Cursed Presents: Mario and Luigi: The Thousand-Year Stone

[Cursed]

After being inspired by the expertise of Mario and Luigi: ShadowStar Saga, I created my amazing ideas for my own Mlss Comic. Enjoy!
[Prologue: Return of the Shadows]
[Pt. I]
[Pt. II]
Chapter I: Rebuilding the Castle
[Pt. I]

Credit to Nintendo for creating the characters, Joshr for his custom Pokemon sprites, which helped me greatly in Chapter 1-1, The Spriters Resource for having the needed sprites.

 

[doesn't matter]

hmm, it's a poor effort in my opinion. It should at least explain a bit more of the story. Moreover, the panels are going from right to left right? I was confused at first XD;

Anywho, you should organise your panels better as well. Organising 5 panels the way you did only creates wasted space which could easily allow for another panel.

 

[Cursed]

Thank you for your opinion, but I was trying to make the beginning vague. As for the poor layout and lack of background in the 1-panel flashback, I am currently trying to adapt to photoshop, and my internet access was fried when I made the flashback. No offense, but how would you make a 5-panel layout? I am merely asking for future reference.

 

[Cursed]

Finally! Outta the Prologue, onto the interesting stuff!
[Episode I]