Yes, that is exactly what I mean. =3Now what does that mean, that she can write the story herself? You mean you think she's controlling me?
*is psychic*If so, you may be right, in a way.
XD! I'll think about it. First of all, I need to find the right point to split chapter 7, otherwise, you'll have no chapter left for beta-reading after Zammy's finished with chapter 6 b (or c? o,o).You should just have me beta-read your story if it's going to take this long, I'll do it, whatever I have to do. I just want to see it soon!
I have not read it *yet*, but I definitely will do it, as soon as I find the time. ^^
Can only be Cyrus, she has no other partner. At least not in this fic. Mwahahahaa...*cough*.Surely she thought she could pull this off and get what she wanted at last. But it would take perfect cooperation from her partner in crime to achieve her goal, so she could only hope he would pull off what he promised to do.
...your fic and mine are strickingly parallel now...although you couldn't know what I was writing about last night. o,o You're psychic?"Your love, that's all," Karen replied.
XD Karen's copying Cynthia. (And again, not only in your fic. o,o You *are* psychic. Or our fics are to similiar. XD!)"Stop it!" he cried as the Pokémon began to attack him. "Is this how you prove your love to someone?"
"Oh, I spontanously decided to have a picnic with Cyrus and Hunter J and Cyrus was training his dark power and accidently trapped me inside....NO FOR THE HECK THEY KIDNAPPED ME YOU DUMBA...!!!!" *snickers*"Lucian!" she cried. "What's happened to you?"
Then J should have asked for a bit more money. =3She held the whole world hostage at her fingertips, so she had no use for money.
He's not the only one who knows this. >>;;;;Cyrus enjoyed every moment of it, since Cynthia was such a good kisser.
One of them is very stubborn, and it's not J."I don't have it anymore," Cynthia said.
"I told you!" J shouted at Cyrus.
Don't we kinda have?"If so, this world wouldn't exist; we'd have a brand new world."
Lucian gets called 'boy' again."Well, then I'm doing what I want with this boy," J said.
Not almost, it IS!It was almost as if Dialga's power was being awakened.
1. Are you that desparate to die? 2. She just said...."Aren't you going to kill us?" Cyrus asked.
Ouch. Why does this remidn me of 'Michael Kohlhaas'? (Wyyrlokk might know, semi-great book, had to read it in school. XD!)"Not yet," Cynthia answered. "If there's anyone I kill, it's the one who betrayed me again."
And Karen is a darkling."I'll take you to her," Will said. "But be forewarned: she is much more powerful than me."
..."Just follow the pearl, follow the pearl," Roxanne said in an enchanting and perhaps disturbing way.
...sometimes, I have the feeling that she interprets/translates the sentences the way she *wants* to...and hey, maybe Cynthia's grandparents are young- *shot*."Choose the youngest of the four, they kiss, then continue once more," Roxanne read. "Well, it's obvious who the youngest are."
Your guys surely get the chance to cheat alot. Man, if real life was this easy....He could not help feeling very attracted to Roxanne and enjoying the kiss, but at the same time he knew what the end result of this would be.
Not again.but one thing remained: an inferiority complex.
*glares angrily*She could not help but think of Cynthia and feel lesser than her.
Awwww....^.^She desperately just wanted to spend some time with her daughter Roxette and not worry about the outside world for a while.
-_- Well, at least it's not Cynthia.However, much to her chagrin, someone was coming who was not about to let Sabrina rest for even a minute.
Uh oh."Welcome, boy," Cynthia stated. "Time for your punishment."
I should warn you, it's a five-story series. But if you want to read about the whole Cynthia-Sabrina feud, start at my fourth story "Dark Times" and then move on to the ongoing "Return of the Queen."
...I'm quite interested as in what this kind of sense is. =3As you'll see in the next chapter (if you haven't already), Cynthia's got a twisted view of things and she's a bit paranoid. Not paranoid in the sense that she's scared of dying, but in another sense.
...a different question: Will I *like* the revelation of the victim? >>It'll be the final torture chapter of the story, I promise. It's obvious who the victim will be.
XD Kinda agree with this, she could get away with everything! And secondly, I think she is beautiful enough to deserve some cheating.These boys do get to cheat a lot, don't they? Cynthia cheats a lot too, but she doesn't care. To be honest she actually probably doesn't cheat enough for what she could get away with.
I'm glad I don't have do deal with any sort of maths now. xD*pats Wyyrlokk* You're not the only one with trouble...*points to Math exam and faints* x,x
You want to tell that a beautiful person is *allowed* to cheat? xD That would be an interesting sort of morality.XD Kinda agree with this, she could get away with everything! And secondly, I think she is beautiful enough to deserve some cheating.Otherwise, some parts of my fic would be a lot less interesting...and Hunting Season would not exist at all!
