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Correct/Rate my OU team!

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    • Seen Apr 4, 2011
    Gyarados @ Leftovers
    Dragon Dance
    Waterfall
    Earthquake/Stone edge/Ice Fang
    Taunt
    Evs: 216 hp, 176 def, 116 sp
    Adamant

    This leads my team. Depending on the other lead pokemon determines how I'll play. I run into a tank I'll use taunt. If I run into something that I can use Dragon Dance with I will. Since intimidate will ruin any lead sweepers causing a switch most likely that's a free turn to Taunt, DD the next pokemon. If I sense an electric attack is coming I'll switch to electrivire to take the speed boost. I see a thunder wave or will-o-wisp coming I'll switch to heracross.

    Heracross @ Choice Scarf
    Megahorn
    Close Combat
    Stone edge
    Night Slash/Toxic
    6 hp, 252 sp/atk
    Adamant
    Guts

    Revenge-killer and can sweep if guts activates.

    Electrivire @ Expert Belt
    Cross Chop
    Earthquake
    Ice Punch
    Thunder Punch
    6 hp, 252 sp/atk
    Adamant

    Mostly a sweeper, but really only after it gets a speed boost from it's ability or ninjask.

    Ninjask @ Leftovers
    Baton Pass
    Swords Dance
    Aerial Ace
    Substitute
    252 hp/sp, 6 atk
    Jolly

    Once into about mid battle I can pull this out and start to set up another sweeper. Subs allows me a free turn to transfer the speed boost to another pokemon. Namely electrivire or porygon-Z. Sword Dance if I can would be given to gyarados or heracross. Aerial Ace if I happen to see a heracross that I can kill or anything else.

    Porygon-Z @ Life Orb
    Tri Attack
    Ice Beam/Thunderbolt
    Nasty Plot
    Dark Pulse
    252 sp/sp atk, 6 hp
    Timid
    Adaptability


    Sweeper set up. Benefits greatly from a speed boost from ninjask.

    Metagross @ Life Orb
    Explosion
    Agility
    Earthquake
    252 sp/atk, 6 hp
    Jolly

    Really this was just thrown in as a filler. I can't really think of any pokemon that could help my team a whole lot. This can allow an easier time to set up ninjask if metagross kills the other pokemon when it explodes. Any suggestions to a better 6th pokemon would be appreciated.

    As you can tell my team is based on prediction to get the most benefits from my team. Also it allows some late game sets ups as well. Any changes are welcomed.
     
    Massively overweighted with physical attackers- If Pory goe's down a good physical wall is gonna screw you over. That needs changing, you could do with a couple of walls too.
    Set's are all fine at a glance, but I cant stay so somebody else will have to offer a full rate.
     
    Electivire wants Thunderbolt, especially with the lack of Special Sweepers on your team.
     
    Massively overweighted with physical attackers- If Pory goe's down a good physical wall is gonna screw you over. That needs changing, you could do with a couple of walls too.
    Set's are all fine at a glance, but I cant stay so somebody else will have to offer a full rate.
    Agreed. Ninjask out, Regice in. I know it's a tank but you don't have one as well.
     
    Massive Infernape weakness. Use Vaporeon as a Wishpasser, preferably over Ninjask. Try out Choice Specs for some extra damage:

    Vaporeon @ Choice Specs
    Modest
    252 Def/252 SpA/6 HP
    Wish
    Surf/Hydro Pump
    Ice Beam
    HP Electric
     
    Agreed. Ninjask out, Regice in. I know it's a tank but you don't have one as well.
    NOT.

    Ninjask is there to pass speed boosts and subs to vire and pory-z, who can sweep with the speed. So, more sp. attk on there. You said you threw agiligross in there as a filler. You could go with agilliluke as a special sweeper.

    Lucario @ Life Orb
    Timid/ Modest Nature
    252 SPA/ 252 SPE/ 6 HP

    Agility
    Focus Blast
    Shadow Ball
    HP Ice

    That's the standard set.

    Edit: Oops. I jsut saw the INfernape weakness in there. Eitehr go with Vappy, as Vance said, or try Cress >> Vire.
     
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