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[Anacortes]

Just another random poem I'm writing due to extreme boredness..

If you look far enough to see me,
It seems I am within your hands' reach.
If you'll run fast enough to reach me,
It seems I am right here with you.

You say a day is not enough,
I'd say you need to understand.
When you said you wanted to be with me,
I simply replied with a smile.

Where'd those days go,
When you turned at the very sight of me.
Without a chance of looking back,
but I was wrong.

This time before you turned away,
You look at me in the eye.
I'd thought you wanted something from me,
And this time I was right.

When we occasionally see each other,
We'd never turn away.
Maybe what is really happening,
Is the change within ourselves.

It's taking over us,
Every step we take.
But next time when I see you,
Will you go or stay?

 

[Kyosuke]

Nice job, its a good poem that really puts things in perspective about life, how sometimes we may like someone, but the other person dousn't really realize how much of an attraction it is, until one day there is a change.

Enough of my rambling XD, I really liked how it didn't seem like you tried very hard to push this poem, thats not an insult in the least, because when one tries too hard then they have to, the work often suffers and thats definatly not the case here. Great job ^^.