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Kai: Envoy of Darkness

Dakness comes!
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    Chapter Two:
    As i walked through the ruins of Kido city, i could not believe what a horrible, nightmarish wasteleand of death and chaos this city had become. I refused to believe, wanting to wake up from a nightmare, back in jhoto, were i was safe in the thought of seeing my family again. But no, this was real, and i would have to face it. The once clean and traffic-infested streets I knew, were now drenched with dead bodies and the smell of death. I must've thrown up at least ten times while on my journey to the park. I was hoping to find people or even poke'mon there, but no, more death, more bodies and more blood. I didn't undrestand it, how could poke'mon be so evil, why? As i walked through the dark, shadow inhabited park, i could see the roofs of my street, i prayed the houses that were a blaze would not be the ones of my family and friends.
    Suddenly, a gigantic shadow covered the light that the thunder was creating. I looked up, it was a large, coach long steel dragon, with metal, angel-like wings, each the size of a large garden. It had no arms and no legs, and it's body was a brilliant silver colour. I sort of admired how majestic it looked, but then i realised, it was one of the dragons... Mecha, the Machine Champion Dragon. I grabbed the poke'ball containing Charizard, this was going to be a battle in the skies. I focused my mind as i cocked my arm and threw the pke'ball as hard as i could. Charizard erupted from it it with a blast of red light.
    'Chaaaaaaaaaar!' it roared as i hopped onto it's back. Mecha heard the roar and turned around. It bobbed it's head for a moment, suspened high in the air.
    'Charizard to the skies!' Charizard spread it's magnificent wings as it took into the air. This was going to be dangerous, i wasn't sure if i could handle it.
     

    Obsidian Blade

    She who likes cake.
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    This should be posted in the original thread, rather than as a new one. It stops the boards from getting too cluttered. ^^;

    I have a review written, but I figured you'd want to chance to move this chapter into the original thread and get a moderator to close this one before I go posting before you in the old one. For now, however, I shall sit and be happy that you took my advice about emotions as he walked through the city! Fwee! ^^
     

    Lily

    ◕ ‿‿ ◕ double rainbow.
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    :O Post the second chapter in the original thread you started as your fanfic, instead of making a new one as it will indeed clutter up the forum. Thanks. ^_^;
     
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