Cynthia/Shirona Fanclub

[Crazy Packers Fan]

After this latest chapter, I don't think you'll question Cynthia's insanity any longer. I decided to show her all-out cruelty and evilness, and she is something else in this chapter. Then the ending to it will confuse you even more...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I'm still puzzled over the title...I get pain, but, princess? There's a princess in my future fic, but you can't know about that!

Cyrus! she thought angrily. He escaped anyway!

Yay! Now I may use him in my future fic, too! XD (If he survives the other 25 chapters, that is, lol)

What she found when she got there was quite a shock.

"Lucian!"

Lucian was engaged in a kiss with Hunter J, even while Cyrus was preparing to activate the Adamant Orb and set his new world into motion. Cynthia completely ignored Cyrus and yelled at Lucian.

First: What the heck is Lucian doing on Mount Coronet? Second: WHAAKO?!?JM§!? Lucian x Hunter J? Is there even a name for this ship? Thirdly: Lucian x Hunter J? WHAT IN THE WORLD IS HAPPENING HERE?!?!?! Fourthly: ....and Cyrus is ignoring them and just working in the background? Priceless image, lol. XD

"I just thought… it was only fair."

....so Hunter J can marry Cyrus now?

Then, simply reaching out her hand, she knocked Cyrus over psychically and caused him to drop his Adamant Orb.

...*imagines Cyrus, who had been ignored so far* Cyrus: o,o Ehm, what? Heh, I thought you were busy with Lucian!

"I'm sorry, Cyrus, but I guess I'll have to let you survive,"

First, why and secondly....she is sorry that he has to survive? Ehm.....

"Next time, you'll have to be more specific."

For some reason, this cracks me up. Be more specific on what you want. A kiss, love, or a death sentence by Cynthia? Or all of the above? LOL

"So, Lucian, I see that you have been unfaithful to me," she stated.

SO WHAT?!?! You have been unfaithful to him several times....

"You know who that person was?"

"Me, Queen Cynthia?" Lucian asked.

"No," Cynthia said solemnly. "It was designed to be used on Sabrina, my mortal enemy."

For some seconds, I had some very interesting BlackVelvet thoughts here...Cynthia wanted to marry Sabrina?! XD!!!

"What are you, anyway?"

Ehm, a human being? >> Not as if you treat him as such, anyway...
Won't quote all the paragraphs from here but...heck, your Cynthia is evil. o,o She is...beyond evil. o,o Poor Lucian, poor, poor Lucian. If I wanted to make a joke, I would say he shoul take lessons from Ash now (you now, being electruced and so), but...this is not funny anymore. o,o

"It was originally so my prisoner couldn't get away, but here it will serve the double purpose of making sure you can't go off kissing other women."

Well, he can't go to the woman, but the women can come to him. XD!

"You- you hypocrite!" he screamed. "You lay in bed with Cyrus… you did worse things than I!"

Lucian is not in the position to say such things, yet it's the bland truth. (Hypocrite...why am I cracking at this again? snicker)

Lucian sighed. "I forgive you, Queen Cynthia," he said.

He, forgiving her? Doesn't fit.

Perhaps prisoner? Perhaps traitor? No, I'm not that cruel

...

You no longer have a life of your own, you are no longer even your own identity.

Well, to be sarcastic, did he have a life of his own before?

"If you feel pleasure yourself, that is okay,

Whoah, isn't she merciful today...oh, my, god....
I have never written such a cruel character, now I fear I might have trouble writing her that insane. At least Roy will be easy to write...
*insert entire paragraph here* ...o,o Oh, my, god....this is beyond evil, this is beyond insanity. Cynthia defines these words all new by herself.

Cynthia suddenly grew angry. "How pathetic of myself, to have mercy on a boy so worthless!" she exclaimed.

Then punish yourself! ...I think she has lost it...

She then kicked him in the head with her high heel, causing him to bleed.

Football boots, plz.

what is wrong with me?"

...a lot.

"I sure scared him… maybe a little too much."

....*scared* is not exactly the right word. *a little too much* is not even NEAR the right word.

I want him to fall back in love with me."

You're doing it wrong.

"I'll make it all up to Lucian… he just has to wait and see… I still love him."

...

"If she doesn't do something, we'll find ourselves a new queen – one who will care for us!" still another one screamed.

Well, you have three other women to choose from....

"Replacement?" Diane asked.

"Yes," Cynthia said with a smile. "That shall be you."

