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Okay so me and my friend(her username is Usefulidiot) wrote this story Please tell me what you think and if they are good i will continue if not i will quit.
Chapter 1.
"Come on Claire we have to go now or we are gonna be late" I heard Marissa call up as I was slipping on a pair of glittery white heels to go with the skirt i had on.
My blond hair was curled and up.
I always thought of dying it brunette but decided against it. that was when Marissa kicked open my door and said "come on what is taking you so long we have to go, now!"
Marissa has always been impatiet since the day I met her 3 years ago.
That was when he came in through the door looking for his sister. He looked at Marissa and spoke,"There you are Marissa, look we have to go!" Her brother Chris leaned on the door looking bored and impatient.
I looked at him smiled and said "hey pretty boy" That was when i tripped and fell on him, I was so embaressed I wanted to cry."oh my god I'm so sorry" I said as I got off of him.
"Don't worry about it's fine" he said as he smiled at me then waked out the door.
"Come on already!" said Marissa trying to hold back laughter.
I was now getting in the backseat next to Chris I looked over to him and said "hey pretty boy where is your girlfriend?" But right after asking i looked away so he didn't notice how red was my face was at this point.
"She said age was going to meet us at the place" he said while looking through his phone.
I looked down that was when i relised i had tears going down my face. Was i jealous, now that can't be it i don't like him like that he is my best friends brother.
*no
I quickly wiped away the tears careful not to smudge my makeup
"Claire are you okay" He said while whipping a few more tears before kissing me. "What Are You Doing!" I heard Marissa yell as we puled apart.
*pulled
I looked at Marissa and quickly said "Nothing! We weren't doing anything!"
"Chris why would you kiss her you have a girlfriend!" I ran out of the car tears pouring down my face. I saw Chris trying to chase after me but Marissa was holding him back and yelling at me "Claire you better get running you ****!"
I ran as far as I could in heels until I sank to my knees and started crying again "GOD I'M SO STUPID! WHY DID I LET HIM KISS ME?!" I screamed
That was when i heard him calling my name. "Claire come here you don't have to run anymore" I got up and did the first thing i thought of i ran away from him. As i was crossing the road i didn't see a car speeding down the road I noticed it wasn't gonna stop.
I was then pushed out of the way by Chris and he got hit by the car.
Chapter 1.
"Come on Claire we have to go now or we are gonna be late" I heard Marissa call up as I was slipping on a pair of glittery white heels to go with the skirt i had on.
My blond hair was curled and up.
I always thought of dying it brunette but decided against it. that was when Marissa kicked open my door and said "come on what is taking you so long we have to go, now!"
Marissa has always been impatiet since the day I met her 3 years ago.
That was when he came in through the door looking for his sister. He looked at Marissa and spoke,"There you are Marissa, look we have to go!" Her brother Chris leaned on the door looking bored and impatient.
I looked at him smiled and said "hey pretty boy" That was when i tripped and fell on him, I was so embaressed I wanted to cry."oh my god I'm so sorry" I said as I got off of him.
"Don't worry about it's fine" he said as he smiled at me then waked out the door.
"Come on already!" said Marissa trying to hold back laughter.
I was now getting in the backseat next to Chris I looked over to him and said "hey pretty boy where is your girlfriend?" But right after asking i looked away so he didn't notice how red was my face was at this point.
"She said age was going to meet us at the place" he said while looking through his phone.
I looked down that was when i relised i had tears going down my face. Was i jealous, now that can't be it i don't like him like that he is my best friends brother.
*no
I quickly wiped away the tears careful not to smudge my makeup
"Claire are you okay" He said while whipping a few more tears before kissing me. "What Are You Doing!" I heard Marissa yell as we puled apart.
*pulled
I looked at Marissa and quickly said "Nothing! We weren't doing anything!"
"Chris why would you kiss her you have a girlfriend!" I ran out of the car tears pouring down my face. I saw Chris trying to chase after me but Marissa was holding him back and yelling at me "Claire you better get running you ****!"
I ran as far as I could in heels until I sank to my knees and started crying again "GOD I'M SO STUPID! WHY DID I LET HIM KISS ME?!" I screamed
That was when i heard him calling my name. "Claire come here you don't have to run anymore" I got up and did the first thing i thought of i ran away from him. As i was crossing the road i didn't see a car speeding down the road I noticed it wasn't gonna stop.
I was then pushed out of the way by Chris and he got hit by the car.