You want to tell that a beautiful person is *allowed* to cheat? xD That would be an interesting sort of morality.
Normally, I'm not of that opinion, but considering that we're speaking about *CPF's* Cynthia here, who's practically a goddess in every sense of the word, I wouold allow her nearly (!!!) everything just to stay alive (and to keep my dear Sabrina alive >>;;;;;)You want to tell that a beautiful person is *allowed* to cheat? xD That would be an interesting sort of morality.
Normally, I'm not of that opinion, but considering that we're speaking about *CPF's* Cynthia here, who's practically a goddess in every sense of the word, I wouold allow her nearly (!!!) everything just to stay alive (and to keep my dear Sabrina alive >>;;;;
While I'm not quite sure what you are saying about allowing Cynthia to do something, make no mistake, Cynthia rarely takes orders from anyone, and the few times she does it's because she still has that shred of humanity in her that loves Lucian. One may wonder what happened to that after this most recent chapter. 10 chapters to go, somewhere along the way we'll find out if Cynthia achieves her ultimate goal of becoming one with Arceus, and thus completely ruling the world.
No, let me rather re-word it, 'allow' was a, well, unfitting word. I would not say one word against her cheating if she was that kind of a goddess, because I know she would kill me otherwise. ^^Lol... if you are in the position to *allow* a goddess something, you normally don't have to fear yourself being killed by her. xD Or do you mean you become killed by CPF?
I hope "becoming one with Arceus" doesn't mean she'll become as ugly as that detestable thing of a wanna-be-Pokemon.
Hm...are you searchong for Pokemon for a certain character? ^^If yes, just tell me the character and I would like to help (and no, I wil not try to be biased in any wayhmm....I'm still working on my list of pokemon in the story...
If you guys would like to help in anyway, I'd like it.
I agree with CPF, I would like to see it. =3As a side-note, I've actually got a mostly-finished cosplay of her, though I've yet to wear it.)
I get the psychoanalysis (I'm the psychologist here, damn it!XD)I can't wait to give a psychoanalysis of Cynthia in a later chapter, when you hear from the horse's mouth exactly how selfish she really is.
...and I was just about to post the review of Ch. 36, and now you made me impatient. >.<;;;; Mind if I first post the earlier review and then read chapter 37 and THEN write another review? (under the condidtion that someone posted inbetween? XD)And as for my story, Chapter 37 will hit hard and heavy, and it will rock a relationship. We're talking huge stuff here. No deaths, either. What could it possibly be? Oh, just wait and see. I'll tell you this much, P*A... it will have an effect on your future story.
Playing the clueless is not going to help you, boy."Get away with what?" Lucian asked.
Paranoid, whicked, crazy...name a word, Cynthia is it. XD"You wanted so badly to be able to kiss that woman, and so you set it up as if you had been kidnapped, just so you could get away with it."
"Yes, of course, actually, I *like* being tortured by you." ...."So, boy, are you happy now?" Cynthia asked
Sorry, no chance to change that anymore."I want a worthy husband to be the father to my son, not a worthless boy like you!" Cynthia yelled.
At least she did that 'gently'.And as he lay there, she gently placed her high-heeled feet upon his head, using her helpless husband as her personal footstool.
He's not very creative.Will figured the only way to get out of this was to have his wife defeat Karen herself.
And pigs can fly, can't they?Surely Sabrina could not get that upset, could she?
...XD!!!"You know, we could really use Liza right now," Will muttered.
...I would rather say, with all kinds of things you've survived during the last months, you're desinied to die from old age. >>"It's only a matter of time," Karen stated, as she began creating more dark energy with her hands.
"Maybe she's right," Sabrina muttered.
"Sabrina!" Will yelled at her.
"I don't know, Will, with all I've seen lately, maybe it just is my destiny to die young," Sabrina stated.
...and not for you? ;.;Now is not the time to quit… do it for Roxette, if anyone."
Stupid question, but why should Karen even pay attention to it? XDKaren ignored Will's encouragement
*hits head* That's so not the time to make a sacrifice!"No, take me with you!" Will cried
*mutters something about 'anti-climatic' ending XD*Sabrina immediately stopped, but Karen continued with her attack until Sabrina was knocked to the ground. The police officers then piled on top of them and took them away.
Yeah,right...>>If you want to battle like this, take it somewhere else – perhaps Sinnoh?
Dito, I would do the same.Sabrina looked skeptical, but did not say anything.
Well, darklings are good for something.Karen's challenge had brought out the old Sabrina, the one who was always confident and never doubtful. And that was the Sabrina she wished to be.
