Chimney Rock: The School of Witchcraft and Wizzardry, USA.

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Riz bounded out of the Apocathary shop and drug her grandmother to the wand shop. She desperatly wanted this more than anything.

Upon entering, she was immediatly attended to, and told to wave wand after wand after wand. She only managed to explode a lightbulb and cause many boxes to fly off the shelves. Blushing furiously, she was handed another wand, which hoisted her Grandmother into the air.
 
I walked into the wand shop, chuckling as I say a girl trying wands at a rapid-fire pace. I soon found myself in a similar circumstance, though, with a rapidly-growing pile of discarded wands by my side. One actually seemed like a rather good prospect, it felt a little warm in my hand.

I soon found out that it too, didn't fit me. As I gave it an experimental wave, it sent a catalog of the gods alone knew what flying across the shop, striking the girl square in the stomach. Mortified, I dropped the wand and rushed to her side.

Covering my mouth, I said apologetically, "I'm so, so sorry! I didn't mean to. You're all right, I hope?"
 
'Alright... So it says here that we can use one of these fireplaces if we're muggles... I don't quite like that term, but I guess I can't do much about it...' Noah's father managed to say, watching over the letter with a keen eye...

'So I guess we're headed to Mysterium Square...'

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Noah watched as all the interesting people made their way through the crowd, having his measurements being taken. After everything was finished at the tailor's, he walked back out into the middle of the street, trying to take in his surroundings... People were all dressed and acting very different from what he remembered his home to be.

'Let's see, you have your robe... Now we need a broomstick, your books, and a wand...'

'A wand... Cool...' Noah thought to himself. A wand seemed to be the last thing Noah needed to convince him that all that was going on was real... And it seemed to amaze him to a bizarre extent, never caring for magic in the past. They made their way to 'Great Heights' where they bought what seemed to be the most affordable broom, the comet 260...

'It should be good for now... It's just a broom... Now to save time, I'll take you to Kinderflame, where you can choose your wand-or... 'Where your wand will choose you', as your mother would say,' his father laughed, taking him not too far to Kinderflame, then leaving to get the books, taking the buggy filled with the necessities Noah will need with him.

'I'll be right back, don't go anywhere without me! I don't want you getting lost!'

'It's not that big...' Noah chuckled, looking around... He could finally find a wand. He stepped into the store with a look of excitement on his face...
 
"?Sooo?"

"No."

"Now?"

"Elie," Alphonse started, breathing out a sigh, "calm down. They'll be here, just wait a minute or two." He was in no position to tell her that, as he was overflowing with anxiety as well, but someone had to remain collected. That meant him. But then, sundown was slowly approaching. It wasn't their fault that their fireplace was, ironically, burnt down?along with most parts of their house.

"I just?want to leave this place. I hate it here!" Elie answered with a bit of hesitation, pacing across their creaky wooden floor back and forth. At the vague sound of a knock at their door, Elie's ears perked up and she immediately dashed to the door.

"Children," It was their aunt, Alicia. A softhearted woman whom moves with such grace?she and Elie are polar opposites, but they get along greatly. Her looks and her talent as a witch made her quite a heartthrob during her time at Chimney Rock. "Let's go, sweeties. Gather your belongings and we'll return to my house. As you may have read, you'll travel by Floo Powder, okay?"

"Yes." Al replied courteously, grasping the parchment tightly. He was excited to use it. Since they were?'muggles'?they had no experience of those sorts.

"Floo what?" Elie asked with the utmost curiosity. "Is it a powder that makes you sneeze? But instead of saying "Achoo" you say "Floo?"

Al couldn't help but release a chuckle at her remark. "I'll tell you later," Al teased, "It's your fault for not reading the letter anyway."

"Brooother!" Elie pleaded. Call it a weakness, but Elie had always been a curious child. She could be easily compared to a four year old who asks about four hundred question per day. In fact, Elie asks more questions than a four year old. She had repeatedly asked that little question for forty minutes straight, all the way to their aunt's home, until she had declared their arrival.

