Contest entry for another forum? :3

[GABBATRON]

It's not finished yet since it's a family photo of a girl and her two sisters. But! This is an old tinypic upload from before I cleared the shoulder blush from outside of her shoulder, so that can be ignored. ^_____^ I wanna make the lines softer, but I don't know how without lots of work. .____.

But, critique please! Be as harsh as you want (I can take it!) but no acts with malicious intent, thank you.


(And I haven't made over 15 posts.. So I think I add it as an attachment?)

No stealing please!

 

[ethanftw]

wow this is really good and creative, thought the right side of her face and her chin looks a little large haha
but very nice job :D

 

[{Swan}]

I really like her expression and the cat, but her legs look kind of awkward. I don't know what you're going to do with that, but if you're leaving her like that you might think about taking a second look at the legs and feet. But the rest is beautiful, good job.