Clefable's little adventure. - A Poem

TwinkleClefable

Twinkle Twinkle Little Star~
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    Hehe, here is a Poem i just made. It took a little while to do. Enjoy!

    Twinkling Clefable was staring at the moon.
    When a fast quick figure was spotted very soon.
    The figure ran away from a trainer, who was mad,
    "Help me Help me!" The figure was sad.
    Quick as a whip, Clefable stood up.
    "I'll save you!" she said with a hiccup.
    Suddenly, the figure jumped in the air
    Stood behind Clefable and ate a pear.
    The trainer looked at Clefable, and then said with a grin,
    "Nobody can defeat me, I'll throw you in the bin"
    "What bin?" Clefable said very confused
    "Into my pokeball!" the trainer said amused
    He threw the ball right at Clefable
    But Clefable dodged and the Pokeball fell onto a table!
    "That was my last Pokeball" the trainer with rage
    "No matter.." and he threw Clefable into a cage
    "You're still mine!" and he laughed and laughed
    Suddenly he was knocked out, and behind him was a Giraffe.
    The giraffe stood up and showed off her scarf.
    "Girafarig" Clefable cheered.
    "You always get into trouble." Girafarig sneered.
    Girafarig rammed at the cage and it started to break
    Clefable was free and offered Girafarig cake.
    But what had happened to the figure, before?
    He was fast asleep, and he started to snore.
    "Wake up, wake up" Clefable jumped up and down.
    The figure woke up, and he started to frown.
    "What happened to the trainer, who tried to catch me?"
    "We took care of him" Clefable said happily
    "Um…who are you?" Girafarig looked at the figure
    "I'm a Linoone, and I can look very tall" Said Linoone trying to look bigger.
    "You look like a Meerkat." Clefable chuckled at Linoone
    Girafarig suddenly looked at the sky.
    As a shooting star flew by.
    The three Pokemon all made wish, which was very clever
    That they would all stay friends forever and ever.
     
    I like a story like this.
    But a couple lines don't really make much sense. Such as "I'll save you!" she said with a hiccup.
    A poetic story is good, but like any poem, it must be written with care.
    The poem is well above average though. Keep going.
     
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