"Here we are, sweeties." She stated as she gently ushered them inside, calling out her husband to get their luggage?well, backpacks. "Head straight through the living room and you'll see the fireplace. Just wait there a minute."

Al nodded and dragged Elie towards the living room, keeping his free hand clasped against her mouth. "Shh. I'll tell you why we need a fireplace in a minute, just keep you voice down."

Elie nodded obediently and quietly watched as her aunt and uncle made their way in the living room and handed them their backpacks. They spoke their farewells and gave each a hug and peck on the cheek. Her eyes were now cast upon her brother. He was holding powder, the floo powder perhaps, which he hurled towards the new lit fire of the hearth.

"Mysterium Square!" He had exclaimed.

Elie blinked. "What now?" She questioned, obviously paying no heed to the feeling that she was being hauled from the ground to somewhere else. "Brother, how can we go somewhere with just exclaiming that? Have you?"

In an instant, she was no longer at her aunt's comfy house, but was instead sprawled across the floor in front of a different fireplace. There were people?rather peculiar people?near them, all in robes. "Don't tell me, we're somewhere else, right, Brother?" She asked, sarcasm dripping in her voice.

"Seems like we're in Mysterium Square." He pulled himself up and offered his hand at the younger, "Let?s get our wands and books then. Aunt already gave me money." He took out a pouch from his pocket and showed Elie the coins inside.

"Where to?" She asked as they aimless wandered through the busy streets. She was digging for something in her backpack at the same time, so Al couldn't help but check on her every second.

"Over there, I guess. Kinderflame."

"Mm-hmm." She answered, not really paying attention. "Ah! There you are! Bunnii, look, this place is so cool! Squirrelly, you too." Al didn't bother question her about their pets being inside her backpack and simply went in the shop, dragging the younger of course.

Excitement was written all over his face. "I can get a wand of my own. Amazing."
 
Josh made his way to the shop of Kinderflame's where he could get his own wand. At least to his understanding of the fact. A wand was a powerful magical and non-magical weapon. It's non-magical use was to gouge eyeballs out of sockets if you were desperate. Well that was the only use he could think of. The magical uses probably expanded much further.
He walked in. There were a few kids there. He slowly waited as each one was standing there. One thought occured to him. How would he be able to buy it? He had no money. Was there some kind of fund for students? He would find out.

OOC: There is a fund according to the sixth book. Are we going by that? Anyone that cannot afford it gets a fund?
 
OOC: Yeah, that seems to make sense, Batesymon. ^_^

IC: Alexis had entered Kinderflame just in time to see a girl get socked in the gut by a random flying projectile. The culprit rushed to her side, sputtering apologies. Alexis remained to the side of the doorway, looking around the room cautiously. It was a little crowded, and definitely disorganized, the result of children trying to find their perfect wand.

"G'day there miss!" a lanky, young assistant said cheerfully, leaning over the desk to beam at her. "Looking for a wand today?"

"Er....yeah...." Alexis muttered, not meeting his eyes. Her hair hung in her face. She clutched her skateboard and her trunk in either hand, feeling nervous.

"Right then," he said, taking a box off the shelf. He opened it, and handed the slender wooden wand to her with a smile. "Give it a wave."

She did, feeling quite foolish, and sent several stools and a few wand boxes pummeling into the wall to her left. She dropped the wand on the counter as if it were made of hot metal.

"No bother. Try this one," he handed her another wand.

She waved it, more cautiously this time, the handle feeling oddly warm in her hand. A few purple and gold sparks spurted in an almost excited way from the tip, and the assistant beamed.

"Twelve inches, willow, dragon heartstring. A good, sturdy, but flexible wand. Excellent!"

"Thanks," Alexis said quietly, paying him and leaving the shop.

She was assaulted by a steadily growing crowd. With a grimace, she wove her way through, passing Great Heights, where she saw a boy carrying a new broom, a grin on his face. She headed to the book store, keeping her eyes low, avoiding contact with other people, and selecting her books in an anxious hurry.

