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Psychotic_Demon

The Espeon of the Moon
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    i looked out of my window at the moon. every one else in the house was asleep but me. why would i want to go to sleep when all the good stuff happens at night? besides, i was meeting two friends and we were going to this creepy old house on a hill that we had herd about in school.

    i heard a noise in the bush just below my bedroom window. opening it up i could see two people. one shined a light in my face. "leila... is that you?
    come on!" it was melissa, one of my friends. "yea." said the other one.
    "if we dont hurry we could get caught." that was my other friend, roxanne.

    i jumped out of my window landing softly on the wet grass. as qiuetly as i could i closed the window. we walked down my driveway and out onto the deserted street. in no time we reached the woods.

    the woods at night were very dark. it was so dark you couldnt see your hand in front of your face. "i dont like the looks of this..." roxanne said in a small voice. " c`mon roxy, we`ll be ok." i said trying to comfort her. the truth was,
    i was scared to. we plunged into the thick darkness of the woods. it took
    a while, but we were finally at the huge hill. all that was left was the steep climb up and then the house.

    "leila, i dont think i can take another step" melissa said breathing heavily.
    "we`re almost there, melissa." i answered back. "we can rest at the top."
    in no time we were upon the house. shingles were loose, the roof look as though it could cave through at any moment and the garden looked like a jungle.

    we all stoped at the old stairs that lead up to the house. "so who goes first?"
    i asked. melissa looked at roxanne. roxanne looked at melissa. then they both looked at me. "alright, alright i`ll go first." what babies...

    creeeeeck the door swung open slowly... wow i thought this is just like in the movies. we walked down the hall, only to find a spiral staircase. neither of us coud see the top. i took the first step and carefully tested my weight on it. when i decided it was safe i started to climb.

    "leila...maybe this isnt a good idea..." it was roxanne.
    "yea" said melissa. "we dont know where this thing leads..." i still climbed higher. finally i saw the end. great there was another long hall. BAM!!! a door slamed. we all screamed! we ran down the hall, still screaming! then i saw something unexpected.

    there was a door...it was cracked open...there was a light inside...
    and there were vocies on the other side of the door...
     
    this may sound like a movie but it gets better! :D
     
    that's a really good fanfic dark_espeon!! can't wait to see more :)
     
    wow u replied less than three minutes after me...freaky O_o

    so you really like it?!? :)
     
    ok i`ll make another part...or should i make u wait till tomorrow?
    mhahahah*cough,cough*hahahaha
     
    i inched closer and closer to the door, trying not to to make a sound.

    three voices started talking "we team rocket, shall rule the world! if only we knew what this stupid machine does!" said one voice. "i dont know why the boss had us steal this stupid thing!" said another. "its got to have some sort of important meaning..." said a third.

    SQEAK!!! AHHH!!!! roxanne almost steped on a mouse!
    "who`s there?!?!?!?" the three voices said, almost in unision. "RUN!" i screamed.


    we dashed down the hall followed closely by the rockets. down the never ending staircase (or at least it seemed that way) and out the door.

    when we were inside a mist must have setteld in the forest. because we couldnt see 2 feet in front of us... "c`mon we can lose them!" i said nervously
    there were two good things and two bad things about the fog. the good things: we could lose the rockets and hide. the bad things: we could lose each other and run into the trees. it seemed hopeless.

    we ran blindly, not knowing where the heck we were going. "ack!" one of the rockets triped. there was a blinding flash and every thing was iluminated. the one who triped was holding the wierd machine. the machine was pointed at me.

    "RUN!!!!!!!!!!!" i screamed to roxanne and melissa. a bright light surrounded me...every thing went dark...
     
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW
    that is good. is this the part where she turns into an espeon. or does the machine does something else. it is very good. keep on going. yea
     
    i awoke to find myself in a huge forest. it took me a minute to recall last nights events. but something felt wrong. i didnt feel like myself... i was more alert... like i had a sixth sence or something...

    for the first time i relized that i was surrounded by pokemon... a pichu asked me what happened. i was about to replie when... wait a minute...
    THEY WERE TALKING?!?!?!?!?!?!?

    "whats going on absol?" he asked me again, seeing the worried look on my face. "ABSOL!" i screamed. "I`M NOT AN ABSOL!!! I`M A HUMAN!!! AND HOW COME YOUR ALL TALKING!!! WHATS GOING ON?!?!?!?"

    all of the pokemon ran away except him. "what are you talking about?" he said, looking at me like i was insane. i tried to stand up. it took a couple tries because i wasnt used to standing on four feet.

    i ran over to a small puddle of water. looking down at myself i saw white fur covering my whole body. i had shap teeth, and two blades. one blade was my tail, the other...?

    the pichu walked over to me. "whats your name?" he asked. "mine`s spark."
    "i`m...blade..." i wasnt going to use my real name. why not? it was all just a dream anyways-- or at least i hoped so...

    l started to walk away to go look for food. "hey wait up!" he called after me.
    "what is it?" i asked. "my sister and i got seperated from each other and i was wondering..." he took a deep breath. " if i could tag along with you?"

    i thought about this for a moment and then said "alright, i guess thats ok."
    he smiled. "thanx!" we walked around for about an hour before we found some berries, but the berries werent very filling.

    just then the wind shifted blowing a heavenly scent our way. i sniffed the air.
    instantly i knew what it was.

