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Darkness Before

Enix-Zae

1000 posts by 2020
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    well, here it is. I dont know if i should continue it, so tell me what you think.


    (btw, its slightly based on supevo if you know what that is :1)

    He looked down once again at the pokeball in his hand, walking slowly to the bare grounds ahead. His eyes still held the same dark momentum they had contained when he had begun his journey to be the best so many years ago. Following him from behind was his partner, clutching a pokeball in a similar manner. They looked very similar; both had long dark hair and eyes that were black. The main difference was their gender, so the only real way to tell them apart was from their figure, and the clothes they were wearing. They had traveled far, becoming the champion and runner up, respectively, in all three of the regions that they had visited. Kanto, Johto, Hoenn.

    ?Come on, let?s get this over with?

    The male let his pokeball fall to the ground. Releasing a larger than average, jet-black Pidgeot. The female copied him, also releasing an almost identical Pidgeot in front of her. They looked at each other and nodded. Boarding their pok?mon, they began to head to their next destination, the region of Magore.



    ?Hey, wake up!?

    Chris opened his eyes, wiping them of sleep. He knew who it was. He took a moment to remember his dream. He could recall seeing two people, they had an essence of power, or darkness, he couldn?t work it out. He looked over to his side at his clock. 11:43 AM.

    ?MOM? What are you doing? I should still be asleep right now! ITS NOT EVEN NOON!?

    His mother looked down at her son. She tried not to laugh but he looked so funny when he was angry and a smirk crept through.

    ?It seems there was a break in of some sort. It is assumed that Team Soul had broken into the lab next door, looking for something. Something they did not find. Some witnesses said that the grunts who did it mentioned heading towards the research archive two routes away?

    ?And how is that good??

    It was then that Chris?s mother realized that she was still smiling. She quickly wiped it off her face.

    ?Oh. Sorry. The professor there asked for you to do something related to it. You better hurry up.?

    Chris waited for his mother to leave the room, and then started to get dressed. He didn?t have many clothes so it was an easy choice to wear.

    ?Grey shirt, black pants. Seems ok for today?

    He slowly headed to the lab. He didn?t feel any rush, as it was probably just cleaning the damage that the professor had in mind. He looked at his watch. 11:56. The door to the lab still creaked like it had for the past three years, it was the small things like that, that caused Chris to hate the place.

    ?Late again, Chris? I guess you think I want you to help clean up??

    ?Yeah, why would today have any difference at all??

    ?Because I?m giving you your first pok?mon?

    ?WHAAAT??

    Chris was in shock. His parents had decided from an early age against him being a trainer, and the professor (I don?t think he told anyone his name?) knew that, but now he had a chance.

    ?I know your mother is against it, but your father said you were getting bored and lonely here in this small town, so we agreed as long as you check out the research archive first, you can have a pok?mon. You know what ones they are?

    Belid, a fire pok?mon, evolves to the powerful Metagon, one of the most sought after pok?mon in this region.
    Magid, an electric/grass hybrid, although it is a nightmare to water types, it is also powerful to many others.
    Penky, an ice/water hybrid, one of the cutest pok?mon in the region, also has a fair strength.

    Chris had thought of what one he would choose many times, and now he had the chance, he knew what one to get.

    ?I?ll choose??



    To be continued?
     
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    got me interested continue continue!
     
    You said it was a dream. o.o; Well, at least the main character thought it was a dream. n_n; *points*

    Chris opened his eyes, wiping them of sleep. He knew who it was. He took a moment to remember his dream. He could recall seeing two people, they had an essence of power, or darkness, he couldn?t work it out. He looked over to his side at his clock. 11:43 AM.
     
    He flew along the coast on a Jet black Pidgeot. His partner flew very close behind. They had finally found their stop, a small town in western Magore. They walked up to the pok?mon center and entered. No-one noticed them enter until they had reached the front desk.

    ?Hi, would you like me to hea??

    A fear swept across the nurse?s face. She had seen them compete at the Hoenn league, killing all of the competitor?s pok?mon, brutally. Their pok?mon were too strong, so the officials could do nothing but let him through, most of his opponents, apart from the ones who thought they were invincible, ended up quitting before the match had started. The male looked over at the nurse, his eyes being darker than usual.

    ?Just get it over with; I don?t want to create a scene here.?



    Chris walked along the route to the next town. His footsteps were light and he held his brand new pok?mon, still in its pok?ball, in his hand. In his pocket, 4 empty pok?balls. He wanted to catch a pok?mon, he had only ever seen the three starters , or the odd Culith that had entered the village, before. He scanned the bushes in a hope to find something. A rustle. He turned around to quick, and almost lost ground, but then he saw it. A small Furegal, the professor had told him it was the weakest pok?mon in existence, but he had also been told that if trained right, it can become the most powerful.

    ?FUUUUUUUUUR?

    The Furegal squeeled as it batted the pok?ball away with its strong tail.

    ?looks like im going to have to battle it. Its not THAT weak. Gooo POKEBALL!?

    His pokemon looked happy, and had a look of determination on its face.

    ?MAAAGI MAAGID!?

    ?were going to try and capture it, try using leach seed and tackle it down.?

    ?maaaag agiid?

    The Furegal tried to dodge the leach seed but was too slow, and eventually got hit by multiple tackles.

    ?FRAGAAAL?

    ?here we go?..?

    Beep?beep?beep?.BING







    ITS SHORT COZ IM LAZY!
     
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