Huh what?!?! o,o
You know....you should more often go to conventions. It seems to make your fic...I don't know, freakier? But in a great sense....it cracks me up so much. Of course, sometimes it cruel, but at the same time, it cracks me up...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Well, I don't know if this chapter had anything to do with me going to the convention, but it sure turned out crazy. I decided that Cynthia had not yet shown her true level of cruelty, and now we know exactly how cruel of a woman she is. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it, this was another chapter I was wondering whether it would come out right or wrong, but I guess it turned out okay.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

XD Well, either it has to do with me having a few days off school and being a bit over-crazy, or your convention, but somehow, this chapter felt crazier than others. And crueller. Which brings me to the point....she hasn't shown her true levels of cruelty yet? WTF? She lied to her gym leaders, tortured several people, nearly killed several people (I won't even go into detail about Sabrina), killed several HUNDREDS of people, and apparently enjoys to torture her own husband to show him how much she loves him.
I'm not sure if she's not already level 100 of cruelty yet.
I need to take a writing course before I start writing her...o,o

Yep, it turned out okay. XD It's these Cynthia chapters without so much of a hint of Sabrina that I enjoy that show you that you are a great wrtier. ^^

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I'll be very interested to see how you write her... somehow though I don't think she's fit to live any more after all she's done. Is that a hint?

Thanks, though I don't really know about that. I just hope to make the reader happy...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well, one thing's for sure, the way I write her in my fic is not any hint. My Cynthia and your Cynthia, althought both are undoubtly 'evil', are evil in very different ways.
Is that a hint? I doubt it. You like Cynthia too much to kill and I would be killed by you if I killed her. So, no way she's gonna die. Would be a bit too lame, too, wouldn't it?

Is it a hint that you wrote 'the reader', as in, no plural? XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Yeah, you're right, there's no way I'd kill Cynthia, though last chapter was the first time I actually felt negatively towards her. That was just a little too cruel...

And yes, I mean just one reader, because that's all I've got. But at least I have one!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Yay!!!No, not the right word...Perfect!Nah...Wonderful!!!...any hint about how I feel about your Cynthia? XD I kinda hate-love her...hate her hate towards Sabrina and her uberness, love her insanity.

Nah, think positive, you have more than one. =3 They're just hiding! XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

According to ff.net, the country with the second-most readers I get for my stories is Malaysia. I didn't know people spoke English there. I have one person raising the flag for Germany in fourth place. Canada is down there with Poland and China with barely any readers.

Now about this latest chapter, Cynthia may have been very evil, but do you think that fit right in with the story? Or did I go too extreme?

 

[Psychic*Absol]

I have/had readers from Germany, Canada, America and the Netherlands. That's pretty much it. >>;;

XD Does it fit into the story? Yes. Is it too extreme? Cynthia CANNOT be too extreme. Chuck Norris can be extreme. Queen Cynthia not.
Do I like it? Yes and no. *g*

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

That's right, nothing's too extreme for Queen Cynthia, who will show exactly how extreme she is in chapters to come...

I wish I had a certain reader from Canada, but I have failed to get him as one of my readers...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

...let's see how extreme she can get...I fear for the worst, lol.

Well, you may get him once. Zammy told me he wanted to read your fic, but wants to do it from the beginning, so, he has a lot to catch up with. ^^
Anyway, review time! (might split review into parts, btw I love splitting up things...)

Title--> o,o Omg, I fear for the worst. (No, please, no one dieing of them!)

Cynthia walked back into her throne room to find her husband Lucian struggling to get up. She quickly rushed over to him and took off the ring that she put on his finger.

"I'm sorry, Lucian," she told him. "I really am."

That woman freaks me out. She really does. First, she nearly kills him, then she rushes to him and apologizes and, what next? Abuse him again? >>;;;

I just was trying to scare you into never wanting to kiss another woman again," Cynthia explained.

Well, you could have done that without torturing him. You know, talking helps...

"Well, you did a good job of that," Lucian stated.

Is it usual for Lucian to be sarcastic in such a situation?

Cynthia then quickly teleported away with Lucian, as she took him to a nearby hospital, hoping to get him healed.

Now where do I know this from?

"Did Queen Cynthia get shorter?" one asked.

LOL

"Queen Cynthia wouldn't allow anyone else to be royal," another one stated.

Well, now again, this is Cynthia, who is kinda...freaked out.

And this one caused all the men to permanently disappear.

You said only *two* deaths.

"Obviously Cynthia does not care about her own people," Karen declared.

D'oh.

"How do you think you'll get them to do that?" asked A.J.

Well, with a few certain gym leaders, that won't be that hard.

"Oui!" Fantina exclaimed.

"Yes, of course!" Candice cried.

*smiles without words*

"You are to go into the land of Sinnoh and destroy Cynthia's hometown of Celestic Town,"

*lightbulb* Now the title makes sense! ^^

Moreover, Cynthia's house was destroyed, with her grandparents still inside it. The house collapsed down upon them and killed them both.

...ah, so that are the two deaths. Well, not as if I cared much. 0=)

"Good work, Pikachu!" Ash Ketchum yelled, after Pikachu finished attacking Cynthia's house.

My prediction of the next death: Ash K. lol

"This ought to stir up Cynthia enough."

It sure will.
Now, if this continues, the whole Celestic family will be destroyed. 0=)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Oops, I forgot about Cynthia's little sister killing off some people as well, so obviously more than two deaths. I thought it would be a twist to have Ash Ketchum as the killer... I can see him doing it after all the cruel things he's done to Team Rocket over the years. But Cynthia's reaction to this will confuse you even more...

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Heheh, Diane is going after her big sister, in all ways.
Isn't Ash a bit dumb to be a real killer? And TR is immortal.
...okay...

