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Thanks for saying that sis..your always there for me.And I do love purple as much as you like pink....And im glad you like the poem.
 
wow that is awsome ^^ keep it up ^^
 
Hmm..From what I can see, there doesn't seem to be any errors in spelling or grammar. Plus, the poetry itself is WONDERFUL! PLease write more. You're a good poet. ^^
 
Midori Chi said:
Hmm..From what I can see, there doesn't seem to be any errors in spelling or grammar. Plus, the poetry itself is WONDERFUL! PLease write more. You're a good poet. ^^
I did do this poem i'll be posting in the weekend..its about ..someone who misses her mother..
The title is ~mom~
 
~Mom ~

Tonight i've realized that you're gone
Although I always really knew it
T tried to deny it everytime
Because I never wanted you to go, mom....

You're not being has made things different
I've realized that having you around was great
And that I miss you so much

After time passed by
I've prayed for you to come back
Mom I want you to know how much I love you

I've realize that the love of a mom is needed in my life
Oh, how I wish for you to be here
To see all i've accomplished

In my life today i've dome well
And I wish you were here to seeFor everything i've done is for you

Mom I wish to see you
Your eyes
Your hair
Your smile

I want to smell the frangrant of your perfume
Which i've gotten used to smell
Although I see eyes, hair, and smile of mothers
No one can compare to yours......
 
yeah its so good.
Oh, got 2 go school time.
 
thanks little sisters.
Im working on one about the moon.
 
The moon? Cool sister!^^
I cant wait.
 
heres a really short one but its just while I make a real one

Rain Above

The coldness of a drop
Is the sadness from inside
The feeling you feel when something bad is happening

The clouds turn black
Almost as when our hearts turrn dark
But all of this in my eyes is just one but confution

Rain Above comes down on us
And changes everything around
The trees move, the flowers bloom
But is the rain above truely good?

I guess as long as my hert wonders I shall never figure it out
But thats okay with me
The rain above shall guide me though...
 
hahaha!!TT
Welcome...heheh..its so funny.....i'll tell you later phantom>< hhehehe...............
but welcome..hehehe...............
 
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