Her next stop was the tailor, where she was fitted for her robes, and picked up her uniform. She placed them carefully atop her books and street clothes in her trunk, and hurried tot he apothocary, where she picked up her first cauldron and potion ingredients.

Finally finished with her school necessities, Alexis returned to the water fountain in the middle of the Square. She sat down thoughtfully, but growing steadily more aware of the growing size of the crowd. She hoped the train would come soon to collect them. She hated crowds...

Her eyes traveled towards the pet shop. She jingled the few coins she had left, and walked in curiously. She was immediately assaulted by the chirps, growls, and other noises the creatures within were making. She was drawn immediately to a cage of ferrets. She had always wanted one, but they had been so expensive in the Muggle world.

One of the creatures, a gray ferret with a black stripe like a mask across his eyes, looked at her with keen interest. Most of the ferrets were scurrying around the cage, causing mischief or playing, but this one...

Glancing at the price, Alexis realized to her delight that she had enough money left to get one. She waved for an assistant, and selected the ferret that had been looking at her. The assistant lifted him into her waiting hands, and the creature settled easily into them. She felt a weird wave of appreciation from the creature.

Paying for the ferret, who had taken a liking to sitting upon her shoulder, Alexis made her way to the Iron Horse, eager for a glass of water or a soda. The ferret on her shoulder gave her an odd feeling of confidence. She brushed the hair from her eyes, and opened the door, taking a seat at one of the empty tables.

She watched the people around her curiously. Some of them were dressed in what looked like school robes. She wondered briefly if she would be meeting any of her classmates soon, and sipped her cup of hot chocolate contentedly.
 
OOC: Gee I hope this doesn't count as advertisement, but just to give credit, I got both of the 'Textbook quotes' from a quiz on okcupid.com... I couldn't think of any wands :paranoid: ...

IC:'12", Holly, Dragon...' Noah's father muttered to himself, seeming much more interested in it than his son.

'It says in this text book that Holly is a powerful, protective wood that's good for use against evil, but it also represents dreams and fertility. Dragon's heartstring core makes the wand very effective in hexes...' He read with a grin.

'You know, your mother had an 11" Willow with Unicorn Tail... Let's see...' He began to look it up with excitement.

'A willow wand signifies that you care deeply about emotions, art, and intuition, and that you have a particular knack for charms. The unicorn's tail hair core means that you are pure of heart and care deeply for your loved ones...' He paused for a few moments, then sighed.

'... Why don't we go get a drink,' he stated, checking his watch.

'Yeah, we have a bit of time left...' Noah assured his father, finding the Iron Horse. The two of them took a quick seat next to another girl, carrying what looked like quite a bit of luggage in a trunk.

'Cute Ferret,' Noah's father whispered into Noah's ear, trying not to earn any attention.

'It looks like she's going to Chimney Rock too... Why don't you go say hi?' He asked, stretching his arm past Noah's shoulder, and tapping the girl, as-if Noah did it. He quickly turned to glare at his dad who appeared to be smirking, then looked over to the girl.

'Er... Hi?...' Is all he managed to say with such short notice. Noting that she had a cup of something already, Noah's father knocked his knuckles against the counter,

'2 sodas please?' He asked politely for himself and his son, looking in the opposite direction of Noah, pretending not to listen to the conversation. He was still a child at heart.
 
Riz gasped, feeling the wind get knocked from her lungs. SHe looked up to the culprit. "I... I'm okay..." She said between gasps. Regaining her composure, she rose and was handed another wand. A strange tingling raced up her fingers as she waved it, sending an amount of pink and white sparks in front of her.

Her assistant seemed pleased and told her that was the one. "11 and one half inches, holly, unicorn hair."

Her grandmother went to go and pay for her wand, leaving her alone again. Riz extended a hand to the boy who had knocked her down. "I'm Rizyda, by the way. Please, call me Riz." She paused, still holding out the hand for him to shake. "Who are you?"
 
