 

[Alana]

"We're going to Dewford." Said Oki turning to Richard.

"Yeah that's true. We could take you there if you want."

"Really? Thanks I'd really appriciate that." Said Cole happily.

"We might as well introduce ourselves. I'm Okita but you can call me Oki."

"I'm Richard." He said simply.

"And you already know that I'm Cole. So when do we leave for Dewford?"

"How about now?" Said Oki smiling.

"Sure." Said Richard.

"The boat leaves in ten minutes os we should hurry." Okita, Richard, Zip, and Cole turned adn headed for the boat docks. After they bought their tickets they boarded the ship and sat back to wait until they reached Dewford.

 

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Richard, Oki, Cole and the pokemon were on the boat that is on it way to Dewford. Zip was relaxing on the deck next to Oki's Eevee while Richard was asleep. Oki was in her brand new swim suit and was swimming in the ship's pool. Cole was just sitting next to Richard. Cole looked a bit nervous.

Richard woke up and asked, "This is a curse-like ship. Relax a bit. Even I am relaxing and I a storge trainer.

Cole looked to Richard and answer back, "Well I afraid if someone on the ship is here to take my jem."

Richard shook his head and said, "Not like they are following us."

Oki then got out of the water and said, "Ok. Lets go back to the room. I getting all wricky." So Cole and Richard follow Oki back on the way to their room.

Elsewhere on the ship, three hooded people enter the captin's box. They knocked out the crew and stop the ship. The female of hooded group said, "We have stop the ship. Now start sreaching for the jem. It on this ship somewhere."

Soon lets of hooded figures appear and round up most of the passagers in the eating place. Richard, Oki and Cole were on their way to their room when Zip pulled on Richard's arm and Eevee pulled on Oki's swim suit. Richard asked, "What is it."

They then heard, "THe guy and that jem is on this ship somewhere."

Richard then saw a broom closet. He open up the closet and push the group into the closet.

Oki asked, "What are we going to do? My stuff and clouthes are in the room."

COle then said, "They after my jem?!? What are we going to do?"

 

[Alana]

"Two crisis at once. We can't et them get hold of the gem adn Oki can't walk around in her swim suit all day." Zip made an odd sound. Richard guessed what he meant. (She can't but you wouldn't mind it.) "Shut up." Growled Richard.

"What about our Pokemon? If we can get to them we can get them to help. But my Pokeballs are with my clothes and I know Eevee's strong but we'll need help." Said Okita quietly.

"Well as long as they're out there what can we do?" Asked Cole. "If we go out we risk the losing the gem. They know I've got it. or at least they know someone on this ship has it."

"Well they didn't mension your descritpion or name so mauybe they don't know it's you. But in any case we can't stay in this closet until we reach Dewford." Said Richard.

"Zangoose." Agreed Zip.

"I have an idea." Said Oki. "They know about the gem adn they might know about Cole. But I doubt they know about me and Richard. One of us can go out and get our stuff. Then we can hop onto Altaria's back and fly the rest of the way to Dewford."

"I don't know if Altaria can carry all three of us safely so one of us should ride Tentacruel." Said richard.

"Good idea. Now who volunteers to go adn get the stuff?" Asked Cole.

"I will." Said Oki. She snuck out of the closet an dashed back to their room. She dressed quickly then returned Eevee to it's Pokeball. "Sorry but I don't want you to get hurt so I guess it's the end of vacation for a while Eevee." She put Eevee's Pokeball back on her belt and hurried back to the closet. "Alright let's go." She muttered.

"First we need to decide who's riding with who." Said Cole. "Two people should be able to ride Altaria. So we need to decide who's going by air, and who's going by sea."

 

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Richard then said, "Well, I take you because you need to be protected. We ride Tenta. Then Oki can ride on Flow."

Oki nodded and said, "Well I go and see if they let me go to our room."

Oki got out of the closet and ran down the hall. SHe was only a yard or two away from the closet until a hooded firgure stop her. The guy said, "What are you doing out of the holding bay? Doesn't matter." He look to another guy and said to him "Tie her up."

Oki was a bit nervous but then she heard Richard said, "Use SLash Zip." ZIp jump out of the closet and cut the rope they were going to tie Oki with. Richard hit one of the hooded figure with a metal broom. Then Cole hit the other guy with a trash can. They were both knock out cold.

Oki look at the two knock out figures and said, "Are they ok?"

COle then said, "Well don't ask. We need to get to our room."

Oki then said, "Well thanks for saving me."

"No problem. Just being me." Said RIchard. Zip then sniker as if he fould that funny. Richard just sent him a look telling him to stop. Richard then said, "We need to get to our room."

The three made it to the room. Oki went into the bathroom and change into her regular clothing except she was wearing a brown jacket over her green tanktop. She said, "Lets go!"

Richard then said, "Stop! We shouldn't leave. This ship's people need our help."

Zip was about to laugth but he saw the look on Richard'd face. He saw that he was serious this time. He actually wanted to help the people. ZIp then raise his arm up in agreement.

Cole then said, "What if they find me? What then?"

RIchard then said, "Well we can't leave these people here while they suffer because they are looking for you."

Cole was about to say something but Oki then said, "He is right. We can't leave these people to suffer. I mean all we got to do is find the leader and then the others will fall."

Cole then said, "We don't have time to look for the leader. They may get me!"

Richard then said, "They may be in the control deck. I notice the ship has stop. So they may be there."

Oki then smile and said "Then we go there."

Cole looked a bit unhappy and said, "If they grab hold of the jem. THe future of this world is doom." With that said, the group prepare to leave the room.

 

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Oki slings her backpack over her shoulder and looks out. "The coast is clear. Let's go." The three head towards the control deck. It takes them longer than usual because they have to keep hiding from the guys who are searching the ship. the other passengers want to know why the ship has stopped but the captain won't say anything just ot be pationt.

"There it is." Said Richard.

"Alright let's go." Said Oki.

"Alright." Mumbled Cole. The snuck into the control room and hid behind a machine. "I'm sure that's one of the guys who was after me before." Said Cole quietly.

"He's got control of the ship so we have to be careful." Said Oki.

"Yeah but we need ot act fast. I think Cole should stay here. Keep hidden and me and Oki can take care of this ok?" Whispered Richard.

"Ok." Said Cole nervously.