dark blade

Nice effects and details. This should be a good fanfic if it wasn't for some Spelling and grammar errors. Keep it up! ^_^
 
i havent written in awhile... i guess ill write more!!!

------------------------------------------------

"spark, those are the guys who turned me into an absol!" i said angerly.
"what? you mean it was them?" spark asked, tilting his head to one side.
"yep." i answer simply. "so what do we do?" he asked. "help that dratini." i said.

we crept closer and closer to them. "boss is really gonna be in for a big surprise when we give him this!" one said. "talk about promotion!" anouther exclaimed. "will you guys just shut up and gimme a hand!!!" the thrid one said, falling into the water.

i waited for the perfect moment to attack... then i charged at them and used scratch, cutting the net and the people. "what the heck?!?" they said.
"spark help dratini get out of here! ill take care of these guys..." i said getting angrier and angrier by the second.

the battle was about to begin. i studied all my surroundings. there was a large boulder six feet to my left, the river to my right, and a huge tree eleven feet behind me. the grass was prety thick so i could easily hide, and the sand was wet so i could lure their pokemon over there and they would get stuck...
perfect...

"go pochyena!" "go zigzagoon!" "go rattata!" they all said in turn. i was ready though... i wouldnt lose this battle... not against these three people!
 
"poochyena! use tackle!" the poochyena tried to tackle me but i easily dodged it. "alright, rattata use scratch!" rattatas attack hit me, but i quickly recovered from the blow. "zigzagoon use quick attack now!" zigzagoon almost hit me but i jumped up onto the rock.

it was my chance to attack. i ran at rattata and scratched it. then i paused. i had learned anouther attack! i used quick attack on zigzagoon, but i missed. i used it again on poochyena and sent it flying!

"thats it" one guy said. "playtime is over!" poochyena! use bite! the poochyena bit me before i had a chance to react. i was mad... these guys were really annoying me...

i scratched poochyena. then i climbed up the tree. "rattata climb up the tree and attack!" a man said. that was a bad idea because i was ready. rattata jumped up onto the branch i was on. i used scratch and he flew out of the tree, high into the air.

i heard a voice. "rattata return..." i had beat rattata! i jumped out of the tree and used quick attack while i was in the air, hitting zigzagoon. it tackled me but that was a weak move. i used tail whip. nothing happened. oh that helped a lot. i thought.

from out of nowhere sand went flying into my eyes. i couldnt see... it was poochyena. i was really begining to dislike poochyenas... i blindly used scratch and hit zigzagoon. i heard it fall to the ground. just one left i thought.

now all i had to do was beat poochyena...
 
oh be quiet... i really dont care how its spelled as long as people know what i mean...
 
hey tis is pretty cool!!! renia was rigth about this fanfic. (i don't come here often but since renia is an firend i took her advice to come) i have seen many great rp stories but this is the better then all of them!!!!!!!!


keep the story going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
poochyena stared at me. he didnt blink, neither did i. i took one step forward. he ran top speed at me.... but i jumped into the air just before it could hit me. poochyena kept going and ran into the tree.

i landed softly on the riverbank, trying not to put too much weight on one foot. poochyena shoock his head and turned around. he ran at me again. big mistake. he took three steps and got stuck in the wet sand.

i walked up to him and used scratch a few times. just then he rolled over on his side and freed himself.

"your time is up!!!" he snarled.

"really?!?" i said a smile forming across my face. "because your in for a rude awakening!"

a dark shape pounced on poochyena, driving him into the ground. poochyena shoock it off but before he could do anything i attacked with bite. he howled in pain and threw me to the ground.

i had barely stood up before he jumped onto me, using bite over and over again. i could feel hot blood driping down my back... he was thrown off by the dark shape and i used the oppertunity to scratch him.

he was to the point of exuastion. he collapsed... the three men stared at me in awe. "poochyena return..." one said. "we have to catch that absol..." i took a step forward. the three men turned and ran.

i laughed. but i stopped. i was hurt badly. i fell to the ground and looked up. looking down at me was anouther absol.... everything went black.....


hope you like! if you want tell your friends about it!
 
"blade...... blade! wake up!" something slaped me on the face. it was spark!

"wha..... huh? what happened?!?" i asked, wincing in pain. my white fur was stained a dark red color....

"after the fight you blacked out." a new voice said. "im naira. thank you for saving me!"

i looked up. it was the dratini i saved.

"you fought bravely. well done." it was the other absol who helped me! his fur was a sleek black color. "u have been asleep for two days... blade. we have been trying to wake you up for a long time."

"thanks for watching over me..." i mumbled. "i blade. whats your name?" i asked him.