OOC: Stupid PC has been acting up all day! Oh well...it gave me time to type up yet another overly long post! Enjoy! ^^

*gets struck by lightning* XD

IC:Bouncing through the fireplace on the receiving end, Becca rolled headlong into a wall in a rather large room filled with people talking and chatting rapidly at the arrival. Rebecca slowly got to her feet and looked around, noticing all the curious glances being thrown her way. If she was embarrassed it really didn?t show she just huffed, straightened her bandana, and waited for the others. Becca glanced around yet again, hoping to find that no one was looking at her, but she was terribly mistaken; although they weren?t staring at her, they were staring at her odd clothing choice, which didn?t make sense to Becca, until she realized where she was. ?Haven?t you ever seen jeans, a T-shirt, and a bandana before?? she muttered, more of a low growl, as she continued to watch the people watching her.

Next out of the fireplace was her father, obviously hoping that she was all right. Not at all as clumsy as Becca, he stepped out of the fireplace decked out in a black robe so he didn?t get the stares that young Rebecca was getting. Ridding his robes of the ashes from the fireplace, he quickly found Becca (obviously because she stuck out like a sore thumb). ?Don?t worry, your mother?s on her way with the rest of them. I went ahead of them to make sure you were all right. You are all right, aren?t you?? he whispered to her as he took a position right beside her, and waited patiently for the others, not the least bit conscience of the strangers still staring at Becca.

?They?re still staring?? Becca replied, with a slight hint of worry in her voice, as she leaned closer to her father so the other wizards and witches wouldn?t hear her.

?Not to worry,? he started, ?we?ll buy some nice robes for you, and they won?t stare at you anymore. In fact, we?ll let the other three and your mother go to Kinderflame, while we got to Lockhorn. How?s that sound??

Becca nodded gratefully, and answered, ?I?d like that a lot.? Rebecca always admired her father?s sense of always knowing what she was thinking, and how she was feeling, aside from how strangely excited her parents were about the letters and such, she loved them dearly.

?Oh, here they are now!? he said cheerfully, interrupting Becca from her deep thoughts of how much she loved and admired her father besides how weird he could act. When Becca turned her head back to the fireplace, sure enough Matt and Russ, thought it would be cool to go together?which almost ended in a disaster with the being joined at the hip. Becca and their father had a quick chuckle about this before he moved to help them out of the fireplace and to separate them. As soon as he had their hips disconnected, Kelly appeared through the fire, and stepped her usual grace out of the fire, accompanied by their mother shortly after.

?Izzy, I?ll take Rebecca with me to Lockhorn if you?ll take the others to Kinderflame to get their wands,? he said took Rebecca by the hand and moved to exit the pub.

?Why, Charles, are you in such a rush?? Elizabeth (obviously the mother?s name) asked inquisitively as the other three mimicked her expression.

Charles (the father?s name) looked at his wife and mouthed, ?Robes?. This drew an understanding nod from all four of them, as they watched them both walk out of the room and onto the street. Walking for what seemed like a few short seconds, Charley pushed his daughter into a shop. Inside each wall was covered in racks of robes and other assorted wizarding clothing.

Meanwhile, Elizabeth to the rest of the children across the street to Kinderflame to choose their wands; once inside they found a small sitting area, and a small desk just behind it, with rows and rows of small slender boxes behind it, which they assumed to be the wands. It seemed that the clerk was busy right now, so the four newcomers took some seats to rest while they waited for their turn.

?This is a strange place?? Kelly remarked as she examined the room.

?Shh! Be quiet, dear. Keep your thoughts to yourself while we?re here,? Elizabeth hushed as she turned her head to take note of everyone in her, hoping to find an old school friend.
?Go pick your robes,? Charley said as he pushed the cautious Rebecca forward. She was unsure of the place, it closely resembled an ordinary tailor shop, but with wizards and witches running around getting their children outfitted with robes.

