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Death [Pending Title ~ Rated R]

DarkCircuit

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    Death [Pending Title ~ Rated PG-17]

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    If you read this, can you just tell me what you think? I really don't care if it's "IT SUXXORED!" Because, it probably does >>; I don't want to read it. It's depressing.

    I honestly don't care if you critize it.
     
    Well i liked the way you blocked the curse words but older people can tell what they are like me. Please write more.
     
    angel said:
    Well i liked the way you blocked the curse words but older people can tell what they are like me. Please write more.
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    most cuss words are blocked automaticly.

    I liked it. The anger in it just made it interesting! makes me wanna listen to linkin park 'krwling'!
     
    Very abrupt opening, as well as an interesting ending. I like how you added cursewords to make an emphasis on the protagonist's anger. I can't really comment on this, otherwise from the fact that I want to see more. =3 (*ignores warning*)

    Great job! n____n
     
    Very interesting, if you ask me your story could use some more insight but keeping the read guessing is also important, you did a great job with this story, it could stand to use a little more originality but not bad at all.
     
    I actually got comments o.o; I switched back to this username [DarkCircuit and I are one and the same =D] so I thought this was still rotting with no comments >______>;

    This is the story that I hate the most out of any I've written ^0^ It's so depressing, and full of swearing... Looking back, I'm not sure where this came from, or why I was possesed into writing it x.x;

    But, at least you all liked it a little... There'll never be a follow up to this, it was a very short one-shot.

    What's rather interesting, is that I write horror mostly [Stephen King has taken control @@;] so I'm pretty used to writing in depressing death tones, but some how this story is more depressing than those. XD This is a random rant about me trying to figure out why I wrote this if you couldn't tell. Guess that'll go unanswered >.o;

    Thanks for reading everyone! ^0^
     
    I'm thinking of adding to this. ~.~

    Bear with me, I need to save this from death so I can add-
     
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