"well... i... uhh ... im shadow! yea! shadow!" was his reply.

"ok, now that we all know each other dont ya think we should get moving?!? those men might come back!" spark said, jumping on to my back.

i turned around, facing the land up ahead of us. absol eyes are much better than humans so i could see a city about 11 miles from the edge of the forest.

a city! i thought. there could be rockets about! but we have no choice... i started walking in the cities direction. shadow and naira followed. we walked for a long time, ocasionally pausing to rest.

after awhile the sun started to sink behind the cities skyscrapers. we came to a road and walked along that for a very long time. shadow stoped.

"whats wrong?!? i asked him.

there was a long silence before he answered. "i hear something... a car... no--a truck!"

i could hear it too. it was moving fast getting closer and closer. we all slowly turned around. behind us was a giagantic truck--heading strait for us!

"get off the road!!!" i shouted. we all jumped to the nearest bushes we could find and held our breath. the truck stopped. a person climbed out. he held a walkie talkie.

"i dont see any absols around here..." he said into it. i could barely hear the person on the other end. "well keep looking around that area. i want that absol!!!" the voice on the other end made my skin crawl.

the man climbed back into the truck. i watched it drive torwards the city.

if the three men alerted team rocket about me that means that they are looking for me! they will never catch me! i would like to see them try! i thought angirly.

we all sat there in the moonlight for awhile. none of us moved. eventually spark and naira fell asleep. i wandered away from the group, and sat on a huge rock. the moon was beautiful... just like on the night i was turned into an absol... i sighed.

"mind if i join you?" a voice asked. i whirled around. it was shadow.

"oh... no. i dont mind." i answered, watching him gracefully jumping up on to my rock.

he looked at me... and i looked at him... we scooted closer together. i was lost in the moment. it was just me, shadow, and the stars up above...
 
yay!!!!!!! i couldnt think of anything else to write...

*~*~*~*~*~*

i woke up the next morning and shadow was gone... i walked back to the bushes where everyone fell asleep and asked if they had seen shadow.

"why?" spark asked with a stupid grin spreading across his face. "do u liiiiike him?!?"

"no!" i shouted, starting to blush. "i just wondered where he was..." naira looked like she was about to burst.

i stormed away from them and sat down. "blade.... what are you doing here? i thought you were asleep." he said. i looked up into his eyes.

"oh well i just woke up and was wondering if yuo wanted to go look for some food with me!" seeing him brightened my mood. he nodded. "race ya!" i said to him.

"your on!" he smiled. i smiled back. we raced down the road. i could see naira and spark laughing hystericly behind us but that didnt matter. i took a sharp turn and got ahead of shadow. he laughed and easily caught up. he inched further and further ahead of me so i pounced on him.

"hey!!!" he said laughing. and playfully scratched me. i ran over a hill and stopped. there in front of me was a vast field of flowers. looking behind me i could see he was catching up. i ran down the hill and jumped into the flowers. i was in heaven.

shadow ran up to me. "look! these bushes have berries on them!" he exclaimed. i pick a few berries and tasted them. they were delish! i pick up a berry and threw it at shadow. he threw a whole bush at me! we stayed in the field laughing and playing till the sun went down.

i layed down and rolled over onto my back. shadow layed down beside me. "shadow... i love you..." i said quietly.

"and i love you..." he sighed.

meeting shadow was the best thing that ever happened to me... we were in love...

wait a minute... was i in love with a pokemon?!?
 
i kno its wierd! thats why i put it! becuase i m crazy!!!! lol!!!
 
i sat up. this was insane... me?!? leila batsurami in love with shadow the absol?!?

"shadow, im going for a... walk... alone..." i said qiuetly. shadow didnt hear me. i walked away.

i walked through the night. a voice spoke up. "i knew it! your in love!!!" it was spark.

"i know..." i answered. "but how do i tell him?"

"what? that your a human? just go up to him and say: uh shadow... im a human." he told me.

"its a lot more complicated than that, spark." i said sadly. "i didnt even tell you my real name..."

"what? i thought you trusted me!" he exclaimed.

"i do! i do! i just... ok fine. my real name is leila. you can still call me blade but it doesnt really matter..." i said. he didnt answer. i got up and walked away.

the moonlight reflected off my coat, making it shimmer. a noise in the bushes made me jump. my body tensed up, ready to attack at anygiven moment. out of the bushed glided naira.

"i heard what you and spark said. so your a human? i didnt know that." she said. i didnt answer. she got the massage that i didnt want to talk. she disappeared into the night.

it was around three in the morning by the time i layed down. i was far from everyone else. my eyes were starting to close... i fell asleep into a horrible dream...
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top