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Alright, here's what I have for a Pokemon fanfic...don't spaz on me if it's awful, for this is my first stab at writing Pokemon. I welcome criticism though. Anything to make my writing better. ^.^ So...that's all I have to say...here it is...
<3
Sparky07
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Chapter One:
The night droned on, black, cool, perfect for the task that was at hand. A girl crouched in the brush, dressed in a black t-shirt with a pale bluish-gray unzipped hoodie over it and baggy black pants that fell over worn tennis shoes. Her face was hidden in the shadows of night as she sat still and unmoving, watching a large dome building that sat among the thick trees of forest. A yellow Pokemon softly sneezed beside her and the girl moved ever so slightly, glancing down at the Pikachu as though to silently say 'bless you'.
A siren sounded in the distance. The girl's head snapped back up and her Pokemon's ears twitched with annoyance to the high pitched sound. The Pikachu darted up to perch on top of its trainer's brown ponytail, staring out through the trees at the dome building as a line of odd looking cars proceeded from a large door that had opened seconds before. There were three of the machines, and they scattered, two moving off to the left and right of where the girl and Pikachu were crouching, one heading straight for them.
The girl swallowed and stood up, biting her lip and looking around frantically for a place to hide. Somewhere, anywhere. The Pikachu on her head leapt from its trainer and motioned to a nearby tree before scrambling up into the branches and disappearing into the leaves. The girl hesitated, but only for a moment before following her Pokemon and sitting on a low branch, drawing her knees up to her face and making herself as small as possible.
The car stopped below the tree. The girl held her breath, closing her eyes and hoping that her Pikachu had enough sense to stay still until they left. Two men and a woman dressed in blue uniforms stepped from the car and looked around for a few moments, shining flashlights in every direction. "Hey Lil, come over here for a sec," one of the men said, bending down and picking up something that was on the ground before straightening and holding the item out to the female thug.
"What is it?" She turned and snatched the object from the man with impatience, examining it in the crude light radiating from the crescent moon. "Give me a flashlight...there." The girl in the trees swallowed again and touched the top of her head where a blue bandana used to sit. There was only tousled brown hair to be felt by her trembling fingers. "Heh...it's the little girl's bandana. Not like she'll be needing it anymore..." The woman turned to the two men who were standing behind her.
"She can't be far, Miss," one of the men said, hesitantly, almost timidly. The woman nodded in agreement.
"Search the area." The two men pulled Pokeballs from their pocket and threw them into the air simultaneously, a Poochyena and Mightyena appearing in front of them. They darted off in separate directions, growls soon fading away into the night. The two men followed their Pokemon and the woman also left the place where the girl was hunched in the tree with her Pikachu. After a few moments of silence, the girl could feel her Pokemon slide down the tree onto her head and she let out a slow breath, lowering her legs and sitting with them crossed in front of her body.
"I don't think they're gone yet, Sparky," the girl whispered to the Pikachu as it relocated itself into her lap. She wrapped the yellow Pokemon in her arms and looked out across the dark forest. Soon the sun would rise and she would surely be found out. The Pikachu shivered slightly in her arms and she gave it a quick squeeze. There was a rustle in the trees next to them and the girl took in a sharp breath, turning to look into the thick leaves and praying that it was only the wind.
A black Pokemon launched itself at the girl, nearly knocking her from the tree. The Pikachu leapt from her arms and perched on a higher branch, cheeks sparking angrily as its trainer hoisted herself back onto the branch with difficulty. The Mightyena growled below the girl and leapt into the tree, landing next to where she was sitting, rubbing her scratched and bruised cheek. "Sparky, give it a Thundershock," she said through clenched teeth.
"Pika!" The yellow Pokemon gladly obeyed and sent a blast of electricity spiraling toward the black mass that was the Mightyena. The dog-like creature howled and fell off the branch, landing on the ground with a satisfying thud. The girl slid from the tree and stood over it with a smug smile on her face, her Pikachu leaping from its perch and sitting on her shoulder, bluish-brown eyes filled with anger and hatred.
"Poochyena, Tackle." A gray ball of fur slammed into the girl and her yellow Pokemon, knocking them off their feet. The two men and single woman stepped from the trees with smirks plastered across their faces.
"I think you dropped this," the woman said, dropping the girl's bandana at her feet.
"Gee, thanks..." The Poochyena standing on her stomach growled. "Get off me you flea bitten-" She tried to push the Pokemon away, but it stood its ground, nipping at her hands aggressively.
"Where's your little side kick?" The woman continued on, ignoring her comments.
"On vacation in the Kanto Region." The Poochyena bit her arm when she tried once again to push it away, and she kicked it off of her, biting her lip and wincing in pain.
"I always knew your reckless and stubborn attitude would get yourself into trouble one of these days," the man whose Pokemon was the Mightyena sneered. The girl shot a vicious glance at him.
"If you were half as smart as you act, maybe the Boss would give you a rank in this organization," she retorted. The look in the man's eyes showed very clearly how much he wanted to slap her senseless, but he made no move under the icy stare of the woman thug that was standing in front of him.
"That's enough chatter. Give us the Pikachu and we'll consider letting you go."
"Ppth...like I would give you Sparky?"
"Whatever you call it!" The woman was losing patience and her voice rose in pitch. "I don't care what its name is! Give it to us!" A huge electric shock hit the three uniformed persons and the girl seized the moment to stand up and bolt away into the trees, her Pikachu running close behind. "Don't just sit there! After her!" the woman yelled frantically, heaving herself to her feet and staggering over to the car. "That little traitor isn't going to get away."
