Dark's Pixels

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    These are lulz. All of these were made in 2008 or earlier. They are atrocious.
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    A pixel over of Munchlax. I quite proud of it considering its my first in months.
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    This is a Raikou Pixel over I made for a hack, which died afterwards. -.-
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    Here are some trainers I made for an old game of mine, Pokemon Adventurite(THEYRE DISGUSTING):
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    My latest work, the Region of Tairo.
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    Since you probably won't be working again or fixing anything on your old work, I'll be commenting on your most recent work ... the Munchlax pixel-over. ^^

    Starting off, it's adorable! It's a good job considering it's your first in months, but a few things should be pointed out to you. First, the outlining around the ears needs a little bit of work, right now they don't look well. Second, the shading (particularly under the chin and below his arm) doesn't look realistic, so you might want to look a the official sprite to know what I mean. And finally, I guess that's it. xD
     
    'ello
    you know, i made something VERY similar to the first one. it's HUGE and FULL OF POKEMON, FAKEMON, and EVERYTHING YOU CAN IMAGINE! all wrapped up into a little paint program ^^
     
    Skittyseven said:
    'ello
    you know, i made something VERY similar to the first one. it's HUGE and FULL OF POKEMON, FAKEMON, and EVERYTHING YOU CAN IMAGINE! all wrapped up into a little paint program ^^
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    That's... very nice? Do you want a cookie? Why are you telling me this?

    Since you probably won't be working again or fixing anything on your old work, I'll be commenting on your most recent work ... the Munchlax pixel-over. ^^

    Starting off, it's adorable! It's a good job considering it's your first in months, but a few things should be pointed out to you. First, the outlining around the ears needs a little bit of work, right now they don't look well. Second, the shading (particularly under the chin and below his arm) doesn't look realistic, so you might want to look a the official sprite to know what I mean. And finally, I guess that's it. xD
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    Thanks, I'll do some work on it!
     
    Good to see another member from my generation back here again ^^

    Anyhow, Dots seemed to cover everything that sprung into my mind... and i mean EVERYTHING... it was eerie lol...

    anyhow, one thing that she didn't say (and it's just preference) is that your may want to use a lighter colored "transparent" color for munchlax... the magenta is really strong and overpowers your sprite... also, the padding on his foot seems too high up... his foot seems awkwardly twisted...

    but since munchy is your only new work... that's really all i got for you ^_^

    Till next time,

    Keep Spriting!
     
    Golden Corsola said:
    These are kinda "Beginner-ish".
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    You're criticism is kinda "beginner-ish".

    Seriously, if you have nothing helpful to say, go somewhere else. Please.

    Also, read, most of these (Infact all but the Munchlax sprite) Were made in 2008 or earlier.
     
    Alright, I did a region map for a Hack I'm starting. It's based partially off the "detailed" Sinnoh map, but the style is still somewhat unused before.

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    It's based off of my homeland, Ontario.

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    The region of Tairo was untouched by man for years. It was situated far south of Kanto, until 13 years after the events of R/G/B/Y. A large Earthquake struck the boundary of Johto/Kanto, causing Kanto to drift off the mainland and be it's own island. Slowly some of Kanto poked it's head into the legal boundaries of Tairo, at which point Tairo became quickly populated due to some of the rare, exotic Pokemon and the unpolluted land.
     
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    Hahah, Ontario! I recognised it right away! That's pretty good!
     
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