"Well, then I'll congratulate you two most of all," Karen said

Karen quickly changes her mind...

and there is no doubt now that she will now realize that we mean business."

Is there no doubt?

"Getting her angry is just going to lead to her taking further revenge on our lands, isn't it?"

"Not when her pawns are sitting on our side of the chessboard," Karen replied.

For some reason, that strategy is not really working for me...

"Quit it with the chess analogies and just play it straight," Gold stated.

lol, hey, I like chess analogies!

A shrug of her shoulders.

Eh, okay...and she made such a fuss out of her parents being killed by Sabrina Mewtwo?

"Is Lucian okay?" she asked the doctors.

Well, at least she cares about Lucian...

there may be some serious damage to his brain, we don't know if he'll ever be the same again,"

*stares at sentence* WTF?

"I can't imagine what that would have been," Cynthia responded.

Some damamge must have done to her brain as well...

If this gave her opponents pleasure, then she was happy that her opponents had gained something to be happy about, because she knew what she was going to do to them.

Kill them.

where Diane told her sister about her newfound powers.

Newfound? Hey, with that woman as your sister, you're bound to have some powers of your own. ^^

"Diane, you and I are going to rule over this Pokémon world together," Cynthia declared.

Interesting, interesting...

me as queen and you as princess."

And Roy as the prince.

"Killed?" Diane asked. "By who, Queen Sister?"

"By a very vicious and evil woman named Sabrina," Cynthia replied.

?!?!?!?!?!?! Something's off here...

"I have powers now, I'll kill Sabrina myself if I have to!" Diane exclaimed.

....ouch.

"It will take us working together in order to finish off Sabrina, but she will die," Cynthia stated.

Double-ouch. But at least Cynthia admits that she alone is not strong enough to kill Sabrina...0=) *hides*

"How stupid, what is that Karen thinking?" Will questioned.

"I don't know, what is she thinking?" Sabrina added.

"What do you mean by that?" Will asked.

That she can't read his mind?

"You know," Sabrina said. "I know that you know Karen better than anyone else."

...that *she*, of all people mentions this...

"No, Will, I want to hear all about her," Sabrina replied. "I'm ready. Tell me all about your time with Karen.

Oh, I smell flashback chapter!

I've always thought that a dark-type and a psychic-type wouldn't mix."

...now you're stealing Spring's Revenge's plot! XD

"Are you sure?" Will asked. "You won't… get mad or anything?"

She will get mad once you've finished. XD

"Okay," Will replied. "But you might regret asking…"

Hm...if even Will says this...

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Nice how Cynthia doesn't care about her grandparents' death - or at least pretends not to care - and then decides that she's going to put something else on Sabrina. Now both of the surviving Celestics have it in for Sabrina. It's pretty cool imagining that little girl wearing a coat and fur, all in black, just like her big sister.

Meanwhile, there's a whole bunch of stuff to be resolved: what will Cynthia do if she's lost the support of the gym leaders, what will Team Rocket do next, when will Giselle ever show up again, will Lucian ever be better again, will Sabrina live, and what revenge will the Celestic sisters take. But first, a flashback chapter, the fourth such one.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Nice how Cynthia doesn't care about her grandparents' death - or at least pretends not to care .

Just pretends? Interesting...

It's pretty cool imagining that little girl wearing a coat and fur, all in black, just like her big sister..

Little girl wearing a coat and fur, all in black? Link! ^.~ https://meii-chan.deviantart.com/art/Shirona-Lolita-62036255

what will Cynthia do if she's lost the support of the gym leaders,

Not care.

what will Team Rocket do next,

Another advertisment campaign.

when will Giselle ever show up again,

Hopefully neverKnowing you, soon.

will Lucian ever be better again,

Both me and Cynthia (?) hope so.

will Sabrina live,

>> No comment.
A lot of things to resolve in the remaining chapters...

But first, a flashback chapter, the fourth such one.

Hehe, was right!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Yes, you're right, another flashback. But I can't say enough about the awesomeness of that pic. That "Lolita Shirona" is Diane. That's what she looks like, exactly. So if you want to picture her, just look at that picture, because that is her.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Sweet. ^^ That's not exactly how I pictured Diane, but then, I haven't really tried to picture her aside from an idea about her hair style, and even that was only inspired by a fanart. ^^ Diane looks way too innocent then...she's already a killer!

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

That's what makes her even better, she looks innocent, yet she's as cold-blooded as her older sister. She should be an interesting character to develop as she attempts to gain power and follow her big sister's footsteps.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

That strangely reminds me of Cynthia's innocent smile...seems as if Diane inheritated that. That, and a few other things..aka, her powers. Seems as if they're in the genes, too. *g*
Well, you develop her and I kill her off eighteen years later and everything you wrote was for nothing. XD Nah, just kidding. I would love to see how you develop her. After all, she is Cynthia's sister, yet, will Cynthia allow anyone to be as powerful as her? So far, Cynthia is the queen, and Diane the princess. Queen >>>> princess, afaik.