?Ok,? she squeaked before her father had a chance to nudge her on again. Walking through the store felt like walking on ground that was about to erupt into a volcano to Rebecca as she made her way to the first rack of robes to see if there was any particular design or color that she favored. There was a particular robe design that she thought was cute, which was very uncharacteristic of Becca since she didn?t often label things cute. It was a darker purple robe that was embroidered on the cuffs with a fine ascent of silver. It was also embroidered with silver on the rim of the hood.

?May I help you?? came a voice from behind Rebecca, which startled her into turning around to face a very short pudgy woman that had a measuring tape draped over her shoulders.

?Um?I?m just looking for now?but thanks for the offer?? Rebecca replied nervously and then went back to observing the robe that she was growing rather fond of.

?Is that the one you like?? Charles said as he noticed Rebecca was looking longingly at a particular robe.

?Yeah,? Rebecca sighed when she noted the price of the rather simplistic robe.

?You?re grandmother gave you enough money for a robe and whatever supplies you need. So if you want it?go for it,? Charley said as he put a comforting hand on Rebecca?s shoulder.

?So you are the Burlingame children?? the clerk said as the three of them stepped up to receive their wands. Taking out his measuring tape, he preceded to take the proper measurements. Then before any of them could say a word he scurried through the selves only to return with three long slender boxes. ?Try these out,? he coaxed as he gently lifted each out and handed them to the children.

?What do we do with them?? Russ asked as he took hold of the wand that the clerk gave him. He had never held a wand before, and really didn?t have a clue how to use it.

?Just wave it, my boy. See what happens,? the clerk replied, not annoyed at the absurd question at all.

With a loud swooping sound a gust of wind burst through the door of the shop and swirled around a nearby vase that Russ waved his wand towards. The gust of wind lifted the vase up and suddenly died down, Matt?s quick reflexes caught the vase before hit could crash into the counter. ?Very good, very good! Splendid reflexes, my boy! Just like your father!? the clerk said excitedly as he took the wand from Russ to examine it. ?It?s a wand made from the hair of a unicorn and the wood is a sturdy redwood. Nice wand indeed, fitting for you I should say.?

Next it was Kelly?s turn, she waved her wand at nothing particular, when nothing happened, she turned to the clerk for an explanation, then a loud crack of thunder sounded and Rebecca was standing where the boom had originated from. Rebecca looked around confused, her violet robes draped peacefully over her body, she had just exited the tailor shop wearing the robes that she had liked, and the next moment she was here

?Where am I?? she asked as she turned to Kelly, who hadn?t noticed her wand was still pointed at Rebecca. Kelly was astonished, she had highly doubt she could ever do magic, and always knowing that Matt was the gifted one.

?You?re at Kinderflame, my dear,? Elizabeth spoke up as she put her calm hands on either side of her daughter?s shoulders.

?Amazing, truly amazing!? the clerk sputtered as he took the wand back and examined it like he did Russ?s wand. ?Strange?made from the same tree, and same hair as your brothers??

?Honey! I lost Becca!? Charles said as he sprinted into the shop, and then stopped dead in his tracks confused. There stood Rebecca who had, a moment earlier, been walking at his side.

?No worries, dear,? Elizabeth said rushing to the aid of her husband. Snickers came from their children as they noted the surprised look on their father?s face.

Next it was Matt?s turn, who smirked confidently as he waved his wand at the box his wand came out of. The wand promptly disappeared and reappeared in the box, which left a shocked expression on his face?he had meant for the box to appear in his hand. ?Good, best I?ve seen out of your siblings so far!? the clerk cooed as he examined the wand. ?Solid oak with a hint of Basilisk venom. Very rare.?

?Ah, the last of the quadruplets! The lovely Rebecca Burlingame I presume?? the clerk said, noting the girl standing beside the others. Rebecca seemed to beam happily at the compliment of her being lovely.

