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(Comic) Pokemon Evilation

Jedite1000

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    here is my newest comic i hope to keep improving my comic skills cause my previous ones tanked, anyway this comic isnt about trainer getting first pokemon and starting a journey so you will b glad about that so here it is......................

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~POKEMON EVILATION~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~​

    Episode 1 - Rich kid on the block
    Episode 2 - Battle on Alex
    Episode 3 - Evil within
    Episode 4 - Revenge Alex VS Ben part 1
    Episode 5 - Revenge Alex VS Ben part 2 (coming soon)



    credit:wong agung - attacks
     
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    Those comics are great i can't wait to see the fourth one!
     
    1- Don't mix styles. Stick to one, your comic has atleast 4 different styles.
    2- Grammar. When making a sentence, always capitalize the first letter. Also, it helps to use a punctuation mark .
    3- When you use the bubbles, don't add little white spots, atleast color in those with the correct color. BTW, try and fill the entire bubble, or make smaller and larger ones.
    4- Why is it set in Pallet Town? And how did a building a skyscraper mansion magically appear?
    5- Could you try and explain the eye ball/hidden evil?
    6- How did he have a Caterpie, then have 6 Pokémon?
     
    most of the things u said was explained in the future episodes..upto episode 7
     
    Work on your grammar. A LOT. Good comics have good grammar. A poor use of special effects, if you ask me. You just paste without any real objective. Your backgrounds are all blurry and resized, as well as using a cliche starting point. Saffron would have been better.
     
    Other than what Angel Of Twilight said, I don`t really see anthing bad about it. The plot idea is a bit mixed up. Like, what exactly is the evil eye thing? Etc etc...

    But yeah... It`s actually okay so far... Just fix your grammar... Maybe detail it a bit more and try your best. You might make a darn awesome comic if you do <3
     
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