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[Kanye West]

Collab. Click on it to see before

 

[Uecil]

Nice works! I like the smudging technique you have used ;D

 

[Elpizo]

I don't like your first three works because imo the cartoon focal doesn't fit that smudging style. (But hey that's just me) Plus don't like the text in any of them.
The halo and dragonballz ones fit the style more.
i don't like the border on the halo one or that thing on the far right.
I like that dbz one alot though. (Can't think of anything to critique on it)

 

[WonderGirl]

Excellent works, but the text position and font could be improved. Well done with the smudging effects, though!

 

[Kanye West]

I don't like your first three works because imo the cartoon focal doesn't fit that smudging style. (But hey that's just me) Plus don't like the text in any of them.
The halo and dragonballz ones fit the style more.
i don't like the border on the halo one or that thing on the far right.
I like that dbz one alot though. (Can't think of anything to critique on it)

Yea, I see what you're talking about on the first three but smudging and blurring is all I know..
I don't like the border on the halo one either... idk why I put it there. Also the blue thing was not added by me. Other person in the collab put that there.
Thanks

Excellent works, but the text position and font could be improved. Well done with the smudging effects, though!

Yeah, I'm not good at all with text. It actually took me longer to put text on the Hammer Bros one, that I was satisfied with, than to make the whole thing.

 

[Elpizo]

In those newer ones the blurring is sorta not appealing. It takes away from the sigs imo and makes them look like there is nothing in them. You should try adding more effects and practice depth to allow the focal to really pop out and look good. Also if smudging is all you know take a look at other sigs, try new styles, just practice practice practice and soon enough you'll know a huge array of things.