    blueberry pie... fresh baked... not even half a mile from where we were...
    spark jumped onto my back and we tore out of the forest torwards the smell as fast as we could...
     
    its really good like reyna said. i like the point of view and its a cool topic. keep up the good work :)
     
    yay! you like it!!! mabey i`ll write more--later!
     
    it is really good. but where are leila's friends did they got turn into pokemon or what. and how leila got in the forest. but the plot is gooooooooooddddddd
     
    LOL This is kinda like brother bear! I love that movie and I love this fic!

    edit: Lookie what I made! LOL
     
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    reyna, i`m getting to that! you`ll see!

    deoxys55...I LOVE THAT PIC!!!! ITS PERFECT!!! now i have to figure out how to use it... and where... but i still like it! :D
     
    in less than five minutes we fond the base of the sweet smelling aroma.
    there was a small, but cozy cabbin in a clearing. and on the windowsill was the best looking pie ever... and it was about to be ours!

    i started to walk torwards the house. out of nowhere that sixth sence kicked in. something told me we were being watched...

    "hey!" a gruff voice said. "back away from that pie!" i turned around. there stood a tough looking poockyena.

    "oh yea," i said, not knowing what else to do. "what if i dont?" that, was a bad idea. the poochyena was mad. real mad. really, really mad. so mad-- you get the picture.

    he used tackle. i dodged it, but just barely. spark tumbled off my back and landed right in front of the poochyena. poochyena was about to use bite on him when i called "here poochy poochy poochy! i`ll bet you cant catch me!"

    "i`ll bet i can!" he said. "well..." i called, trying to think of something that would lure him away from spark. "i`ll bet you couldnt kill a wurmple!"

    that did it. he went after me. spark stood up. "blade! use one of your attacks!" "uhh... spark" i said, trying to dodge another one of poochyena`s attacks. was this guy ever gonna stop? "what are my attacks?"

    spark looked at me in disbeleife. "you dont know your own attacks?!? all right thats it!" he used thundershock on the poochyena. the poochyena looked from spark to me. this obviously wasnt a fair fight, but hey, i was hungry!

    i searched my mind, trying to think of something an absol would know. scratch. i thought. and tail whip! those are my attacks!!!

    i lunged at the poochyena and used scratch. he fell down and wouldnt get up... i did it... i beat a poochyena!!! spark grabbed the pie and we took off...
    the door to the cabin opened. a young girl ran out. i could hear her saying how nice it was that he tryed to protect her pie.

    oh well. i thought. i`ll train harder and harder until no one can can beat me!!!
     
    YAAAAAAAAY!!!!! you people like it!!! is it really that good? i`m just making this up as i go along. ok, heres the next part! hope ya like it! ;)

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    in about five more minutes we were back in the forest. spark hopped off my back. "we did it!" i said, ready to eat that pie. "you mean i did it!" spark said. "oh so now your `spark, the super pie theif`?" "at least i know my own attacks" he retored. "the more i get to know you the more i believe your story"
    "whatever..." i said, knowing there was no point in arguing.

    we dug in. that pie was the best i had ever had. after we finished i sat down and reveiwed all the things that had happened to me while i was an absol.

    i was turned into an absol... i met a pichu... i beat a poochyena... *yawn*
    i was getting tired... looking to my left i saw that spark was already aseelp.
    it was pretty late...

    i layed down and started to dream...

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    sorry its kinda short today... next part will be longer i promise!
     
    i cant stand it anymore! MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!

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    fire was everywhere... there was a huge downpour... the ground was ripping itself appart... trees were falling... lakes drying up in three seconds... the earth was destroying everything.

    pokemon and people were runing for their lives. there was confusion and destruction everywhere. two collosal pokemon were fighting each other... there was no place to run, no place to hide...

    but there were those who opposed the destrcution. a small group of pokemon and people faced the two pokemon. but out of all of those pokemon, stood out an absol, a riachu, and some other pokemon...

    "ahhh!!!" i awoke with a start. the dream... it seemed so real... i didnt know what to think. "huh? whats wrong blade?" spark asked me, rubbing sleep out of his eyes. "n-nothing" i replied
    "it was just a dream..." "tell me about it." spark said. "i rather not..."
    i answered.

    the rest of the night i stayed up. everytime i closed my eyes the images would replay themselves in my mind. it was driving me crazy!

    but i wondered... it was so real... i felt like i was there... was i?
    was i turned into a pokemon for a reason? do i do something great?
    do i change the world?

    i had so many questions that couldnt be answered...
     
    ok i`ll write more! :P

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    later in the morning i was exuasted. i hadnt slept a wink since i had that horrible dream...

    spark woke up. he took one look at me and said "you didnt sleep at all last night did you?" i shook my head. "well too bad" he said. "cause we got a lot of traveling to do." "what for?" i asked. "do you wanna be human agian?!?" he replied, a big smile forming across his face.

    we got up and stated to look for some water. after about ten minutes spark found a small stream. i looked at myself in it. my pure white had been darkened a little, my claws had grown, and i had grown a little bit stronger...

    was i ever going to be human again? there was that question again.

    suddently, i heard a crie far downstream. "spark! c`mon!" i said, racing torwards the noise. when i got there something really suprised me.

    two rockets were holding a dratini in a net but the surprising thing was that the people who caught her were the three guys that changed me into an absol!!!!
     
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