Day by Day...

[Burne Starcofski]

The poems in my sig, sorry for not being able to post it. But tell me, is it good?

 

[Finglonger]

er, not really the kind of poetry I generally enjoy. It really doesnt tell me anything, don't get me wrong its well written for what it is, but yeah thats about it. Don't let me discourage you,just because it wasnt in my tastes doesn't mean it's not good....and it doesn't mean that you can't keep wiritng, which I strongly reccomend btw

 

[Blaine]

The poem is very... Vague and hazy. It could be extended and cleaned up a bit. The "day" metaphor could be lengthened and not as frequently used. There isn't much to say other than that. I'm very sorry for my constructive criticism.

 

[Burne Starcofski]

No problem. Thanks for it actually. I guess my friends were right, my poetry stinks.

 

[Blaine]

Don't say that! Your poetry is just a diamond in the rough. Skill takes time to develop. Just do a bit of study of the masters and spend a bit more time and things will come to you. It will get easier and clearer. Really.