She was indeed quite elegant looking, with the bandana out off her forehead and her hair out of the ponytail that she usually had it pulled up into, not to mention the beautiful purple robes with silver trimming. The clerk then proceeded to measure her and come back with a wand. ?Try this!?

Rebecca shot a worried glance at her parent, who just nodded back to her. She never used magic before, was this really going to work? Could she really do magic?

With a sigh, Rebecca flicked her wand, using as much focus as she could muster on trying to make the wand work. To her delight and satisfaction, a bouquet of flowers appeared in her hand. ?Bravo!? the clerk said as he took the wand and examined it. ?The feather from the wing of a hippogriff, and oak like Matt?s?

Rebecca jumped up in the air in delight as her siblings came to examine the flowers and to congratulate he. ?Guess you don?t have to worry!? Charles said as he joined the group.

?I guess not!? Rebecca replied brimming over with happiness.

?That was even better than Matt?s little trick!? Russ commented as they sat down to examine her new robes.
 
Suprised by the tap on her shoulder, Alexis spun around with wide eyes, and came face-to-face with a boy about her age, who stammered a greeting.

"I...er....hi," she mumbled, and averted her eyes. The ferret on her shoulder, yet to be named, let out a squeak, and looked at the boy curiously.

Alexis felt someone panicked and anxious. She was hardly a social kid, preferring little to no company, but she knew it had to change, whether she would admit it or not.

She finished her hot chocolate, and hopped down from her stool, eager to get out of the pub and onto the train. She tried her best to smile, but was so nervous that she tripped over her feet instead.

"S-see you on the train..." she murmured, and shuffled out of the pub with a pink face.

One on the street, she searched frantically for the station. The crowd was thinning, so she leapt onto her skateboard and guided it along the street carefully, dragging her trunk behind. She found the station, and joined the huge crowd of students and their parents saying goodbye. Something sharp and negative tugged at her heart. She suddenly wished that her parents would be saying goodbye to her in such a way.

Shuffling onto the train, she took to an empty compartment, her unnamed ferret on her shoulder, watching quietly but intently. Alexis propped open one of her new books: A History of Magic, and began to skim through the chapters, hoping no one owuld notice her.
 
I'd bought myself a little, yellow custard colored Puffskien and was stroaking it aimlessly as I went to find my grandmother. Nashy was bounding playfully about my heels as we went. She nipped at my ankle, and I couldn't help but giggle.

I found her and we both went to board the train. I got on quickly, looking for an empty compartment. There seemed to be none to be found. There was one with a single girl in it, reading the History of Magic textbook. I pulled the door open, scooping up Nashy and blushing a bit.

"That seat taken?" I asked, keeping my eyes lowered.

OOC: Skye, RM... I started up the Pokemon Academy in PRP... If you two wanna join up again, consider this an invite. There's still open rooms, and time to enter! :D
 
'See what happened dad? Good going,' Noah muttered, watching his dad chuckle...

* * *

Noah walked happily onto the train... He'd miss his father, but he was getting on his nerves just a little bit. He found himself in front of the same girl, this time reading one of the text books, another girl standing in front of the seat beside her. Seeing how she'd reacted to him before, he decided to take a bit of time before talking to her again, but it was very hard to find an ampty compartment. Instead of sitting down there, he decided to continue walking through the train, in hopes of eventually finding a compartment with space.
 
OOC: Sorry...but in order to keep this thread as spam free as possible. I wish for everyone, and I mean everyone, to refrain from inviting, advertising, and or talking about things that have nothing to do with this rp. A discussion thread will be made here shortly where you can put these kind of post if you so please.

And to answer your question, Nat. Between PC acting up, stable chores, and trying to keep up on here. I have little to no time to do anything else. But I will, most definitely try my hardest to get over there. In the mean time, consider the above a first warning.