<3
Sparky07
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~*~Dark Memories~*~
PG13 Action/Adventure
PG13 Action/Adventure
Chapter One:
The night droned on, black, cool, perfect for the task that was at hand. A girl crouched in the brush, dressed in a black t-shirt with a pale bluish-gray unzipped hoodie over it and baggy black pants that fell over worn tennis shoes. Her face was hidden in the shadows of night as she sat still and unmoving, watching a large dome building that sat among the thick trees of forest. A yellow Pokemon softly sneezed beside her and the girl moved ever so slightly, glancing down at the Pikachu as though to silently say 'bless you'.
A siren sounded in the distance. The girl's head snapped back up and her Pokemon's ears twitched with annoyance to the high pitched sound. The Pikachu darted up to perch on top of its trainer's brown ponytail, staring out through the trees at the dome building as a line of odd looking cars proceeded from a large door that had opened seconds before. There were three of the machines, and they scattered, two moving off to the left and right of where the girl and Pikachu were crouching, one heading straight for them.
The girl swallowed and stood up, biting her lip and looking around frantically for a place to hide. Somewhere, anywhere. The Pikachu on her head leapt from its trainer and motioned to a nearby tree before scrambling up into the branches and disappearing into the leaves. The girl hesitated, but only for a moment before following her Pokemon and sitting on a low branch, drawing her knees up to her face and making herself as small as possible.
The car stopped below the tree. The girl held her breath, closing her eyes and hoping that her Pikachu had enough sense to stay still until they left. Two men and a woman dressed in blue uniforms stepped from the car and looked around for a few moments, shining flashlights in every direction. "Hey Lil, come over here for a sec," one of the men said, bending down and picking up something that was on the ground before straightening and holding the item out to the female thug.
"What is it?" She turned and snatched the object from the man with impatience, examining it in the crude light radiating from the crescent moon. "Give me a flashlight...there." The girl in the trees swallowed again and touched the top of her head where a blue bandana used to sit. There was only tousled brown hair to be felt by her trembling fingers. "Heh...it's the little girl's bandana. Not like she'll be needing it anymore..." The woman turned to the two men who were standing behind her.
"She can't be far, Miss," one of the men said, hesitantly, almost timidly. The woman nodded in agreement.
"Search the area." The two men pulled Pokeballs from their pocket and threw them into the air simultaneously, a Poochyena and Mightyena appearing in front of them. They darted off in separate directions, growls soon fading away into the night. The two men followed their Pokemon and the woman also left the place where the girl was hunched in the tree with her Pikachu. After a few moments of silence, the girl could feel her Pokemon slide down the tree onto her head and she let out a slow breath, lowering her legs and sitting with them crossed in front of her body.
"I don't think they're gone yet, Sparky," the girl whispered to the Pikachu as it relocated itself into her lap. She wrapped the yellow Pokemon in her arms and looked out across the dark forest. Soon the sun would rise and she would surely be found out. The Pikachu shivered slightly in her arms and she gave it a quick squeeze. There was a rustle in the trees next to them and the girl took in a sharp breath, turning to look into the thick leaves and praying that it was only the wind.
A black Pokemon launched itself at the girl, nearly knocking her from the tree. The Pikachu leapt from her arms and perched on a higher branch, cheeks sparking angrily as its trainer hoisted herself back onto the branch with difficulty. The Mightyena growled below the girl and leapt into the tree, landing next to where she was sitting, rubbing her scratched and bruised cheek. "Sparky, give it a Thundershock," she said through clenched teeth.
"Pika!" The yellow Pokemon gladly obeyed and sent a blast of electricity spiraling toward the black mass that was the Mightyena. The dog-like creature howled and fell off the branch, landing on the ground with a satisfying thud. The girl slid from the tree and stood over it with a smug smile on her face, her Pikachu leaping from its perch and sitting on her shoulder, bluish-brown eyes filled with anger and hatred.
"Poochyena, Tackle." A gray ball of fur slammed into the girl and her yellow Pokemon, knocking them off their feet. The two men and single woman stepped from the trees with smirks plastered across their faces.
"I think you dropped this," the woman said, dropping the girl's bandana at her feet.
"Gee, thanks..." The Poochyena standing on her stomach growled. "Get off me you flea bitten-" She tried to push the Pokemon away, but it stood its ground, nipping at her hands aggressively.
"Where's your little side kick?" The woman continued on, ignoring her comments.
"On vacation in the Kanto Region." The Poochyena bit her arm when she tried once again to push it away, and she kicked it off of her, biting her lip and wincing in pain.
"I always knew your reckless and stubborn attitude would get yourself into trouble one of these days," the man whose Pokemon was the Mightyena sneered. The girl shot a vicious glance at him.
"If you were half as smart as you act, maybe the Boss would give you a rank in this organization," she retorted. The look in the man's eyes showed very clearly how much he wanted to slap her senseless, but he made no move under the icy stare of the woman thug that was standing in front of him.
"That's enough chatter. Give us the Pikachu and we'll consider letting you go."
"Ppth...like I would give you Sparky?"
"Whatever you call it!" The woman was losing patience and her voice rose in pitch. "I don't care what its name is! Give it to us!" A huge electric shock hit the three uniformed persons and the girl seized the moment to stand up and bolt away into the trees, her Pikachu running close behind. "Don't just sit there! After her!" the woman yelled frantically, heaving herself to her feet and staggering over to the car. "That little traitor isn't going to get away."
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