Skye...don't you think you're going a bit too fast? I mean it's only you're third post, and only my second. Some people haven't even posted yet! I think we should wait for everyone before we even think about getting to the train. I shall be very very angry if the train leaves without my quadruplets on board...and believe me...and can draw out my post until we have everyone caught...so relax and have alittle fun! ^^

I'm not going to post anything right now...it's way too late for my brain to be thinking properly. I just wanted to drop by and hand out some warnings and see what was going on and hoping I could still catch up! ^^
 
It seems early enough.. Can I join?
Name: Kiriko Angelia
Nickname: Kiri
Physical Description: Tall thin girl, with a more atletic build than just skin and bones. She has light blue eyes and short, messy blonde hair. She has freckles on top of her nose and under her eyes, and wears a light blue scarf with her robes. Under her robes, she wears a blue t-shirt, and jeans. Wears white tennis shoes.
Personality: Smart and creative, sits around doodling in her sketchbook alot. She's kind of quiet, and daydreams alot. Dispite this, she is very observant and pays close attention to things, being able to point out if someone makes a mistake in explaining something, and this makes it easy to tell if people are telling the truth or not. She is loyal and stands up for her friends without hesitating. Can be a bit of a knowitall at times, and other people find it very annoying.
House: Chipperscrat
Pet: A beautiful barn owl named Angel
RP Sample: Kiri stared at the letter she had just received in the mail as she left the post office. She had an astonished look on her face, and nearly ran into a telephone pole, but stopped and leaned against it to read her letter. She was going to a school of Witchcraft and Wizardry! She felt light headed and excited, as she folded the letter into a small square and pocketed it. She ran home as fast as she could without bothering to look at the rest of the mail. When she got home she flung open the door with a loud thump, and yelled "MOM!! You HAVE TO SEE THIS!! NOW!"

Is that good?
 
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OOC: You might want to look at how the others did their sign ups on the other page to get some idea what we're, or at least, I am looking for.

To make it quick and simple, more depth in appearance and personality, and take more time into your RP Sample. As I said you just might want to look at the profiles that were done on the previous page. *hint hint* ^^
 
OOC: *sigh* I really don't like criticizing people...but if I must...

The Appearance could be better than how you have it. It just says she's a tall thin girl with blonde hair and a scarf. It's lacking her figure, tall and thin are very bland. Looking for some spice here. Is she petite? Is she elegant? Does she look clumsy? What is her normal attire? Does she just go around naked with a robe around her and a scarf? What's her normal facial expressions, and so on and so forth. Detail detail detail, very very important.

The personality, what is her weaknesses? What are her strengths. Does she excel in sports? Is she even athletic? Is she an artist? Does she draw? Why is she quiet and when is she quiet? Does she have an interest in what she observes? How loyal is she? Is she obsessively loyal? Or is there catch to her loyalty? Does it come with a price? Back to weaknesses, does she have any fears? Again it all boils down to detail detail detail.

Last but not least, you're RP Sample. For one, you didn't listen to what I said before you posted. Skye was moving to fast, not everyone is on the train, and it had already been said that everyone was to leave at their house and get their stuff. So in order for it to be your first post, and to have all of the stuff accompanied by boarding the train, Kiri should have got from home to the square, got her stuff, and then made her way to the train, all that should have been included in order to get on the train.

My suggestion? Take more time into developing your character, and RP Sample. I'm sorry neither Skye or I clearly defined what we were looking for.

If Skye gets on and completely disagrees with me, then I put my trust in her, and since PC is acting stupid neither mine nor her PMs seem to be working to discuss it.

I'm tired...I need to rest...*goes to bed*
 
OOC: WOAH! Can I just board the train explaining my wand and what not? This RPG is going a mile a minute.
 
OOC: Batesy, easy there mate. Only skye and nat's character are on the train right now, the rest of the group is still gathering their stuff. My quadruplets only have their wands, they still need to get books, pets, and anything else they would need. And I already said, here again if you had listened prior to the confusion with RE, that I would take my time since other rpers need time to do all their stuff as well. So take your time and relax through this thing! No worries and no rush! ^^

Besides...we still have something like 7 other members to post their stuff...*reclines*
 
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